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Hey CrossroadsMK2, 

What a great Christmas gift...and Merry Christmas right back at you and hope all has a prosperous New Year. 

You didn't disappoint.  I love how you give the details of all the characters, the equipment Sam used, the tribal men waiting and those who were occupied. I could almost smell Sam's nasty ass while hidden away in that hut. Hope she captured Lara giving the Idol to Sarah....then cleaning it off. 

The high priestess getting a good whiff and kissing it....fucking cracked me up too like Sam. The ending, the King got his revenge...that was cool.

Awesome read because you set the stage before, during and after Lara gets fucked.

Lead the Way!

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Hi LHunt, glad you liked the chapter. The rest of the story will be back at Croft (Green) Manor. A newly renovated basement with state-of-the-art sex dungeon, an all new all female staff to make Lara's life he'll, photo shoots with Sam to promote the Tomb Raider game to her fans (which she doesn't know is actually Onlyfans), and increasingly extreme Charity dinners (starting with a fancy dress them, where Lara will attend "dressed" as Lady Godiva).

 

Most of the future plot points have been decided. The only thing still up in the air is Lara's relationship with the new staff. Any feedback would be welcome as always.

 

What I'm thinking of doing is having an all Asian female staff - probably Vietnamese or Chinese. Sarah has chosen them specifically because of their looks - namely they all look nearly identical, and thanks to plastic surgery, they are completely indistinguishable from each other. Lara will be told to get her work assignment from maid 'X' but won't remember who that is. And when she finally makes a guess, it's always wrong. Then the maids berate her for being racist for thinking they all look the same, and stupid for not remembering her name.

 

Lara returns from Africa with a greatly increased sex drive, but aside from her morning fisting session with Sarah, she won't get any other sex until the afternoon sessions in the sex dungeon. This will keep Lara in an incredibly frustrated and horny state, and she'll be tempted to sneak off from her duties to relieve herself - but Sarah's renovations to Croft Manor include cameras hidden in all the rooms, so Lara always ends up getting caught masturbating by the maids and told off for being lazy slut, who can't stop masturbating long enough to finish her work. They'll also find fault in her her cleaning work, so she has to clean the same room multiple times, while the other maids scold her for being lazy, incompetent and useless.

 

All of this mind fuckery is to make Lara loathe her time with the maids, so that she comes to look forward to the afternoon sex dungeon sessions. Lara will also be inclined to volunteer for more photo sessions for the website, since Lara is allowed to have those days off, because Sam doesn't want her looking tired. As the photo shoots become steadily more risque and eventually include nudity, Lara will initially refuse - but a week stuck with the bitchy maids bossing her around and belittling her will see her reluctantly submitting to Sam's wishes.

 

I'm also considering demoting Lara to "foot attendant". Basically, she does such a shitty job as a maid, that she's told her time would be better spent assisting the other maids by massaging their sweaty feet at the end of each day. I think this might be even more humiliating for Lara than her maid duties, so might be perfect psychological manipulation to drive her further into Sarah's arms.  Let me know what you guys think.

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Hi Cross, the new chapter is great and hot. I like how Lara once again decided not to limit herself and decided to fuck the entire village, not even considering the age of the men she fucked. I also A LOT like how she fantasized about leaving her life behind, getting pregnant, and become village’s breeding bitch. Tbh I would like to see a happy ending where Sarah gives the choice and offers Lara to return to her normal life and all evidence of her naughty adventures would be destroyed, but the more Lara thinks about it, she will realize that she will come back to life she now consider boring and tiring with constant care of her title and status, she would again need to meet with people she doesn't even like, vs being free and living in mad pleasure for the rest of her days in an African village. After thought, she would decide that she want to leave her current life behind, she would remove all birth control, and return to the village, being daily fucked and knocked up every year, and giving birth to strong black warriors for the village. I don't expect this to be the end (unless you decide to write it or write more than one ending like you did with Natla's Revenge), but just something I thought about after reading the new chapter.

As for ideas for new chapters, I think I like ideas 2 and 4 the most, but they all sound good so I'll be happy with any of them.

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Hi Extreme, thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. The planned ending is for Lara to wind up with Sarah in a codependent relationship, and unknowingly working for Trinity. This has been Sarah's endgame from the start. That's why she's been systematically destroying Lara's other relationships, isolating her from her friends and acquaintances, and undermining her confidence and since of self-worth. It's all to convince Lara that she's nothing without Sarah and only life with Sarah can bring her happiness.

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Love the Asian staff twist-maybe one can fist Lara- being they look all identical to her-she’ll be asking again for fisting-and she’s always wrong with that too. I like her demotion as well. 

 

Lead the Way!

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Hi LHunt, no plans for the Asian staff to be involved in sex stuff - Lara will be getting plenty of action from 150 Charity members plus their wives (so 300 total), although I think I'll make fisting mostly a Sarah and Sam's thing, with most of the women opting for oversized strap-on dildos instead. I think if the new staff aren't involved, Lara will feel worse thinking that ordinary workers think she a lazy, stupid pervert. They will also create apprehension in Lara, by constantly telling her that she's leaching off Lady Sarah's goodwill, and that they don't understand why a fine upstanding woman like Lady Sarah puts up with a lowly deadbeat like her.

 

Hi Extreme, I'm planning to continue Voluntary Enslavement and switch back Bliss later, when either the story's finished or I'm having some writer's block and want to do something else for a break.

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Awesome plan of action. I was thinking along the lines of one befriend her, do something sexual, as she gets horny cause she keeps getting caught masterbating,  she gambles and gets it all fucked up like when getting her maid orders. But, no sexual involved staff works to..that would add increased sexual tension before her release in the dungeon. 

Awesome idea having them thinking of Lara as a pervert…

 

Lead the Way Sir!

 

 

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Merry Christmas guys!

Cross keeps delivering! I personally love when we hear what Lara thinks while she is being gangbanged and would encourage you to continue doing those descripions. I agree with Extreme that it was super hot how she fantasized about leaving her life behind, getting pregnant, and become village’s breeding bitch. Idea of breeding is cool, but I would not like it for her to get pregnant simply because she would need to cut down on vaginal sex :)

Looking forward to what is more to come!

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Merry Christmas everyone. ABigFan, you'll be pleased to know that I plan to focus a lot on Lara's internal monologue - to show the gradual changes to her thoughts and personality that Sarah's psychological manipulation causes over time. I've never been a fan of stories where on minute the protagonist is a prude and then suddenly turns into a whore. It always feels fake and forced - there needs to be a plausible journey to get there.

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Cross that is a wonderful news! I agree with you completely. love the transformation process and final result :)

Extreme, I have no doubts you are right, guess it is just a psychological thing for me :D

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