Daimyo's Den - Discussion Thread

[C_Wade]

The jounin promotion is a good idea, I’ll worry about the actual age once I start writing. But she will be around 18-early twenties

[Ookami88]

Good to hear that I can still throw some usable ideas for you.

[C_Wade]

yea, it all comes flowing together. Most of the ideas can easily be combined. Also, it helps that I didn’t really put any thought into the Kushina chapter as of yet, so you kind of get to write on a blank slate.

[Guest Renamon]

Please do Hana and Tsume if you can.

[C_Wade]

Yes, that’s not a problem, it will take a while though. Is there anything special you wanna see? And do you mean both Tsume and Hana at once, or separately?

[redlox2]

Sorry to interrupt but could consider doing “anime only” Kunoichi? Like Shizuka (episode 235) and Hotaru (episodes 144-151). As they are busty and you could do a loophole where since Ahizuka is from a minor village and Hotaru is technically wonderer. They could move to The Leaf and be requested.

 

they are both young and busty.

[C_Wade]

Hmm, maybe, after I worked through all the Konoha Kunoichi. I never watched the anime myself and I’m not really keen on doing so, but I can force myself to watch a few episodes I think. 

[redlox2]

I can sum them up. (The pics are online) so Shizuka is currently the leader of a female only minor village. Their tradtion is they only marry a guy if they can beat the girl in combat. She falls in love with Naruto but Naruto refuses to stay with her since he still has a crush on Sakura and obligations to the leaf. She is rather busty.

 

Hotaru is the 6 tails jinchuuriki apprentice who just follows him around as he is technically rouge. She is shorter than Naruto but shocking pretty curveous.

[redlox2]

Hotaru is a dirt blonde with green eyes while Shizuka has green eyes and long black eyes. 

[C_Wade]

Alright, I wrote them down into the TODO list, as with hana and tsume though, it will take a while before they appear. I was thinking of doing polls after I’m done with all my planned chapters, this way everyone can decide who will be next.

[C_Wade]

Would they be trusted with what is essentially their supreme ruler’s daughter though?

[C_Wade]

oh, well yea I guess that could be done

[Guest kkkzil]

Is it possible if you could post some concept art of satsuki?

[Guest snake1980]

great job on the last chap. glad to see tenten is coming up not sure if u figure out what she is going to do or how she shows up. but u could do is him send a message needing the best weapon expert to show up to inspect some weapons they are thinking of buying before he spends the money so they send tenten and she will try out all the weapons if u know what I mean

[C_Wade]

2 hours ago, Guest kkkzil said:

Is it possible if you could post some concept art of satsuki?

I didn’t rally use a picture for her when I imagined what she looked like but this one fit’s pretty well, except for the long hair. I didn’t find any good nudes though.

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@snake1980 thanks, I’m glad you liked it. I already have an Idea for tenten, but still, thanks for contributing, I will keep it in mind should I ever make another Tenten episode

[Guest snake1980]

np man, but u have a idea for sakura yet? I know u said tsunade but u could use the same idea for her too since it would work for ether of them. were he ask for help were he could say a few people are really sick and the doctors there cant seem to help so ether sakura/tsunade or both could show up and are at the hospital to see whats going on and u can guess what happens

[C_Wade]

I actually didn’t have an idea for Sakura yet, so that hospital one is really appreciated, most likely will use it.

Don’t wanna spoil, but my idea for Tsunade was something like:

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The daimyo buys Tsunade’s debts from her other debtees and calls her to his palace. Tsunade can’t refuse the daimyo who offers her bets to get out of the debt, however as Tsunade is not known as the legendary sucker for nothing, she of course looses every single one of them.

Don’t know yet if I’m going to make this into lots of ‘small’ bets with increasing penalties, or one ‘huge one’.

 

I had a few other ones, but this was the one I’m most likely going to use.

 

[C_Wade]

A young(er) Tsunade, she had her debts for quite a while so she must have started right away. Since her age is supposed to be 50 in part one I was thinking maybe early thirties? Don’t know the exact date Tsunade left Konoha, but I guess it was before the Kyuubi attack?

[C_Wade]

Hmm, I’ll see, still a few weeks before I have to decide

[C_Wade]

Yea, maybe the Daimyo will simply have her dress up for him?

[Guest snake1980]

glad u like the sakura idea. on the tsunade one I like it but what about changing it up instead of him buying the debts he has them  there when tsunade shows up and tell here they talked and has a way for her to wipe the debts clean all she has to do is play a game against each person she wins its clean and clear she looses for lets say 24 to a week depends on the amount, she has to do what ever the person wants. and she cant say no about it or there will be problems.

[C_Wade]

Hmm, that actually works too, I could make it so that the people complained to the daimyo about her not paying back her debts, and since they are all influential people the daimyo can’t ignore their requests. Shouldn’t be too many different people though… how many people do you think would be good, if each one gets 1-2 scenes?

[Ookami88]

If I may say something here, how about 3-4 debters, plus Daimyo, so 4-5 in total? That should be a good enough number, and for the last scene where all guys take part in it could be a bet “All or Nothing”. For the game I propose majhong or dives.

[C_Wade]

I’ll go with dices or poker, they played cards in the anime too if I remember correctly. I have no idea about majhong, so I can’t write anything with that.

[Ookami88]

Well, I proposed mahjong (proper spelling) because of nostalgia from this other anime Ah! My Goddess, where the unlucky guy goes with a girl to a game and wins every single time. But dices and poker seem good too.