CrossroadsMk2 Posted June 1 Author Report Posted June 1 1 vote for business women Hi LHunt, thanks for voting. Whichever ends up winning, I'll be going for a new money / old money dynamic. Women who were excluded from high society because they didn't go to the right school or have the right surname, sick of being looked down on and now able to take their frustrations out on a member of the aristocracy. And Lara, because of her posh upbringing, will feel that serving them is beneath her, which will add to her humiliation. Quote
Guest setV Posted Friday at 12:29 AM Report Posted Friday at 12:29 AM Cross, great to see you are back. New chapter was excellent, love what you are building towards! My vote is for business women. I don’t think you have explored that dynamic in your other stories so it will keep things fresh. Will this be the start of Lara’s realization of what she has become or will she still be in the normalization bubble? Either way looking forward to the next chapter. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted Friday at 09:34 AM Author Report Posted Friday at 09:34 AM Thanks for the vote SetV. No realisation yet - Lara's like a college kid on spring break, stuck in a fog of sexual gratification that she has convinced herself will not have lasting consequences for her life. 2 votes for business women. Quote
Guest Ibex Posted Friday at 08:43 PM Report Posted Friday at 08:43 PM Hey Crossroads, it was great to read a new chapter from you again! Looking forward to what comes next. I also vote for business women. Question, is Sarah planning to eventually get Lara to marry her or are her goals slightly different? Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted Saturday at 09:34 AM Author Report Posted Saturday at 09:34 AM (edited) Hi Ibex, thanks for the vote. The plan for the final chapter will be a "12-months later" chapter, showing Lara's life a year out from the end of her slave contract. It will probably show Lara and Sarah engaged but not married yet. Lara will have tried to go her own way, but she's too addicted to the excitement and drama that Sarah brings into her life (basically setting Sarah up as Lara's bad boy ex - she's knows it's an unhealthy relationship, but she keeps going back to it). 3 votes for business women. I think we have a winner. Edited Saturday at 09:35 AM by CrossroadsMk2 Quote
Guest ABigFan Posted Sunday at 07:23 PM Report Posted Sunday at 07:23 PM Hello Cross, I thoroughly enjoyed the latest chapter. I am afraid to say it, but it seems that the bigger pause between chapters you take the better the writting Loved the introduction of BigDaddy character. I thought you would save him for Bliss story but inclusion here was perfect. Loved the dynamic between them, Lara sub, then her taking control, his anger and frustration and later on he again taking control only for Lara to finish on top of it all. What a rollercoaster of emotions and power dynamics! I love the idea of business woman. Hoping they will be in some nice pants, jackets and elegant high heels. Looking forward to next chapter. Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted Monday at 09:13 PM Author Report Posted Monday at 09:13 PM (edited) Hi ABigFan, glad you enjoyed the last chapter. The plan for the business women is that they will be enjoying a session at a luxury country club or day spa - pedicures, manicures etc and then Lara comes in to provide foot massages and happy endings - so I'm planning a relaxing bathrobe and champagne sort of setting for the business women (they work hard and deserve to treat themselves), rather than a boardroom with suits and high heels. Plus I feel like a boardroom would be more indicative of female executives, rather than business women. Edited Monday at 11:59 PM by CrossroadsMk2 Quote
Guest Lara Crass Posted 22 hours ago Report Posted 22 hours ago Is there any plan to have Lara experience a real horse or other beasts? And/or get beast themed tattoos? Quote
CrossroadsMk2 Posted 14 hours ago Author Report Posted 14 hours ago Hi Lara Crass - not in this story. There will be a dog and pony show for Lara in Tomb Raider Bliss, but nothing like that planned for Voluntary Enslavement. Quote
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