Mamacita Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 note that some of these should be moved to the AU category (Buffy/Spike as main pairing) but i put them here so the glitches could get fixed. they are marked in the XLS sort for moving to AU—will send that as soon as the pp39-35 chunk is finished, probably by friday 8/1. Mamacita Buffy > Het > 39-35 Buffy/Spike PAGE 37 Come With Me IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=29809 • txjmfan 239093, glitched • Kimber 249174, glitched in line 1 • cynthia 249393, glitched in line 2 IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=29809 Menu 1: • S (af (after Buffy • Lend mur eur ears • Itcingeinger • They’re all h ofh of bloody • exteextended a hand • Yeah. s jus just, is there • either,ly Bly Boy • Theganegan prowling • Buffl thl the while Menu 2: • What’s yourry, ry, luv? • in a atioation like this • as he puspastpast Riley Menu 3: • But we gottapet.pet. • Thent’st’s a chance Menu 5: • pack of smo pac pacing as I • uch uch has happened • accidentally brone one of my Menu 8: • at that horrific thou But But then • It’s note I e I meant Menu 9: • supreme oers ers and • operation?lsh lsh said Menu 10: • Yeah, B. Ca. Care to explain Menu 11: • want us to d [cuts off] • It wase hee he was in • What do tdo to deserve • Just ton Ang Angel. • No nee get get • their firime ime together Menu 12: • Angel thing, juell ell him • Still undend knd kicking • Besiwhicwhich, you still Menu 13: • couldnelp elp but wonder Menu 15: —for some reason in the text this is titled Ch19 when it should be Ch15; hard to know why, when most of the other chapter texts don’t name what chapter they are • was really out t. It. I asked Menu 16: • Jona rea reasoned • so to s. I . I asked him • doesn’t matteat yat you do • impendjailjail break Menu 17: • oneyoney, you’re home • chestobabobably near • he sai a l a low whisper • ideyidey ho, then • “Se [para] “See ya in a coupla • “y wiy with my little • blf hlf human and half demon Menu 18: • I’ve addecoupcouple of other • ya see, he ght ght it best Menu 19: • can can never hope • Warm? eyeseyes opened up You Promised IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=33076 • Jen 261220, glitched lines 1,2 • jane 264087, 264088 - duplicate review • Mariana 270368, glitched lines 4, 5 • kendall 275303, glitched • Constasnce 276063 glitched lines 2,4 • Asinine11 2035522193, blank review IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=33076 Menu 1: • in AN: Or hate it tha that • her,kingking her lips • lookedn atn at her • Silentlyslipslipped down • how it c be. be. I need • It wasighsigh • Ytherthere is • rea reached out Menu 2: • club dusbillbillowing around Menu 3: • Sppullpulled her up • moaned eligelight. They lay • for what ed led like • Thas...” [para] s...” • I w spi spill our little • drawwer and mingming it shut • everyoneows ows you can’t • Yon’t n’t even • face her,browbrow cockily • Spgringrinned Menu 4: • the of of the way • me for r wor women • ust ust can’t believe —after [walk through that door], they forgot to put a closing tag on the italics code; rest of the page is in ital’s • wrapped iep rep red • It doesneel eel like it did Menu 5: • stilutchutched tighly Menu 6: • had made alagelage of pictures • can yoar mar me wherever • sat therrvourvously holding • think I’m craut...iut...is it Menu 7: • really cominom Iom I will • going toy soy so I had • Miss Sum...cou...could you [not sure if this is a glitch?] • Buffy ed. ed. She Menu 8: • When retureturned home • presence k by by clearing • two younghan han Buffy • She dn’tdn’t breathe • didn’t pla bei being gone Menu 9: • looked iner eer eyes • “re tre tired pet • creeping up ski skin even • her towahim him • Something erenerent. Nothing Better Than the Blood of a Slayer IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=12622 • anne 72559, glitched • spikegirl7 80306, glitched line 1 • Jen 128435, 128436 - duplicate review IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=12622 Menu 2: • drain the SlayI haI had the ... I hadfangfangs buried • and drank elf elf into • covering hes. s. “Come • calling m wan want • Igonngonna