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Yaoi- BoyxBoy, more tags later

This idea has been rocking around in my head for a while. I don’t have the ability to write it my self but it is too interesting of an idea to let fade away, hopefully one of you can do something with it.

We all know (well if you have seen The Last: Naruto the Movie anyway) that Toneri wanted a bride and chose Hinata due to her having Hamura’s chakra but what if a different decendent of Kaguya caught his eye?

In this world, Toneri chooses Naruto to be his bride. It can start either just before the Sasuke retrieval mission, during the training trip or just after he returns to Konoha three years later.

Basic Plot: Story begins with Toneri watching Naruto from the moon with him growing ever more infatuated as time goes by. the culmination of this is an argument or revelation that plants a seed of doubt in Naruto’s mind. This could be anything you wish but a few suggestions that i have are:

An argument with a teammate (be it Sasuke, Sakura or Kakashi etc.) about Naruto’s own self worth. 

A drunk Tsunade/Jiraiya revealing they have some level of resentment for him (NOT hate, just resentment at the fact that Naruto lived whist his parents died)

Him accidently finding out his family is actually still alive and willingly left him to the wolves so they could live a happy life. (You could add something about a twin but that’s just me.)

your choice really but this traumatic event must happen as it kicks off the plot and it comes back later.

One night he (Toneri) sends some of his puppets to retrieve the blonde against his will, resulting in a fight that whoever is with him at the time (Jiraiya, Kakashi, Sasuke etc.) failed to stop. Naruto is brought before the older teen (if pre Sasuke retrieval mission then Naruto is 13, if not he is 15-16) in his castle on the moon. Toneri is perpetually 19 in this fic due to him being sustained by the Tenseigan Energy Vessel on the moon (look it up on the wiki if you need reference) Toneri makes it clear from the start that he intends to make Naruto his bride, much to the latter’s anger (Naruto has his Chakra sealed so he can’t fight back) At First Toneri decides to try the soft aproach but grows increasingly frustrated with Naruto’s constant refusals; in a moment of anger he rapes Naruto before leaving the blonde to stew.

He hands Naruto off to his chief female puppet who organised the household on the moon (again if you have seen the movie then you know of the puppet i speak of. it’s the one that accompanies Toneri and Hinata to the Tenseigan Shrine) with the order to train Naruto in his “Wifely duty's”. this consists of brutal training in female sexual techniques with the puppet acting as the mistress. as well as etticute etc. 

Over time Naruto begins to grow more and more submissive as Stockholm syndrome starts to set in, the seed of doubt from earlier begins to bear fruit as he starts to wounder why should he go back to people who despise him. Naruto’s body begins to be modified as the weeks stretch into months and years. his skin starts to pale to a milky shade of white and he grows more feminine in appearance, developing breasts, reduced penis size and an anus that secrets slick when aroused as opposed to getting hard. his short spiky blonde hair slowly looses it’s spikynes and lengthens till it touches his ankles, losing its color to become white.

He is forced to wear a traditional white Otsutsuki woman’s kimono (for reference click http://pre08.deviantart.net/949e/th/pre/f/2016/136/4/a/otsutsuki_kaguya_by_vit_zerack-da2oh1n.png) and dark red/black lipstick and other forms of makeup and jewellery. his diet changes to the point where his body physically rejects Ramen and is forced to eat traditional Japanese food (sometimes with a healthy serving of his husband to be’s cum on top)

At the one year mark Toneri and the rest of the puppets begin to refer to Naruto as a she and it sticks as Naruto has grown attached to Toneri. romantic feelings develop for the now sadistic Outsusuki and Naruto puts her beautiful shemale body to work. They get along but they also have arguments with Toneri dishing out truly vicious punishments. after the two year mark the two marry and work to conceive their first child with Naruto falling pregnant half a year later. 

From here you can decide where the story go’s. you could have the Akatsuki coming for the Jinchuriki and Toneri is forced to defend his wife, or Konoha wanting it’s Jinchuriki back or Kumo/Iwa wanting to acquire a missing Jinchuriki. Even a returned Namikaze family fighting to get their son back and an angry Toneri who wishes to punish those who hurt his wife in the past.

