No Rest for the Wicked

[Harboe]

Hi, I've just gotten started on a Dexter Fanfiction and I'm looking for some feedback so if you've got the time to spare, then please take a little while to read the few chapters I have thus far and e-mail me a review.

Title: No Rest for the Wicked

Author: Philip Harboe

Summary: Set immediately after Season 2, Dexter returns to Miami and tries to return to his "normal" life. Unfortunately, things are starting to happen.

Rating: Adult.

Pairings: None, thus far.

Spoilers: Season 1, Season 2, Darkly Dreaming Dexter (book), Dearly Devoted Dexter (book).

Feedback: Desired greatly.

URL: http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no...4&chapter=1

Looking forward to your ideas!

[Harboe]

Chapter 6 is up and I'm still really looking for feedback, ideas or suggestions on how to improve my style of writing (and the story itself, for that matter)!