come • She askhylyhyly Menu 4: • him, horwritwritten all over Menu 6: • Was his only though [cuts off] [para] H [para] He • onto ted aed and was Menu 7: • flesh. gro growled against Menu 9: • in AN: We juharehared some Menu 11: • He smirat hat her • Spike was fightoff off fog • Spwherwhere are you • please bpleaplease wake up Menu 12: • Sheked ked over • hint of pacreecreeping in • cool body molto hto hers Menu 13: • Lasremeremember was • into Giles’ ey”I [para] “I [para] haven’t • You justnk tnk that The Senses http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=34664 Menu 1: • Spike couldhelphelp but • through his veinis mis muscles • one thas...s...different • what hadbe abe at least • The ??? [line repeats] • as his s sls slid back • The vampgringrinned • Y [para] You want me? • I’m ready [line repeats] He Was Barely a Freshman http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=34170 Menu 1: • was bon Fon Febru28, 28, 1988 • minute she tolm shm she was • about ath ath ago my mum Menu 2: • going to be a littlfferfferent Forever IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=31733 • Jane 262697, 262698 - duplicate review • Karen 264560, 264561 - duplicate review • jane 270304, 270305 - duplicate review IN STORY TEXT http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=31733 Menu 1: • Each aft after her Menu 2: • Tiof sof sitting • determined Spispanspan style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> (forgot to close a tag somewhere, a lot of following text is in italics) • get thper per hand • as he drifoff off into • too late nspanspan style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> Menu 3: —there are a whole bunch of of untranslated lines a couple of para’s into the page. they are made up so there is no way to tell if there’s glitchiness in them as far as i can see. • whispered.”> His eyes Menu 4: • sc, Sp, Spike’s • was sthatthat Dawn • herpan pan style=’mso-spacerun:yes’> —reviewer notes that a chunk of ch4 seems missing, possibly also ch5. at the very end of ch4 it cuts off in the middle of a sentence so i think they’re right. not a glitch, up to you whether you ask the author to fix it. will check 5 when i get there Menu 5: • whil str stretched • kicked out or owr own home • but seld eld his gaze —in note to Spike from Buffy there appears to be missing text. 2nd para only reads: • an> [misc. tag and no further text?] —okay, other than that i can’t tell for sure whether anything is missing, except the very last para of the chapter doesn’t seem to be resolved; ch6 appears to start in the next menu w/o resolving the end of ch5. so possibly something is missing at the end of 5 also, author would have to look at it. Menu 6: • sitting at titchitchen table • on the “bes” es” with such • covers.s”> He pulled Menu 7: • &n’> • You’t ‘t say • with spanspan style’’mso-spacerun:yes’> In Rome • so am I. Hyou you • each hole. [para] &n’> Menu 8: • tied to two peoplhe whe witch • How are...” [para] pan> • &nThe tunnel-voice Menu 9: • con continued to soothe • Spiattlattled off Angel’s • a real kiss. [para] < < • “Giles-lik cle cleaned • Rome [para] t’> Menu 10: • the edieedients needed Menu 11: • leaving onfronfront the Menu 13: • asked, laughin [cuts off] Menu 14: • released the nip nipple Menu 15 • wisp of beh behind her • Giles blustered [para] “W [para] “We got • ‘cuz hejurijuries weren’t • work ont trt translation • anythingdo wdo with • need me, Ce.” e.” Quietly • of this endlguilguilt off • in its cradl sli slight Menu 16: • fingers skimmlonglong the • of theh propheand and if • I wast stt starting • some type of prtiontion. They • as to whe woe would Menu 19: • this tentativeatioationship with Menu 20: • final reg plg place Menu 21: • Cal, Sl, Spike • get her movinShe She • pulled the tip of hiord ord away Menu 22: • was just *thinthing* about Menu 23: • fault, Ilamilaming the • loked at heestiestioningly • in centered verse: Mixeood ood interwoven • mind, nextnext, she was Menu 24: • going, y fiy figured • her alr sor sore stomach • erratic heeat.eat. • her backtairtairs to her • Maybeittlittle exercise • each o. B. But, their • Aftewhilwhile, emotions • slayers, lthe the house • repair dam damage done Menu 25: • likeoldeolder brother • words stopped coldcold and • watcher witglarglare Menu 26: • he had left hrienriends, choosing • for love willinglyse. se. To give • stairs ann inn into the • guider lir lips to his Menu 27: • Giles haver ver come • that, thankfulwas was still • were l dal dark in • from under a ter ter and started • would have grabbecoupcouple of Menu 28: • mentioned it s I s I showed • Thouldould have spared • Demon. Juaitiating for his • too little too late.