(Kinks)

Yaoi-Naruto/Toneri (even though Naruto’s body eventually becomes Psudo shemale)

Femdom- The doll that is Naruto’s Mistress constantly seaks to “Refine her charge’s technique” with brutal sexual training, you could make some of the dolls Futa to help Naruto “Practice”

Submissive Naruto: While at first he is a fire cracker he slowly becomes a submissive boy who’s only desire his to make her husband happy. If Toneri ordered him to be raped by all the dolls at once then he would do it.

feminization: Naruto is forced to wear dresses and makeup and act demure like a proper wife. he is kept in chastity whist drugged on strong aphrodisiacs with the edict that he can only gain orgasm like “a proper woman” (I.e. through the ass) when alone with the doll she is forced to treat the doll with the same reverance as Toneri (calling it mistress). the doll teaches Naruto more feminine things like gardening, tea ceremony, dressing to impress her man etc. whenever he (Naruto) is not with Toneri Naruto is with his Mistress the puppet (you may name the puppet if you wish.)

Mpreg: it will happen eventually nuff said.

Heavy BDSM: Naruto will constantly wear a irremovable collar that is only changed to a more decorative one once they have the official marriage ceremony. often Toneri will make him act like either a pet dog/cat/pony. when not wearing either a kimono or naked he must wear some form of leather/latex garment. be it a decorative leather evening gown to a gimp suit. Toneri/the head doll must condition Naruto to take great pleasure in being in pain or humiliated. Toneri even threatens to let various animals rape Naruto if he does not comply (If you what to add actual bestiality then good for you but you don’t have to) the head puppet makes sure that Naruto has a heavy Enema every morning and is butt plugged when doing activities that don’t involve his husband. heavy toy play as well.

No Scat: while Toneri is a creep in this and will force his wife to endure golden showers and drinking cum he will not take part in anything scat related. (sorry for those who like it but Scat is not my cup of tea).

Heavy punishment: there will come times where the two fight and Toneri WILL punish Naruto harshly. this can range from whipping, exhibitionism, Piercing of nipples, tattooing “Property of Toneri” as a tramp stamp, sensory deprivation, Genjutsu based nightmares, forced and continuous orgasm, extended cum eating, forced lactation etc. (whatever debouched thing you can think of) There MUST be a scene in the space after Naruto has accepted his feelings for Toneri but before the marriage when they have a big argument (I leave the topic to you) and Toneri punishes Naruto by having one of the puppets remove his eyes and replace them with a pair of clear eyes (look again at the url above, those eyes) the original blue eyes are kept preserved in a container in Naruto’s changing room as a reminder to never disobey his husband to be so severely again.

Slow Mind Break: Naruto mind must go through several stages: I Hate this guy, I don’t like this guy, I’ll do what he says so long as he doesn’t hurt me, he is actually kind of nice, I think I’m in love, i love him, and finally I am this man’s wife, he and our children are my entire world, my body serves no purpose but to bring him happiness.

And that is about the extent of my idea, hopefully you guy’s in the AFF community can do something with it.

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Interesting idea, and I’m certainly intrigued enough to seriously consider taking it up (maybe it’ll help me get out of my funk to work on my other two AFF Naruto stories). But I need a little clarification: what exactly do you mean and are looking for in regards to ‘brutal sexual training’?

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Apologies if i made it unclear as i wrote it in a rush before going to bed. “brutal sexual training” is broken down into three parts.

Technique: how to give the technique (blowjob, rimming, intercourse etc.) and refined with repetitive practice 

loss of inhibition: utilizing either physiological (bullying, humiliation etc.) or physiological (forced pleasure and non con) methods to decrease Naruto’s resistance to please Toneri/other.

Discipline: small mistakes with big punishments be they physically painful/pleasurable or emotionally demeaning. for example being made to lick the floor clean, while not physically painful it plants the seed to not make a mistake again. 

you can use any method (Toys, diapering, heavy bondage, breath play etc.) so long as it changes Naruto both physically and mentally, coming to love certain feelings while hating others.

hope that clears it up for you. 

