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Author: Wilde_Guess
Title: Riding the Lincoln Way
Summary:  Danny Dvorak is a 14 year old Harley fanboy and honors student getting ready to start Lincoln Way Central High School in New Lenox, Illinois, in the summer of 1982. He has silver eyes, a silver tongue, and his issues have issues. His almost 14 year old brother and classmate has turned from closest friend to something else entirely. His new girlfriend has more issues than he does, and her younger sister is dating his younger brother. Will Danny make it through adolescence and High School without getting bad grades, a haircut, or the spanking of a lifetime?  The story is currently ‘slow-paced’ because a lot of things are happening around Danny.  The pace will pick up.
Feedback: Feedback and constructive criticism much appreciated.
Fandom: Original
Pairing: N/A
Warnings: Abuse Anal Bi HJ  HC Inc MF MiCD Minor1 Minor2 MM Oral Rim Solo Spank

Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered story, 12 of ??
URL:  http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108829

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Here’s a sneak preview from a near but not next future chapter.

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Michael looked sternly at Debbie, who replied with “He told me ages ago, Michael.  You know what a jealous bitch I am, and you haven’t seen me freak out on him, have you?”

Michael stood up, hugged her, and gave her a ‘heavy-R’ kiss which she returned. 

He told her, “You aren’t a bitch, and never will be.”

She asked in return, “You said nothing about jealous?”

He quipped, “Because I won’t lie to you.  You are getting better, kinda…”

She huffed, and they kissed again

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Here’s a preview from Chapter 34.

 

‘Fuck my life again!’ I thought to myself.  I never completely stopped loving Stacy Cook even if I would never completely trust her ever again.  And I was beginning to think that Uncle Rick was okay even if he fucked up badly a few times around when I was conceived and born.  But, their current take on ‘civility’ left me beyond speechless.

 

I had to intervene, and rather dramatically seeing who I was to the pair of them biologically, to keep them from destroying each other’s lives along with my five siblings and me on my own front lawn.  I only asked them for civility.  Yet somehow, the two of them decided that while civility was nice, that fucking like rabbits was even better?  And Stacy Cook couldn’t possibly have forgotten how light a sleeper Paul was in the months since she last shagged Kopchek, could she?  And if she hadn’t started taking her “vitamin stork-killer” again, her last period ended fifteen days before Wednesday night.  My body remembered her menstrual cycles because I never caught an even break when she was on them. 

 

I guessed that I was about to find out as Uncle Rick backed Dad’s demonstrator Fleetwood out onto the street to follow Dad to Joliet for the wedding that hopefully wouldn’t get fucked up at the last minute.  I was sitting up front next to Uncle Rick.  Aaron and Paul were both sitting quietly in back, wearing their seat belts without complaint.

 

With no better ideas on how to handle things, I decided for the “direct route,” starting with Uncle Rick.

 

“Uncle Rick, whose idea was Stacy Cook’s living and sleeping arrangements Wednesday and Thursday evening? And yes, it is my business, though not necessarily for the reason you think I think.  Well?”

 

While still paying attention to the road, he breathed deeply before answering, “It was hers, though I was happy to go along with it.”

 

I watched his face as he answered, since unlike him I wasn’t driving.  He was being completely honest.

 

I asked him, “How do you feel about raising children?”

 

I could see Uncle Rick blush as deeply as I ever had myself before he answered me.

 

“You know how your dad and ‘Miss Cook,’ and how Saria and you decided as quickly as you did who you planned on spending the rest of your lives with, including having and raising children?  Stacy and I decided the same thing just about as quickly.  If we do change our minds someday, which neither one of us ever plans on doing, we won’t cause anyone any problems with it.  And I didn’t believe Stacy when she told me you memorized her menstrual cycles.  We weren’t ‘trying’ for anything, but we weren’t even a little bit careful about ‘not trying,’ either.  If she and I have children together, we’ll have and raise them well together along with the three she still has now whenever they happen to show up.”

 

I continued watching his face.  Whatever the hell Stacy Cook was thinking, Uncle Rick at least was completely on the level.

 

I told him, “Fair enough, Uncle Rick.  Congratulations, if those are in order.  And please remind Stacy Cook that all of her children, present and future, are under my protection, and I am under the Dragon’s protection.  Even the Queen of Thorns had thought better than to disturb the Dragon’s tranquility.  Otherwise, if things go bad, it’s ‘not my monkey, and not my circus.’”

 

Paul decided to remind us that there were four people in the car by asking, “Rick is nice enough, David.  But why should Aaron and me let him be in our lives when you won’t take him back?

 

I turned around and looked at my two younger half-brothers.  Both of them were completely awake and hanging onto every word I was about to say to answer Paul’s question.  So, I told them...

 

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Reduced post to 33 lines of text to comply with Moderator request.
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I’m unfortunately going to have to ask you to reduce the amount of story content in the above post. We can’t allow story content in the forums, due to disclaimer and copyright issues. 

But, because of the archives being down, we will allow story content of up to 35 lines (instead of the usual 10 lines) of text. That means lines of text, so if a sentence needs a line or two extra to finish then that’s fine. 

So, please reduce the story content above to within that limit. 

Willow Darkling, forum moderator. 

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Thank you for that.

We had to implement the 10 line rule in the Requests and Challenges forum, because of the disclaimer and copyright issues, but haven’t really needed to enforce it elsewhere. 

But I figured that little previews could be allowed while we’re in Read only mode. 

I’ll have to add that rule to the Forum TOS eventually. 

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On 1/17/2023 at 9:32 AM, WillowDarkling said:

I’m unfortunately going to have to ask you to reduce the amount of story content in the above post. We can’t allow story content in the forums, due to disclaimer and copyright issues. 

But, because of the archives being down, we will allow story content of up to 35 lines (instead of the usual 10 lines) of text. That means lines of text, so if a sentence needs a line or two extra to finish then that’s fine. 

So, please reduce the story content above to within that limit. 

Willow Darkling, forum moderator. 


I wasn’t aware that we could post previews of the story in the forum posts.

So it’s traditionally 10 lines? Is there an explanation of what constitutes a line?

I ask because I tend to like to start my stories with short declarative statements and then context creating paragraphs. Does it have to be from the beginning or anywhere in the story?

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We don’t allow previews generally. The ten line rule was implemented for the Challenges and Requests forum, because we had a bout of users posting “examples” or parts of whole chapters for the challenges they were issuing or writing for. And by line I generally mean the amount of text that fits in the text box from left to right. As in, the text that I have put here so far is now “two lines and a half”. 

But I decided to allow for the time being, while we are still in Read Only mode, previews in the Promote a Story forum as well, with the cut off being 35 lines. This was only allowed to let our users give their readers something to look forward to, really, while we are waiting for the Archives to be back up and running. 

As soon as users can start posting on the Archives again, I will disallow story content in the Forums again. 

And story content is not allowed anywhere else in the forum, save for those ten lines in the C&R forum. 

And it can be from wherever you want, beginning, middle or end of your story. Just think of it as a teaser trailer, if that makes sense. Just anything you want that you think might make your readers happy, or keep them excited for the rest of your writing. 

Willow Darkling, forum moderator. 

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