Daimyo's Den - Discussion Thread

[C_Wade]

The idea with hypnosis/subliminal messages was planned for kurenai and, to be honest, I can’t quite think of a way to include the word sex slave-chan (or similar) in a conversation without making Hinata suspicious. If the daimyo randomly says the word sex slave-chan and Hinata suddenly gets horny she would immediately make the connection, it would need to be a word that can be inserted into a normal conversation without arousing suspicion.

The second idea sounds good, I’ll see how I can work it in.

I’m sure I will find a Kunoichi that fits the idea, there are still quite a few left after all.

[Ookami88]

That’s okay, I’m just at loss on how Hinata’s breaking could start without it being rushed. As for the ‘sex slave-chan’ thing, while Hinata may make some connection, she has no idea what transpired all those nights, and the phrase makes her horny beyond anything she has experienced before in her life, and when it’s repeated several times, each time she gets a new wave of arousal shooting through her body like a lightinbolt, making it impossible to focus on anything. Also, when she hears the Daimyo say it the first time, Hinata may think that she misheard him, especially with that wave of heat suddenly striking her, after all, why should she suspect the Daimyo of some foul play?

Though, I do understand that since Hinata’s episode is quite far away from now, so you probably have no concrete plans for her, only ideas of what could be used. However, if you do have some scenariofor my fav character, I wouldn’t mind hearing it (PM is also acceptable if you want to keep it a secret )

[knowpein]

Nice Chapter….

Though Seemed a bit disjointed at start and somewhat rushed at start (while undressing and dressing scene of TenTen)….

Like cruel character of princess….

though I wonder if you could find Kunoichi like that… who takes pleasure in others pain subjugated to same thing….
can’t seem to find any….



The whole bit with guards was interesting…

looking forward for next

[Guest snake1980]

nice job on the first part of the tenten chap.  wondering who else will have a go with tenten since the guards are having there fun maybe u could do is they are in the city and she trades some time with tenten for some items some shops in capital? have to wait and see. but I have a idea to add  to the tsunade that I already talked about what u think of it starts in the leaf were the daimyo shows up to the leaf to see how things are going and he confronts tsunade there about her debts and that they will be showing up in the leaf to play the game and she will have a hard time hiding whats happening from everyone in the village?

[C_Wade]

First, thanks for all your reviews and sorry it took a while to answer.

@Ookami88 We’ll see, I still think the particular phrase ‘Sex  Slave-chan’ is a bit too obvious, I might go for a different term, otherwise I like the idea though.

Sorry to disappoint you though, except for the things mentioned in this thread I don’t really have any ideas and or plans for Hinata yet, as you said it is still quite a while off.

@knowpein It seemed it a bit rushed because it was rushed, admittedly not my best work, but I wanted the chapter out on Sunday. Glad you still liked it though.

As for the sadist Kunoichi, maybe Anko? I think she might fit what you are suggesting…

@snake1980 Thanks. So you want Tsunade’s corruption to take place inside Konoha? Did I get that right?

[Guest snake1980]

it could start there and finish in the capital but it would be different since it would be a lot harder to make sure no one finds out whats going on in the leaf then if she was somewhere else. its up to u its a idea to change it up a little since so far its been happening in the capital

[C_Wade]

I can see what you mean, will have to think about how I could make that work in the story.

[Ookami88]

I can agree with you, it was just a suggestion for that phrase. I simply had no idea what kind of word play could be used here… Something that could sound lustful and innocent at the same time… Though, I did some searching and I think I found something that could work! Different honorifics! During the normal talk the Daimyo refers to Hinata as Hinata-san, while in the night the servants are calling her Hinata-tan (a more cute version of -chan), the difference between them is subtle enough to take as mishearing it for the first time, hence why Hinata won't suspect such little thing to actually be responsible for her growing lust. As for the final strike, the Daimyo could call her Hime-chan, which triggers the overwhelming orgasm.

What do you think about this change?

[C_Wade]

That’s a great idea. And it fits really well too.

[Ookami88]

Glad you like it!

[Guest Turon117]

The princess in the Tenten chapter seemed to want Naruto as slave originally...

[C_Wade]

Yes, but the point was more to get Tenten angry.

[Guest Guest]

I’m going to throw out some scenes I think might be nice, but please feel to ignore them.

Tenten – I know you’ve probably written most of this already, but for some reason I would like to see a scene where she is mocked for her weapon skills, maybe demonstrate her mastery of her dildo skills, or have to do a kata with a double headed inserted inside pussy as her weapon.

Naruko – for some reason I think an interesting scene would be if Naruko either as Hokage or not is brought along on a diplomatic mission by the Daimyo to the Wind Daimyo, where it turns out femgara has been similarly broken as Naruko and both Naruko and Femgara get involved at a gang bang at the diplomatic talks

Naruko – has her work in brothel for kicks

Ino - made to read peoples minds to see their sexual fantasies

Ino – considering Ino’s family run a flower shop maybe being made into a sexy Ikebana display

Anko – considering Anko’s hobby is tea ceremony have her do a ceremony in a fan service kimono with vibrator belt, at the end of the ceremony she gives all participants blow jobs

Anko – shibari

Anko – knife play

Anko – snake play

Tsunade – made to gamble on how she’s going to be fucked

Hana Inuzuka – given a doggy and fucked doggy style, made to food that’s had cum put over it out of a doggy bowl

Tsume Inuzuka – fucked by specially trained dog

Shizune – sexy nurse play

Sakura – doctor play – cures patients with sex (seriously there’s too many nurses already)

Kurenai – serves alchohol from her breasts

Kurenai – made to serve as nude canvas for the daimyo to practice calligraphy on (Japanese calligraphy is done with a brush)

Hinata – I know it was stated earlier but Nyotaimori for the win

Hinata – dances erotically

Ino/Sakura – lesbian play

Ino/Sakura – blow job competition winner gets an award

Kurenai – sent to assassinate and seduces then kills him

Kurenai - milked while pregnant

Hanabi - sisterly love

Mikoto – naked apron play

Kushina – writes seals via a brush inserted in pussy http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2162290

Shiho – naughty librarian

Mito Uzumaki – tied to a tree a fucked

 

Any – tentacle summon

Any – glory hole

That’s all I can think of for now.