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It does indeed, thanks.

Probably going to at least start this story because I have a plot bouncing around in my head of a “post-marriage” scene where Tsunade and Jiraiya, after a couple of years of trying to get a meeting with Toneri (due to not wanting a war with Toneri while the threat of Akatsuki looms) finally succeed. They show up at Toneri’s castle, and while talking with him Jiraiya sees and leers at Naruto who’s dressed in a leather thong and basque (he doesn’t recognize it’s Naruto or even a male due to the modification, use of make-up to hide his even more prominent whisker marks due to his skin becoming milky white, and a special ninshu technique to hide the, though somewhat shrunken, still there bulge that identifies Naruto as being born male pre-transformation).

Toneri offers to let them stay the night so they can continue the talks in the morning. During the night, Naruto enters Jiraiya’s room and offers herself to him. Jiraiya, being the lecherous pervert he is, immediately agrees, and even agrees to the conditions of being tied up and blindfolded (basically he does so to humor her, and isn’t worried about being in danger even if she tries something).

So Jiraiya’s tied up, they have sex, but just before he climaxes the blindfold comes off and Jiraiya sees the “woman” he’d been leering at and having sex with has three whisker-like birthmarks, short spiky blonde hair (a ninshu illusion, he’s still got the long, straight white hair), shrunken male genitals, and a seal on ‘her’ stomach. He quickly realizes exactly who is on him, and to his horror, is unable to stop himself from climaxing inside of Naruto.

Drained from the release and shocked, Jiraiya can only look at his partner in horror as he asks “Na-Naruto?” To which he gets a smile and a response that causes him a massive amount of horror; “Hi ero-sennin.” We soon find out that Toneri had wanted and planned for this to happen for several reasons, including tormenting Jiraiya (and Tsunade when she learns about everything) and to show them how much Naruto belongs to him.

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(I got an actual account in the time since my last reply)

glad to hear and I must admit that your idea fits not only into naruto’s loss of inhibition but also his by that point need to please Toneri.

If you ever need inspiration for a scene/plot line just message me and we can work something out.

i have also thought of a continuation to your “post-marriage” scene. I’ll type it up later cause it’s like 12:40AM here in the UK and I need to go to bed.

 

 

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The idea that i had that adds onto your scene idea is broken up into two parts:

Part 1: After Jiraiya gets “caught short” if you will with his partner, he and Tsunade are brought before Toneri’s throne with Naruto sitting to her husband’s side. Toneri explains his reasons (as you previously described) and after Tsunade snaps out of her horror/disgust she accuses Toneri of forcing Naruto to do things against his will. Toneri then decides to give a demonstration of his wife’s loyalty. He asks her to strip off her clothing- save the irremovable collar -till she is naked. Tsunade becomes horrified at what has been done to Naruto while Jiraiya feels renewed shame. Toneri asks his wife to bend over and show her ass to their guests(said in a condescending way) while he holds her ass cheeks open.

Toneri asks Naruto what she thought and felt during her funtime with Jiraiya. she reply's that she did enjoy herself but only with the thoughts that it was Toneri in Jiraiya’s place and the thoughts of pleasing him. She goes onto explain her purpose as Tonei’s wife and how she has never been more happy, even when he punishes her (by this point punishment in her mind is just her loving husband correcting her) Toneri then proceeds to tell the two Sannin of a particular training session in vivid detail, they watch on in horror as slick starts to leak from Naruto’s ass, growing more and more aroused at the mere memory of her wonderful husband and how he corrected his wife back when she was still an idiot. potentially this could develop into throne sex but at the end Tsunade and Jiraiya are sent back to there rooms to demoralize unto what they had seen.

Part 2: after the Sannin are sent back to there rooms, Toneri compliments Naruto on her use of technique with the Toad but mentions that after sleeping with one such as Jiraiya she must reaffirm her marriage vows. Naruto meekly nods, stating that even if she enjoyed the sex she feels shame that her body was touched by one outside the household (because she still has sex with the mistress doll and others).

