Guest snake1980 Posted April 3, 2017 Report Posted April 3, 2017 not bad but the Jessica rabbit outfit is good too but the skirt part could be shorter if u want since it will show a lot of cleavage and make her wear no bra. but its up to the author in the end Quote
Ookami88 Posted April 3, 2017 Report Posted April 3, 2017 True, but here’s the thing about the old tradition of yukata, at some point in the past there were supposed to be worn without any underwear underneath. Reason for that is because the material was so thin that any undergarments would be showing up, and women like to look neat and elegant. While with yukata so short Hinata needs to wear panties, her chest would be bare, since any bra would just pop through the thin material, and she was raised as an elegant lady (heirs usually are). As for the cleavage part, while not as pronounced as in Jessica’s outfit, the yukata could be simply too small for her size, needing for Hinata to actually show off some upper skin, unless she wanted to offend the Daimyo by not wearing his gift. It could look like this in the upper part: https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3585384 Quote
Guest snake1980 Posted April 3, 2017 Report Posted April 3, 2017 that's true. hmmm what about about the both one for one day and the other for the next Quote
Ookami88 Posted April 3, 2017 Report Posted April 3, 2017 Like you’ve said, it depends on the author, though I can actually see one dinner being in traditional japanese style (yukata), and maybe next time some event comes up, where Hinata has to wear a western style dress, like the Daimyo having a banquet of some kind. Quote
Guest snake1980 Posted April 3, 2017 Report Posted April 3, 2017 now that will work like say he has to go to a deal and ask the hokage for hinata to be his body guard there and gives her the dress Quote
Ookami88 Posted April 3, 2017 Report Posted April 3, 2017 Yeah, but I think that yukata works best for a private dinner, while the dress is a good choice for some public event. Quote
Guest snake1980 Posted April 3, 2017 Report Posted April 3, 2017 that's what I said the rest would be for some public event like a ball and hinata is going as his bodyguard/date and wears the dress Quote
Ookami88 Posted April 3, 2017 Report Posted April 3, 2017 Ah, sorry, I didn’t get it the first time. What would be more interesting is if Hinata’s dress was drenched or weaved with something that teases her body with every movement, slowly arousing her over the time. Quote
Guest snake 1980 Posted April 3, 2017 Report Posted April 3, 2017 hmmm that's true could have something in the fabric that cause the arousing effect until she cant take it. or say she takes a bath/shower and her shampoo and soap are changed out with some stuff that will slowly take effect as the night goes on Quote
C_Wade Posted April 3, 2017 Author Report Posted April 3, 2017 Several nice ideas here, I won’t commit to anything just yet, seeing as the Hinata episode is still quite a while off, but I noted them down regardless. I personally am quite a fan of traditional Japanese clothing, both for males and especially females, though I admit the Jessica Rabbit dress is good as well. The idea with the manipulated fabric is also quite interesting. Quote
Guest snake1980 Posted April 3, 2017 Report Posted April 3, 2017 glad u like it since hinata is hard to figure out for since the other girls are easier to do. Quote
Guest snake1980 Posted April 3, 2017 Report Posted April 3, 2017 do u have a idea for ino yet? might have one that u might like Quote
C_Wade Posted April 3, 2017 Author Report Posted April 3, 2017 there have been a few things mentioned here in the thread, which I noted down, but I didn’t decide on anything yet. So just lay it on me. Quote
Ookami88 Posted April 3, 2017 Report Posted April 3, 2017 About the shower and shampoo, how about having the Daimyo and Hinata stay in a very luxurious hotel, where the Daimyo will be attending a party in the evening, while having Hinata as his escort and partner for the evening. She needs to clean herself shortly before the party, so she has no time to buy her own soap, and has to use the one provided by the hotel staff, not knowing that it was also a very strong but slow working aphrodisiac. Hinata washes herself unaware, and as the party prolongs, she feels more and more aroused, and once she’s free of her duty, she goes to her room and masturbates like never before, much to the joy of people watching her through a hidden camera in the room. I really hope that Hinata episode, when its time finally comes, will go better than Tenten’s for you. Quote
C_Wade Posted April 3, 2017 Author Report Posted April 3, 2017 Man, I hope so too. It’s really annoying me tbh, adding to that is that we finally have some decent weather here in berlin, so the motivation to write such a difficult chapter is even lower. I like the shampoo idea, very ‘realistic’ too. Quote
Guest Omega Posted April 3, 2017 Report Posted April 3, 2017 Any plans for a weekday update or a weekend update ? Quote
C_Wade Posted April 3, 2017 Author Report Posted April 3, 2017 I honestly can’t say. Most likely I will post it right after I finish it, but who knows when that will be... Quote
Guest snake1980 Posted April 4, 2017 Report Posted April 4, 2017 well u know how ino always has to wear the best clothing and always be clean and stuff well what do u think she is made to get down and dirty like she wakes up in a ally and the bumbs have some fun with her Quote
Guest snake1980 Posted April 4, 2017 Report Posted April 4, 2017 that's not a bad idea for hinata but instead what if she doesn't make it back to her room and finds a quite spot somewhere and doesn't care if anyone see her? say like she is leaving and does a little in the bathroom and it doesn't help so she heads back to her room but doesn't make it that far and goes into the park and pretty much goes at it and doesn't care if anyone see what she is doing Quote
Guest snake1980 Posted April 5, 2017 Report Posted April 5, 2017 hey man have a question was wondering have u ever thought of doing a naruto story were the girls are blackmailed in a way. like for example say ino runs up a bill at a clothing store from when she became a genin up to some time in shippuden time like were she cant pay the store owner back but have to do what he wants until its paid in full? Quote
C_Wade Posted April 5, 2017 Author Report Posted April 5, 2017 no I have never really thought of doing a story like that. I have to many stories I’m working on atm anyways, so I won’t start anything new either, sorry. Quote
Guest The godfather Posted April 5, 2017 Report Posted April 5, 2017 Any plans for a weekday update or a weekend update ? Quote
Guest snake1980 Posted April 5, 2017 Report Posted April 5, 2017 I see or u know u could use that for ino chap were say the daimyo knows the store owner and has ino sign a contract to work it off by any means with out any questions ask. Quote
Guest Bleh bleh bleh Posted April 10, 2017 Report Posted April 10, 2017 Im guessing not this week ? Quote
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