CrossroadsMk2 Posted October 27, 2023 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2023 Hi Extreme, if I do your suggestion, I'll think I'll need to have a second gangbang. First one is forced in England, and then maybe a second one where Lara does it to herself. Example: she's in Central America searching for an artifact for Reiss and comes across an impoverished village. She knows she should move on, but she can't stop thinking about how incredible the last homeless gangbang felt. So she strips naked, hides her gear in some bushes, injects herself with Bliss and walks down into the settlement. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extreme Posted October 27, 2023 Report Share Posted October 27, 2023 I think it sounds good, but ofc it's up to you what you decide to do Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ABigFan Posted October 29, 2023 Report Share Posted October 29, 2023 Hello CrossroadsMk2, I finally got the chance to read the story and it is moving in the great direction! Love the ending when Lara is willfully asking for the Bliss. Looking forward to the continuation of the story. You never cease to amaze Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted October 29, 2023 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2023 Hi ABigFan, thanks for the positive review and I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ABigFan Posted October 30, 2023 Report Share Posted October 30, 2023 Hello CrossroadsMk2, I like the idea of a second gangbang. Hopefully they see them as some native tribe, it would be cool if they are isolated so they are almost unaware of outter world and get both afraid and amazed by Lara’s hotness. Additional idea, if they are native tribe, they could have horses and other animals that Lara can have sex with as her decline further in depravity. Suck horse, lick balls and ass, etc. I know it is extreme, but point is that she is almost gone too deep down depravity so it basically becomes some sort of competition with herself, how more depraved she can become. It is up to you to decide of course. Personally I love when she is dressed classy, love the idea with the most expensive cocktail dress and expensive high heels. Love how in the second part she “took one for the team” in the way that she “sacrificed” herself to save Winston’s niece… Thanks again for the great work and we all love Lara! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest GhostOfCovid Posted November 14, 2023 Report Share Posted November 14, 2023 loving this new story just wondering is it only going to be 3 chapters like your last short story ??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted November 14, 2023 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2023 Hi GhostOfCovid, at least 3 but maybe 4, depending on how the writing goes. However, after starting the third chapter, I felt inspired to return to Voluntary Enslavement. I'm currently finishing part 2 of the African Gangbang and will return to Tomb Raider Bliss later. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extreme Posted November 14, 2023 Report Share Posted November 14, 2023 Hi Cross African Gangbang Part 1 was my favorite chapter of Voluntary Enslavement so far and it ended with a lot of potential for Part 2, so I'm really curious to see what happens next. Impossible to go wrong with your stories, we'll have more of our favorite high born respectable english countess whoring herself with an African tribe (and being turned on by it), and then her being addicted to drugs and fucking ugly and dirty hobos for fun and being also turned on by it. Alot of fun and hot stuff there will be. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted November 15, 2023 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2023 Hi Extreme, thanks for the vote of confidence. I'll try to make it entertaining. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Donkingkong Posted November 16, 2023 Report Share Posted November 16, 2023 Hi cross . Hope you're doing awesome. I finally got time to read the chapter and I found it great . I'd like to give my 2 cents to it as a reader . I felt this staff arc is already done before . Also she surrendered too openly without a fight. I would have preferred she got into insatiable symptoms of horniness and hormones before surrendering. But my gut says the Rest of chapter fall in places like a perfect puzzle. But regardless I had a great time reading the chapter. Thank you again for you time and effort. Take care. Ps-check mail Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted November 17, 2023 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2023 Hi Donkingkong, chapter 3 will move on from the staff and start bringing in others to date Lara's insatiable sexual appetite, as her addiction grows. Don't worry though- Lara isn't out of tricks and won't go down without a fight. I'll also be explaining more about her struggles with her addiction and what she's going through. However, for the moment I'm switching back to writing Voluntary Enslavement. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted November 18, 2023 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2023 Hi everyone, just after your thoughts on a question that's come up in Voluntary Enslavement: Should the Idol of Hathor have any powers in this story? I wouldn't make it as powerful as the version in the previous Idol of Hathor story - it wouldn't compel Lara to do anything or make her lose control of her body like in that story. I'd see it more as making Lara feel the excitement and lust of who she's with etc. I could see it fitting in well with the story - Sarah deliberately choosing the Idol for Lara to recover, because she knows it's powers and wants it to slowly corrupt her. However, going down this path might detract from the psychological manipulation line - and I don't want this to just be too close to the other storyline. So, what do you guys think? Magical or non-magical Idol of Hathor? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extreme Posted November 18, 2023 Report Share Posted November 18, 2023 (edited) I would have preferred non-magical and continue psychological manipulation instead, so either she would be conditioned or that manipulation would awake her horny, slutty side, which I think fits with what we already have, since part one is that she had fantasies about prostitution, especially with African tribes and she now fulfills her fantasies. Edited November 18, 2023 by Extreme Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted November 18, 2023 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2023 Hi Extreme - yeah, that makes sense. I tend to agree with your points. Thanks for the quick response. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted November 18, 2023 Report Share Posted November 18, 2023 I agree with Extreme...non-magical. The tribe can think otherwise, but the royals know Sarah had this planned out knowing Lara's fantasies. Lead the Way! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ABigFan Posted November 18, 2023 Report Share Posted November 18, 2023 One more vote for non-magical. Exploring psychological manipulation should be the center piece of this story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted November 18, 2023 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2023 Thanks LHunt and ABigFan - I'll go with non-magical. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest GhostOfCovid Posted November 18, 2023 Report Share Posted November 18, 2023 i like that its non-magical but if u really wanted to use the idol u can say the idol is coated in ancient herbs or is made of a special material which makes her horny but nothing more than that as to keep it more psychological than magical Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted November 19, 2023 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2023 Hi GhostOfCovid, I think I'll just make it all in Lara's head. She's been put in a situation where she can fulfil her darkest, dirtiest fantasy and (as far as she knows) no one will ever find out about it. Combined with her rationalising it as not being her fault (Sarah's forcing her to do it. She'd never do anything like this on her own, wink wink), I think that's all it'll take to have her act like girls gone wild on a spring break bender. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest GhostOfCovid Posted December 3, 2023 Report Share Posted December 3, 2023 hi just wondering about your progress can’t wait for the next update of course no rush as a love how long your chapters are and i can see that they have been proof read Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted December 4, 2023 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2023 (edited) Hi GhostOfCovid, I'm about 2/3 of the way through the next chapter. I've been very time poor lately and probably won't have time to do anything this week, but I've got some days off next week where I'll try to get it finished. Edited December 4, 2023 by CrossroadsMk2 Typo MorbidFantasy 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MorbidFantasy Posted December 4, 2023 Report Share Posted December 4, 2023 23 hours ago, CrossroadsMk2 said: Hi GhostOfCovid, I'm about 2/3 of the way through the next chapter. I've been very time poor lately and probably won't have time to do anything this week, but I've got some days off next week where I'll try to get it finished. Story of my life. Anonnox 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LHunt Posted December 9, 2023 Report Share Posted December 9, 2023 Hey CrossroadsMK2, Can't wait for the release of Africa Part 2. I'm sure it's going to be as great as the previous chapter. Looking forward to when Lara gets back to the manor, so she has to endure the humiliation from Sarah's guests. Also, anxious to see what Sam has planned as she slowly uncovers Lara's slutty secrets. Lead the Way! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted December 10, 2023 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2023 Thanks for the encouragement LHunt. I'll try not to disappoint. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrossroadsMk2 Posted December 14, 2023 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2023 Hi everyone, just a quick update. Chapter 14 is finished. I'll hopefully get time to proofread it over the weekend and then post it after that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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