Toneri smiles at his dutiful wife and has her escorted to the sex dungeon. later he finds her strapped into a heavy duty bondage horse/sybian (any additional accessories included.) He resolves to remove the Toad’s taint and fucks her while she recites her vows from their marriage.     

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Guest Dat Boi
On 4/23/2017 at 7:42 PM, Guest TheWingedDragonofFuta said:

There MUST be a scene in the space after Naruto has accepted his feelings for Toneri but before the marriage when they have a big argument (I leave the topic to you) and Toneri punishes Naruto by having one of the puppets remove his eyes and replace them with a pair of clear eyes (look again at the url above, those eyes) the original blue eyes are kept preserved in a container in Naruto’s changing room as a reminder to never disobey his husband to be so severely again.

If those are the clear eyes that Kaguya had before the Chakra fruit then you could have the Hyuuga’s pissed off that someone has eyes so similar looking to the Byakugan, especially a “clan-less mongrel”.

If Toneri and his wife were to ever go down to Earth, I think it would be a cool idea if Naruto had to wear a vale over his head like Momoshiki. (http://cdn2.bjweekly.com/uploads/2016-02-03/8869211054257046705.jpg) first for Toneri’s pleasure that lowly peasants can’t look upon his wife directly and to protect Naruto from the ugliness of the Rikudo’s world. 

I really like this story idea, Toneri doesn’t get enough love from the fan fic community. and let’s be honest, he’s F@%&ing Hot!

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On 5/16/2017 at 1:49 PM, Guest Dat Boi said:

If those are the clear eyes that Kaguya had before the Chakra fruit then you could have the Hyuuga’s pissed off that someone has eyes so similar looking to the Byakugan, especially a “clan-less mongrel”.

Speaking of the Hyuuga, i guess you  could add things like the cage bird seal into the mix. like one on Naruto’s tongue that when activated makes everything she eats taste like her husbands cum/urine or her own breast milk. or trigger a craving for sex from either her mistress or her husband. 

Another idea for a punishment could be suspending her above Toneri with his cock just out of reach as either the head doll or more than one go to town on her ass, unable to attain orgasm until she can get her husband to cum into her mouth.

or burying her up to her neck in her own garden (remember that the head doll instills feminine values in her such as having a garden) with a bowl (similar to a dog cone collar https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/e/ed/Cone-head_Reni_-_dog_in_Elizabethan_collar.jpg) attached to her neck. all the dolls would then Bukake into the bowl, telling her that she has to drink everything given to her before being aloud out of the garden.

I have some more ideas for plot points but I’ll save them for later.

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Is this ever getting made? it is a cool idea. Toneri is a character rarely touched on and the one sided romance into kinky as hell married life on the moon is a novel idea. I’ll admit that I’m a fan of feminization stories and the idea of Toneri getting his kinky bondage filled own back on the shinobi world gets me rather hot under the collar.

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cool idea, combining Yaoi, Futa and a bunch of other kinks like mind break would be cool. if this were ever fic ever gets made than the thing that would clench it would be the transition from knucklehead to demure yet slutty wife. props to whoever takes it up. The Dog Sage said he may do it but that was back in May and now its November :-( 

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Planning on writing this, just having trouble with the ‘argument/revelation’ that essentially kicks off the plot. Could use a little help with that if anyone’s able.

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On 11/16/2017 at 2:23 PM, TheDogSage said:

Planning on writing this, just having trouble with the ‘argument/revelation’ that essentially kicks off the plot. Could use a little help with that if anyone’s able.

Perhaps Naruto asks Sakura out and she cruelly rejects him

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On 16/11/2017 at 7:23 PM, TheDogSage said:

Planning on writing this, just having trouble with the ‘argument/revelation’ that essentially kicks off the plot. Could use a little help with that if anyone’s able.

Are you still working on this?

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On 3/2/2018 at 8:28 AM, Guest De Wae said:

Are you still working on this?

