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Guest Richard Priapus

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Guest Richard Priapus

Salutations, internet perverts.
I am self-conscious of my writing and seek useful feedback to improve, but there’s nobody I know in my real life I feel quite comfortable sharing a stack of literary smut with.

Most helpful feedback/direction:
1. How to evoke more visceral sensory impressions
2. How to improve flow/characterization in dialog
3. Making sure my descriptions of physical motions are easy to follow/picture.
(Although obviously all useful feedback is still welcome.)

Preferences if possible to betas who share kinks for muscle, gender fuckery, and foot smut, as these are likely to recur in future stories.


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