 

 

 

 

 

 

[C_Wade]

Hey, thanks for contributing all those ideas,

the Tenten ones are most likely out, because I do have the rest of the chapter planned out already.

Naruko: maybe, I have no concrete plan for her yet, so anything is possible.

Ino: the mindreading one sounds interesting, I’ll see if I can fit it into the episode, the other most likely not.

Anko: same as naruko, no concrete plan for her so anything is possible.

Tsunade: it most likely will be kind of like that

Tsume/Hana: Not much of a beast fan, I don’t mind reading it on occasion, but I don’t think I will write it.

Shizune: That was the same idea I had, so unless something better comes up, that will be it.

Sakura: Somebody already request Sakura with minors, so maybe a children hospital?

Kurenai: Maybe to the alcohol serving, most likely no to the brush writing. The assasination idea is good, although it will most likely fail and lead to the punishment. Pregnant sex is like beast for me, dunno if I will write it.

Hinata: Well, since it is requested twice...^^, dunno if the sexy dancing works out for her, but I’ll keep it in mind

Ino/Sakura: dunno if I’ll be doing episodes with more than one featured girl, but if I do I’ll keep it in mind.

Hanabi: same as Ino/Sakura

Kushina: Maybe, but not likely

Shiho: Maybe

Mito: sounds good

 

As for the other two, tentacles were requested once or twice before, and I wouldn’t mind writing them, but I have no idea how.

Gloryhole fun sounds good.

 

[C_Wade]

And an update for the Tenten chapter, I don’t have written as much as I’d like, and I most likely won’t finish the chapter this weekend, seeing as I will be going to visit some family in another state and I’m not sure how much time I will have to write there.

Now the question is, do you want me to post the chapter as fast as possible, or should I wait for next Sunday and get a head start on the Tsunade episode, which will be next.

[redlox2]

To be honest I would prefer you wrap up the TenTen chapter in one. So if we have to wait a week and get a start on the Tsunade chapter (likely more popular) I would be fine with that.

[Guest Guest]

Do whatever works best for you, your the author.

[Guest Guest]

3 hours ago, C_Wade said:

As for the other two, tentacles were requested once or twice before, and I wouldn’t mind writing them, but I have no idea how.

Unfortunately, the only real way to learn to write tentacles, is to read tentacle porn and see what works and what doesn't.

Plot wise though I think it would be pretty simple.

Step 1 – Kunoichi is sent out to check on reports in the capital of strange sightings in the capital
Step 2 – Kunoichi is captured by tentacle beast which turns out be summon used by Daimyo

Step 3 – Kunoichi fucked in various inventive ways until broken, for added benefit the tentacle beast can be a set of living clothes to keep control of the kunoichi –http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1012314 http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1154632

[C_Wade]

2 hours ago, Guest Guest said:

Unfortunately, the only real way to learn to write tentacles, is to read tentacle porn and see what works and what doesn't.

That is true, i’ll just have to do my best.

We’ll see about a fitting scenario once I decide who, and when, although I quite like the investigation idea.

[C_Wade]

Small update,

finally got over my hangup with the Tenten chapter and managed to write some today, hopefully a lot more will follow. A few people have asked me about the posting-schedule so I though posting it for everyone might be a good idea.

Tenten part 2, Sunday (fingers crossed)

Tsunade (most likely 2 if not 3 parts, there is a lot of content to cover)

Kushina (also 2 or 3 parts)

(Ino/Sakura/Hinata) in any order, although I still don’t have a solid plan for Ino yet, except for a few Ideas.

Kurenai

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Thanks again everybody for the feedback and your contributions in this thread, would be way harder if I didn’t get all those ideas from you guys.

Edit: The list is in order, from top to bottom, in case that it was not clear enough.

Edited March 28, 2017 by C_Wade
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[Guest omega]

Who is after tenten ?

[C_Wade]

Just now, Guest omega said:

Who is after tenten ?

… are you serious right now? I just wrote that down…

The list is in order, I thought that was obvious.

[Guest Omega]

I did not realise it was in order . My bad I though you had simply stated the chapter numbers

[Guest Guest]

On 3/28/2017 at 2:58 AM, C_Wade said:

Small update,

finally got over my hangup with the Tenten chapter and managed to write some today, hopefully a lot more will follow. A few people have asked me about the posting-schedule so I though posting it for everyone might be a good idea.

Tenten part 2, Sunday (fingers crossed)

Tsunade (most likely 2 if not 3 parts, there is a lot of content to cover)

Kushina (also 2 or 3 parts)

(Ino/Sakura/Hinata) in any order, although I still don’t have a solid plan for Ino yet, except for a few Ideas.

Kurenai

…

Thanks again everybody for the feedback and your contributions in this thread, would be way harder if I didn’t get all those ideas from you guys.

Edit: The list is in order, from top to bottom, in case that it was not clear enough.

Good to see you getting over your writters block. Good luck.

[Guest Andromeda]

Are you gonna post the chapter this sunday ?