Planning on it, it’s just… sometimes I have trouble getting the story started, like with this one.

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4 hours ago, TheDogSage said:

Planning on it, it’s just… sometimes I have trouble getting the story started, like with this one.

Understandable, we all get writers block sometimes 

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Thinking about writing this. Sorry, I’m a guest right now. However I don’t know how I will be involving the Akatsuki/everything involved (not really into bashing). Here’s what I have in mind (at least at the beginning), and my particular fetishes involved

Basic Plot

  • Naruto is 12, Sasuke retrieval mission, gets kidnapped before he can get to Sasuke. Everyone in Konoha believes he is dead or missing, even the Akatsuki.
  • Wakes up dressed in a feminine silk kimono and chastity and is told about his future as wife to Toneri.
  • Rejects, gets raped.
  • Gets trained viciously.

Fetishes I wish to write about

  • Anal: Naruto will only be allowed stimulation from his/her anus. He will constantly have something in his ass. When he is not being used, he will be fitted with a dildo or buttplug.
  • Chastity: Naruto will be fitted with an cock cage that will never be removed.
  • Cum: anything Naruto eats or drinks will have a dressing of Toneri’s semen.
  • Latex: this will be very heavy as I really like it. After rejecting Toneri, his silk kimono will be removed. From now on, everything he will ever wear will be made out of rubber or latex. Even when he learns his place, his kimono will be made out of latex. When he sleeps, he will do so in a latex sleepsack (while suspended). If he is ever allowed his own bed, it will be latex, etc. Toneri loves to see his wife in rubber, and orders a full wardrobe made out of it
  • Bondage: He will always be accompanied by the dolls, bound in extreme restraints when he does not have any duties to attend to. His chakra will be sealed, but there will be a collar involved.
  • Feminization: In this story, he will be immediately referred to as a “she”. Naruto will be forced into makeup and feminine latex clothing.
  • Machines/Toys: Toneri is a busy man, therefore Naruto will be constantly stimulated by sybians, wooden horses, fucking machines, etc.

Fetishes I won’t write about

  • Scat
  • Bestiality
  • Watersports 
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17 hours ago, Guest FDomFan said:

Thinking about writing this. Sorry, I’m a guest right now. However I don’t know how I will be involving the Akatsuki/everything involved (not really into bashing). Here’s what I have in mind (at least at the beginning), and my particular fetishes involved

Basic Plot

  • Naruto is 12, Sasuke retrieval mission, gets kidnapped before he can get to Sasuke. Everyone in Konoha believes he is dead or missing, even the Akatsuki.
  • Wakes up dressed in a feminine silk kimono and chastity and is told about his future as wife to Toneri.
  • Rejects, gets raped.
  • Gets trained viciously.

Fetishes I wish to write about

  • Anal: Naruto will only be allowed stimulation from his/her anus. He will constantly have something in his ass. When he is not being used, he will be fitted with a dildo or buttplug.
  • Chastity: Naruto will be fitted with an cock cage that will never be removed.
  • Cum: anything Naruto eats or drinks will have a dressing of Toneri’s semen.
  • Latex: this will be very heavy as I really like it. After rejecting Toneri, his silk kimono will be removed. From now on, everything he will ever wear will be made out of rubber or latex. Even when he learns his place, his kimono will be made out of latex. When he sleeps, he will do so in a latex sleepsack (while suspended). If he is ever allowed his own bed, it will be latex, etc. Toneri loves to see his wife in rubber, and orders a full wardrobe made out of it
  • Bondage: He will always be accompanied by the dolls, bound in extreme restraints when he does not have any duties to attend to. His chakra will be sealed, but there will be a collar involved.
  • Feminization: In this story, he will be immediately referred to as a “she”. Naruto will be forced into makeup and feminine latex clothing.
  • Machines/Toys: Toneri is a busy man, therefore Naruto will be constantly stimulated by sybians, wooden horses, fucking machines, etc.