< [tag not closed properly, text continues in italics] • and brine exe extra bags Menu 29: • Lifting thek chk chemise • Bee ofe of what • His nostrilaredared. He • demons of Dra Draemuir dimension • resourcesWolfWolfran & Hart • “Wha Swe Sweeping the Menu 30: • pra practically purred Menu 31: • could stor. r. He could • needed ho reo reassure • me, aren’ey?”ey?” She • hour lateforefore they • began toax. ax. When • desk. gra grabbed Menu 32: • one of Ange’s h’s hands Menu 33: • began grabbitacktacks of • Dawn’s ctioction. His • dying... and e... se... so scared • Spincoincoiled from the Menu 34: • and bec the the dining Menu 35: • and quicklrnedrned away • out of onethe the seers • this. ffy ffy answered • im. el gel glanced • have.In tIn the end • bringing Ds pas palm to her • an unnecessargh. [para] gh. • hurting.” [para] .” • Menu 36: • brow quirke tha that and • Awer wer and separate • wink a cra crook of her • as he wad hid his golden • pleable ble feeling • up inprisprise at all • for, sh, she grabbed • she loved hiWoulWould always • tired of hng tng them • were sig neg next to them • to whepikepike sat • William the Bloody< [didn’t close ital tag properly] • G [para] Giles thumbed • care.... fordford!” she • of the peopleolveolved, Lorne To Be Alive Again IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=34336 • Anon 270634, 270637 - duplicate review IN STORY TEXT: Menu 1: • wit with come in go time Class —move to AU IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=21802 • txjmfan 244119, glitched • Kimber 253911, glitched line 1 IN STORY TEXT Menu 1: • every sec second together Menu 2: • anywayan san style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> She • noon and night.”> • and openee doe door Menu 3: • aboutmom mom and Menu 4: • aflictions.< sty style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> Having • ndifndif]> Menu 5: • making out> > Menu 6: • very littlout out England • or invited herehere. I have • bedrooman san style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> She Menu 7: • had told e ine in the car Menu 8: • place.” [para] p> [para] “It’s not to hard • Binceince you’ll • L off offered Menu 9: • handsome, an, and Buffy • Fred blus [cuts off] • ball wemootmoothly, and Menu 10: • stable boy brouDarlDarla and • Acrthe the valley • went to sl wil with their Menu 11: • quickly pulle her her dress • forgive me fakinaking advantage • you and e ie in America • early.> > Menu 12: • Willowpan pan style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> She • out the othestudetudents? See • p clp class=MsoNormal> • trying to se upe up with Menu 13: • went greath heh her pink • where you wal/p> /p> • with that guy. [para] &n]> [para] Anya brought • was not tointoint of the Menu 14: • witpan pan style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> Casual Menu 15: • “Wl>”What? Who’s • her the stackpapepapers. At • overview of the cl [cuts off] • of it. Thn>The other Menu 16: • was verrge rge and he • Buffy, me mme make • at you.” [para] &s]> [para] “It’s okay • could feel hotuid uid squirting • I...ple I h I have to • from behihem.hem. They Menu 17: • Darla wouldn’t themthem back in • cla class=MsoNormal> • sit the n wit with her • fine. Her>Her grandmother • explained. [para] < < [para] Behind • If the Angelusily ily only Menu 18: • Holland laughed. [para] > [para] “Now really • &nbs[end[endif]> • back toool,ool, stay • ringing. [para] > [para] “Hello Menu 19: • classes.