Daimyo's Den - Discussion Thread

[redlox2]

Actually awake now (and got like 2 hours before work) so going to read now and review!! Prob post review here too so people can read.

[C_Wade]

I don’t mind either way, enjoy!

[redlox2]

ok i just read it!! maybe i am first or not not sure...lets see Satsuki "waking up" in the middleof her first ride with the Daimyo wasa nice touch. the Yuri seemed pretty good. the maid outfit was amzing espcially with the short but vivid desciption.

 

for the TenTen chapter in the first part instead of just getting straight to drugs can ou do a few scenes where the Daimyo gets a bit more "hand on" than necessary with TenTen unable to do any real actions for scout away?

Also posted as review on adult fanfic!!

[C_Wade]

Thanks for the review, I’m glad you liked the maid outfit.

As for the Tenten chapter, it is going to be a little different, but drugs won’t feature as much in it as in the Satsuki one.

[redlox2]

maybe for TenTen before any kind of real seduction she will be asked to wear something a little more “daring” but necessary “slutty”. something like ninja sandals, black knee length socks, small shorts, and sleeveless loose shirt. TenTen being a tomboy wont think any real threat so she agrees.

[C_Wade]

Hmm, I think a tomboy like Tenten especially would object if asked to ‘dress up’. But i’ll keep the idea in mind, maybe it would fit for Ino, although she dresses provocatively enough as it is… maybe Sakura or Hinata then.

The beginning of the Tenten chapter is written already and with the amount of different content I have planned there just isn’t time for a ‘slow’ seduction, the episode is most likely going to be long enough as it is.

[redlox2]

Sounds exciting!!

[C_Wade]

I hope it won’t disappoint ^^

[redlox2]

Although the idea of somebody like Hinata dressing up is really exciting!! She is by far the most busty of the Kohona 12!! Even her part 2 outfit can't hide her true figure!!

[C_Wade]

Jup, that was clearly shown in the RTN movie… which I still haven’t watched.

[redlox2]

Even in the canon Last Movie a 17 year Hinata has blossomed even more with her ninja uniform showing off her thighs and curvy breasts.

[C_Wade]

This will most likely be the Hinata I’ll be using for her chapter. While her part 1 outfit was cute, the one she had in shippuden was just fucking ugly...

Edited March 12, 2017 by C_Wade

[redlox2]

I don't  know even though I agree her Last uniform was definelately a looker (hoping she will  still be a maiden in your story) her part  2 uniform although was covering still could not prevent her breasts size from being obvious.

I could see the Daimyo getting hooked on Hinata on first glance when she walks in her last uniform (especially her 17 year looks)!!

[C_Wade]

Heh, now I’m kind of in the mood to write some Hinata… gotta resist though...

[redlox2]

Hehe no worries. I forgot what is the episode listing right now? TenTen....

[C_Wade]

Hmm, Tenten (takes place just after the war) is next, then Tsunade (I was thinking just after she left Konoha, agewise), then Ino (Shippuden) and then Kushina (dunno yet). Afterwards there is no concrete plan.

[redlox2]

So at least a couple of months before Hinata. I can live with that. Can't wait for next week for first part of TenTen!!

[C_Wade]

Well, next week my holidays start, so depending on how motivated I am I might write a little bit faster… But yes, It will take a while until Hinata makes her appearance...

[Ookami88]

While I do agree on all accounts about Hinata (though I actually have no problems with her Shippuuden outfit, the first one we see, not the army uniform), and it is unfortunate for me that such a long wait is before we can see her (I just like her a lot!), personally I think it will be good for us to wait for her. Because while waiting we can throw some ideas that may make her episode even better than anticipated!

If I may throw such suggestion, but regarding Tenten, or some other kunoichi that appears later, maybe Kushina or Tsunade – trial of combat. The Daimyo could demand a show of skills from the heired kunoichi, one where she has to wrestle with her opponents, without using any chakra related techniques. This would be explained that there are many enemies who could use chakra against their users, not to mention that the Daimyo didn’t wish for his castle/mansion/residence be destroyed. The kunoichi in question has no other choice than agree, she changes into an outfit provided (skintight leotard, another demand, to see if the kunoichi are really trained to fight in any conditions, like just in their underwear or something as embarrassing), and is led to an arena, where her opponent, an expert in hand-to-hand wrestling combat, is waiting. During the fight the wrestler uses graplings and other moves to immobile the kunoichi, and when she is held down, he gropes her body in various places. Next round, the kunoichi has to fight two wrestlers, as a penalty for losing the first round, or just to show if she really can fight that many opponents. Again they immobile her, this time they go even deeper with their treatment, sliding the leotard’s parts aside and showing her pussy and nipples, while groping them mercilessly, even going as far as rubbing the special oils on them.

The idea is actually from one of the doujins by Crimson Comics, but with clear diferences regarding the setting and participants.

[C_Wade]

Yes I’m familiar with what you are suggesting, not the doujin by Crimson Comics, but from several animations and eroge. It just never occurred to me to use it in this story, it is definitely a good idea though!

However I’m unsure which Kunoichi would fit the idea… I already have Tenten’s Intro fully planned out and mostly written as well, so she is out (unless I write a second episode for her, but I think there are enough other Kunoichi to write about until we will have to repeat).

One Kunoichi I might see that happening too would be Kurenai, because the Daimyo demands that he needs to assess her combat proficiency without her being able to use genjutsu, which she is famous for.

 

[Ookami88]

Like I said, it doesn’t need to be Tenten. And it would be kind of ironic if a kunoichi that is good with taijutsu actually lost a wrestling match. How about Kushina? She could work here just as nicely.

[C_Wade]

There is that, I guess Kushina is a possibility. I’ll put it down under her, as long as I don’t get a better Idea.

[Ookami88]

Oh, and for Kushina’s timeline, how about somewhere in the middle, like before she married Minato, but long after that kidnapping attempt by Kumo where he rescued her? Let’s say her early jounin years, so she’s like 22-26 years old.

[C_Wade]

Sure, doesn’t really matter to me. I just wanted her to be younger and not a ‘Milf’.

[Ookami88]

The hardest part is actually guessing how old Kushina was when she married Minato and then gave birth to Naruto. Though, I did find out that in Part II (I think they mean Shippuuden here, not really clear on that, and it’s about her appearance during Naruto’s subduing of Kyuubi inside the seal) she was 24, which means that’s the age she died. So, maybe 18 would be better bet, and make her an experienced chuunin, with this mission being 1 last step to her jounin promotion.