Fetishes I won’t write about

  • Scat
  • Bestiality
  • Watersports 

That is understandable, keep the chain informed if you make progress. I'm happy that this idea of mine has garnered such interest from more than one writer.

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This is FDomFan with a new account, it’s a different name. This is my pen name on the site proper as well. If you see the Anime section, I currently only have one Evangelion story, that’s me.

Anyways, I am currently writing the story. It should not take me more than a week to post the first chapter. I have the basic outline of the first three chapters already planned.

  • Chapter 1: Toneri’s thoughts, finding Naruto, and ordering his dolls to take him/her. Ends with Naruto/Narumi (as she will be called later) being undressed, shaved, have his chakra sealed, and chastized.
  • Chapter 2: Narumi is told of her new life, the initial rejection. Toneri rapes Narumi.
  • Chapter 3: Narumi is given to the dolls, the start of her training.
  • Later chapters will be pretty much as smutty as possible. No holds barred.

Basically, I want any pointers you can give me. Particularly when it comes to traditional Japanese customs and wife duties. I have been surfing on the net to find some, but I would like to hear some suggestions.

The other thing I wish to ask is if I could add another character. It will be a surprise, but suffice to say that it is a canon character that is now in service to Toneri, and will take a leading role in Naruto’s development. I feel like having another human supervising the training is better than the emotionless dolls. I would really like to add her to the story. There will be an explanation as to why she is now servicing Toneri, so it won’t break to much character.

Another thing is the name change. Is Narumi alright? Or do you have suggestions for another one?

Finally, I wish to comment on the seals that will be forced on Naruto. I may be going overboard with what is possible but I can justify it with Uzumaki/Ōtsutsuki secrets. There was never any concrete science that I know of to seals anyway. So here’s the basic ones.

  • Will prevent Naruto from growing more than, say 5’4.
  • Will remove any bodily excretions (no need to use the toilet). Enemas will still be applied as punishment, though.
  • Chakra sealing
  • Muscle/physical force reducing, will help with Naruto becoming more “womanly”, will also greatly limit his strength to fight back.
  • Territorial seals that will knock Naruto unconscious if she tries to leave a determined area.
  • Punishment seals, similar to Hyuga’s caged bird seal.

Later seals will be added. Part of Toneri’s plot will revolve around finding new ones that will allow Naruto to bear children and make her anus wet like a vagina. Immortality seals, etc.

Finally the ongoing list of fetishes.

  • Feminization (Female clothing, makeup, women’s sandals, underwear, painted nails and toenails, etc.)
  • Anal (Toneri has no use for Naruto’s penis, so the only way she will orgasm is through her hole)
  • Chastity
  • Bondage (very heavy, even after the marriage she will spend very little time unbound. Even when fully clothed with a latex kimono, her feet will be shacked and arms will be tied behind her back under her clothing, etc.
  • Femdom (from head doll and secret character)
  • Yaoi (with Toneri, even if he doesn’t think of Naruto as a male)
  • Latex (there’s really no latex in the Narutoverse. I will make it so it’s a secret art from, that only the Ōtsutsuki clan know how to do. Thanks to this, Toneri will force Naruto to wear it, seeing as he doesn’t want his wife to “wear commoner’s clothing”)
  • Leather
  • Feet (mostly a femdom thing), big fetish of mine, so I really wish to add it.
  • Toys (dildos, strap-ons, buttplugs, sybians, fucking machines)

Give me your thoughts.

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6 hours ago, Rubberfoot said:

This is FDomFan with a new account, it’s a different name. This is my pen name on the site proper as well. If you see the Anime section, I currently only have one Evangelion story, that’s me.

Anyways, I am currently writing the story. It should not take me more than a week to post the first chapter. I have the basic outline of the first three chapters already planned.

  • Chapter 1: Toneri’s thoughts, finding Naruto, and ordering his dolls to take him/her. Ends with Naruto/Narumi (as she will be called later) being undressed, shaved, have his chakra sealed, and chastized.
  • Chapter 2: Narumi is told of her new life, the initial rejection. Toneri rapes Narumi.
  • Chapter 3: Narumi is given to the dolls, the start of her training.
  • Later chapters will be pretty much as smutty as possible. No holds barred.