< sty style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> • over. an>San>She was • found aft afterwards • police werennvolnvolved • “Angel, you should be . [something left out] • Buffy d tod to twist • up the stiontion, looked • call the pe?” [s/b “police”] • hospitalan an style=”mso-spacerun: yes”> So I • Everyg’s g’s fine now Menu 20: • p clp class=MsoNormal> Menu 21: • ever was. “> And he’s changed • stall. an>Wan>When Buffy • just fine.” p> • momentp> p> Meant to Be http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=31521 —move to AU —OMG, pretty hard to even SEE the glitches in this awful awful writing Menu 2: • dialled tumbeumber of Menu 3: • so there onlyonly one and • trying to caown own Xander ... gettinge ane and more • other bandbersbers even • be thatriblrible if she • welcomeSunnSunnydale Menu 4: —this entire chapter has all the single and double quote marks replaced by garbage text in addition to glitches • Buffy pointo hto her • his face consi of. of. The nice Menu 5: • off of her!’threthreatened in • he was thankfur thr that • All oem nem not quite Menu 6: • no, thereo oto other • at him wier ser sweetest • eyes of he’Daw’Dawn’ he • torturing ts shs she wanted Menu 7: • Spike ed, ed, half • other pe ane and NO • You h’t h’t had any • “Ye [para] “Yeah OLD. You my Menu 11: —in pull-down menu title appears to be glitched • week sinhe lhe last saw Arrivederci, Roma http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=29031 Menu 1: • left fieldmingming her fist Menu 2: dreams and realit [cuts off] [para] O [para] Only Spike • he was g veg very serious • guy whopirepired the term • good teet eet down the • she steppedk ink into a • they tou, [para] t, [para] things no other Menu 3: • to see...emotemotion in • to ant ant stiffness • a proud fa. “. “Good • around hisex fex finger • made to laYou You think • not stop [para] u [para] until their • of here. [para] e. Who I Am http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=33269 Menu 1: • What’ong ong with • It wants to t, at, and I She Don’t Know —move to AU IN REVIEWS http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/review.ph...ad&no=31000 • Lilnatanatancy 247692, think reviewer’s name is glitched (should it be Lilnancy?) • Anon 248777, blank review • Anon 249123, 249124 - duplicate review • spikedchick 251506, glitched line 4 • era 262294, think reviewer’s name may be glitched here too, as is first bit of review IN STORY TEXT: http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=31000 Menu 4: • paper, e hee her mother • wasn’t loc” C” Came • small giuddluddled in the • sweet hum humble Menu 6: • began to c, tr, tripping Menu 7: • watches her every m [cuts off] Menu 11: • wasn’t unusuance nce it was a • suffered sch. ch. The • bring herk. [para] k. • kitchen. [para] She [para] She knew Menu 15: • dragged him outbed,bed, and Menu 16: • out thor wor with a Menu 17: • but they wetilltill narrowed • she lookedpy, py, and • through thi kno kno-“ • Thger ger came • you wonell ell me Menu 18: • her fand rnd ran her Menu 19: • e’se’s tears were soaking Menu 20: • from whe when he • made wantwant to run Menu 23: • and sat her . He. He sat next Menu 24: • That morningisseissed her Menu 25: • tearful kiss.She She • softsoftly pushed into Menu 26: • brief smil [cuts off] [para] “ [para] “Yes, Mrs. • “Wam.am.” Menu 27: • you.”She She cupped • settle on hisuldeulders where Menu 28: • go,dy?dy?” • tummy ng ing it another • they were havanotanother baby • more chin, bn, but • Ls has have a look • Aid hid heartbeat • her a smi smile this time War, Music and Rampant Sex http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=33180 —move to AU Menu 1: • stayed sedve, ve, however • not giving her tto vto voice • a grA kiA kisser • have hed hed in their • him a realdd ldd look • slip insiher her release • body,ningning over her Want Me http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=33083 —move to AU Menu 1: • simplehirthirt and skirt • faithful companio wao watch • He’s a atorator [not sure if this is a glitch?] • ‘d s’d seen it played ouforefore and • with hertry try it • m rem ready • toward her c [cuts off] • thinkbreabreathe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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