C_Wade Posted March 7, 2017 Author Report Posted March 7, 2017 (edited) 1 hour ago, Ookami88 said: I find it a little illogical that he would agree for so many of thewm going to the lord and not come back afterwards That’s not exactly what is happening, each episode is a direct continuation from the prologue. So in the Tenten episode it is as if the Satsuki episode never happened. In the one after that it will be as if the two before never happened. And so on. I think mutually exclusive is the term for that. Edited March 7, 2017 by C_Wade Quote
Ookami88 Posted March 7, 2017 Report Posted March 7, 2017 Oh, that actually makes so much sense. I thought that it is one full story, when in reality it’s a bunch of separate story arcs. Thanks for clarifying it for me. Quote
C_Wade Posted March 7, 2017 Author Report Posted March 7, 2017 You’re welcome, I think maybe I should have mentioned that somewhere. Quote
Ookami88 Posted March 7, 2017 Report Posted March 7, 2017 That would be helpful for the newcomers. Quote
C_Wade Posted March 7, 2017 Author Report Posted March 7, 2017 I’ll add it to next chapter’s AN Quote
redlox2 Posted March 8, 2017 Report Posted March 8, 2017 since they are essentially AU of each can one have like a virgin Kushina (or Kurenai) who are in the 18’s-early 20’s? Quote
C_Wade Posted March 8, 2017 Author Report Posted March 8, 2017 Yes, I think that would be possible, I planned to use young Kushina anyways. And if I don’t make her a virgin it will be someone else. Quote
Guest Kisser Posted March 8, 2017 Report Posted March 8, 2017 Nice concept…. cant wait for more…. though you missed whole stripping part as she was blacked out by drugs…… Hope next arc/ kunoichi would be stripped while conscious….. continue the great work Quote
C_Wade Posted March 8, 2017 Author Report Posted March 8, 2017 I’m glad you like the story so far. I didn’t include the stripping because she was unconscious and the chapters are at least semi-Satsuki POV. Just to clarify though, do you want a scene where the Kunoichi is stripped by someone else, strips herself, or both/either? Quote
Guest kisser Posted March 8, 2017 Report Posted March 8, 2017 50 minutes ago, C_Wade said: I’m glad you like the story so far. I didn’t include the stripping because she was unconscious and the chapters are at least semi-Satsuki POV. Just to clarify though, do you want a scene where the Kunoichi is stripped by someone else, strips herself, or both/either? Loved Satsuki's POV… it would interesting if there was POV from 3rd person ie servants etc... in stripping scenario…..Both cases would do well… there can be various interesting scenarios there…. unwilling kunoichi is forced to strip… or is stripped against her will by daimyo and his company…. Quote
C_Wade Posted March 8, 2017 Author Report Posted March 8, 2017 There will be a similar scene in the Tenten episode, which starts after the next chapter, not gonna say too much because nothing is written yet, but she will be stripped against her will Quote
C_Wade Posted March 8, 2017 Author Report Posted March 8, 2017 Small progress update, the second and final part of the Satsuki episode is done, counting just about 7750 words. The chapter will be uploaded Sunday as planned, I’ll use the time till then to get started on the Tenten episode. Hopefully this will help me keep the weekly update schedule. And once again, thanks to everyone for your support and your ideas. Quote
redlox2 Posted March 8, 2017 Report Posted March 8, 2017 Just now, C_Wade said: Small progress update, the second and final part of the Satsuki episode is done, counting just about 7750 words. The chapter will be uploaded Sunday as planned, I’ll use the time till then to get started on the Tenten episode. Hopefully this will help me keep the weekly update schedule. And once again, thanks to everyone for your support and your ideas. thanks for keeping us updated!!! just wondering since these are all separate prompts will you tell us how old (approximate) each girl/women so we can imagine a rough appearance? Quote
C_Wade Posted March 8, 2017 Author Report Posted March 8, 2017 I will try, I’m usually not fond of simply writing down my character’s stats, so I try to say it without really ‘saying’ it. As for Satsuki, it takes place shortly after the war, so I guess she would be somewhere between 17 and 20. Tenten will likely be the same age, I don’t know about Tsunade yet, but it will be most likely before the start of the Manga, so she would be between 30-40. Quote
C_Wade Posted March 10, 2017 Author Report Posted March 10, 2017 (edited) Posted this in the wrong thread... Edited March 10, 2017 by C_Wade Quote
C_Wade Posted March 10, 2017 Author Report Posted March 10, 2017 2 minutes ago, CuriousWriter said: ooh lala~ too many open tabs, I missed your’s Quote
Guest Malfoy Posted March 11, 2017 Report Posted March 11, 2017 Can't wait for degeneration of great Satsuki. Wonder will Daimyo share her with others. Out of curiosity will you be doing one character at a time(sequential) or random like game of thrones novels where characters repeat in chapters. I think you should go GOT style with poll at end to make it interesting and make us guess. Also could you re-up pussy diplomacy haven't read it and concept seams nice and your style even better Quote
C_Wade Posted March 11, 2017 Author Report Posted March 11, 2017 11 minutes ago, Guest Malfoy said: Out of curiosity will you be doing one character at a time(sequential) or random like game of thrones novels where characters repeat in chapters. I think you should go GOT style with poll at end to make it interesting and make us guess. It will be sequential for now since none of the episodes have more than 2 (maximum 3) chapters each there is not much of a point to split them up like that. Also I don’t like leaving loose ends like that hanging around. The poll could be doable, after I’m done with the episodes I have already planned out, nothing against having the same character appear several time in different situations. 14 minutes ago, Guest Malfoy said: Also could you re-up pussy diplomacy haven't read it and concept seams nice and your style even better I get asked that question a lot, but my answer will stay the same. Pussy Diplomacy will be rewritten (at some point). I won’t reupload the old version for one simple reason, which is that I don’t have the edited and proofread chapters anymore, and I won’t upload crappy chapters, or spend hours reediting them if I’m going to rewrite it at some point anyways. Also, trust me, the story sucked (imho), so you aren’t missing much. Quote
Guest Omega Posted March 12, 2017 Report Posted March 12, 2017 Hey what time does the update come today ? Quote
Guest Kanna Posted March 12, 2017 Report Posted March 12, 2017 Probably tomorrow for him. You’re from Asia right? It’s still Saturday on the West. Quote
C_Wade Posted March 12, 2017 Author Report Posted March 12, 2017 I’m from Europe actually, so it is sunday already. I’ll upload the chapter in about 2-3 hours. Gonna have a nice breakfast now and then read the chapter over one final time to catch some of the errors I have surely missed. Quote
C_Wade Posted March 12, 2017 Author Report Posted March 12, 2017 The second part of the Satsuki episode has just been posted, so check it out! http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600106100&chapter=3 In regards to the Tenten episode, which will be coming up next, things are going well. I already have a few thousand words written up and the outline is mostly done. I have the feeling it is going to be even longer than the Satsuki episode though… I’ll try to keep it down to two chapters, but it might just turn into three. Finally, I wanted to thank everyone once more for their support and their help, you guys rock. Quote
redlox2 Posted March 12, 2017 Report Posted March 12, 2017 Thank you!! Will reward later today!! Super excited!! Quote
C_Wade Posted March 12, 2017 Author Report Posted March 12, 2017 You’re welcome, I hope you’ll enjoy it! Quote
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