Basically, I want any pointers you can give me. Particularly when it comes to traditional Japanese customs and wife duties. I have been surfing on the net to find some, but I would like to hear some suggestions.

The other thing I wish to ask is if I could add another character. It will be a surprise, but suffice to say that it is a canon character that is now in service to Toneri, and will take a leading role in Naruto’s development. I feel like having another human supervising the training is better than the emotionless dolls. I would really like to add her to the story. There will be an explanation as to why she is now servicing Toneri, so it won’t break to much character.

Another thing is the name change. Is Narumi alright? Or do you have suggestions for another one?

Finally, I wish to comment on the seals that will be forced on Naruto. I may be going overboard with what is possible but I can justify it with Uzumaki/Ōtsutsuki secrets. There was never any concrete science that I know of to seals anyway. So here’s the basic ones.

  • Will prevent Naruto from growing more than, say 5’4.
  • Will remove any bodily excretions (no need to use the toilet). Enemas will still be applied as punishment, though.
  • Chakra sealing
  • Muscle/physical force reducing, will help with Naruto becoming more “womanly”, will also greatly limit his strength to fight back.
  • Territorial seals that will knock Naruto unconscious if she tries to leave a determined area.
  • Punishment seals, similar to Hyuga’s caged bird seal.

Later seals will be added. Part of Toneri’s plot will revolve around finding new ones that will allow Naruto to bear children and make her anus wet like a vagina. Immortality seals, etc.

Finally the ongoing list of fetishes.

  • Feminization (Female clothing, makeup, women’s sandals, underwear, painted nails and toenails, etc.)
  • Anal (Toneri has no use for Naruto’s penis, so the only way she will orgasm is through her hole)
  • Chastity
  • Bondage (very heavy, even after the marriage she will spend very little time unbound. Even when fully clothed with a latex kimono, her feet will be shacked and arms will be tied behind her back under her clothing, etc.
  • Femdom (from head doll and secret character)
  • Yaoi (with Toneri, even if he doesn’t think of Naruto as a male)
  • Latex (there’s really no latex in the Narutoverse. I will make it so it’s a secret art from, that only the Ōtsutsuki clan know how to do. Thanks to this, Toneri will force Naruto to wear it, seeing as he doesn’t want his wife to “wear commoner’s clothing”)
  • Leather
  • Feet (mostly a femdom thing), big fetish of mine, so I really wish to add it.
  • Toys (dildos, strap-ons, buttplugs, sybians, fucking machines)

Give me your thoughts.

Nice to hear from you, as far as far as Japenese treditions, geisha was the first thing that came to mind but I will look up some more.

Adding another character is fine, if you wish to tell me who and how they would be implemented via PM then we can have further discussion and input from both sides.

The name change is fine but one of the facets of the story is that the mind break is slow, so Naruto would not think of himself as "Narumi" for quite some time.

Your seals sound good, it should be noted that they should also cater for Naruto's eventual physical changes. (Long strait white hair, feminine body etc.)

 

Any further idea discussion can be made via PM. 

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On 3/13/2018 at 12:04 PM, TheWingedDragonofFuta said:

Nice to hear from you, as far as far as Japenese treditions, geisha was the first thing that came to mind but I will look up some more.

Adding another character is fine, if you wish to tell me who and how they would be implemented via PM then we can have further discussion and input from both sides.

The name change is fine but one of the facets of the story is that the mind break is slow, so Naruto would not think of himself as "Narumi" for quite some time.

Your seals sound good, it should be noted that they should also cater for Naruto's eventual physical changes. (Long strait white hair, feminine body etc.)

 

Any further idea discussion can be made via PM. 

Any idea when we will get the first chapter?

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21 hours ago, TheWingedDragonofFuta said:

 

I’ve been in contact with Rubberfoot and it should be some time in the next few weeks

Thanks can’t wait been looking forward to a story like this forever. 

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