Remy_Maxwell Posted June 4, 2017 Report Posted June 4, 2017 That sounds about right. And would the change for Sasuke be for future plans, like just small stuff or overarching plans? That is, assuming I understood you right. It doesn’t matter to be honest, just happy to see one of my favorite fics updated again. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 4, 2017 Author Report Posted June 4, 2017 I had to fix the Slutkage chapter, where she called sasuke a prick n add a sentence that a broken up sasuke would be interesting to console. alright, i’ll work on it today. if u have any other ideas, i’m all ears!  Quote
Remy_Maxwell Posted June 4, 2017 Report Posted June 4, 2017 It would be great if you could get Ino more time in the future. Not now, but maybe next chapter or something? But without Sakura tbh. Like some one on one time with Naruko, Ino, and a customer of some import to Naruko’s ambitions. Beyond that, I don’t know, I just wanna see more Ino with Naruko. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 4, 2017 Author Report Posted June 4, 2017 Ino is actually in the next chapter, she is after all Naruko’s number one gal right now. Let’s just say, its Ino’s b-day~ let your imagination go wild.  Quote
Remy_Maxwell Posted June 4, 2017 Report Posted June 4, 2017 I don’t know… My imagination is pretty wild. How about Naruko takes Ino into a flower field, where some half a dozen men are waiting? Things are wild, ends with a semen shower and no clothes for either of the ladies... Quote
Remy_Maxwell Posted June 4, 2017 Report Posted June 4, 2017 You could end that with a Publicity tour… Also known as Streaking through Konoha, without a care of the bodily fluids covering their skin almost entirely! Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 4, 2017 Author Report Posted June 4, 2017 Ino isnt ready for that, but Naruko is slowly growing into an exhibitionist. cant just go full-throttle on it. while Naru cares lil about her rep besides expanding it, Ino is still a child of a clan. Why do u think Hinata was in a gimp hood? Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 4, 2017 Author Report Posted June 4, 2017 hm, trying to figure what I can do with sakura. I can c her ending up as Naruko’s sidekick on mission n deal with some of the lackies while she tackles the boss if u get my meanin’~? Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 5, 2017 Author Report Posted June 5, 2017 Got the first part done. just two more scenes. So hopefully in a few days. RL matters have kept me occupied. Quote
Remy_Maxwell Posted June 6, 2017 Report Posted June 6, 2017 This Sakura mention for another chapter? Because I can see something like that. Quote
Guest guisniperman Posted June 8, 2017 Report Posted June 8, 2017 How would Naruko react if one of her bee fell in love with one of her clients (or got manipulated into thinking she has) and decide to drop everything? Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 8, 2017 Author Report Posted June 8, 2017 hm, loli slut brides...new business venue! Quote
Remy_Maxwell Posted June 8, 2017 Report Posted June 8, 2017 I think that would be a good idea with Sakura. Idk, to me she seems very much the type who when she does let go, she jumps all in. Like I can totally see her just as a type that if she was placed in a gangbang scenario, she would become enamored with such a thing. Far more so then even Ino, who to me is the type for legitimately ANYTHING once she gets the push. However, Ino needs the push, ie seeing someone take the step first. Sakura NEEDS the attention though. Her entire canon Part 1 character was derived from being someone that wanted attention, much like Naruto, albeit Sakura wanted that attention from Sasuke. In your story, Naruko provides a service where Sakura can easily get all the attention she could ever want. However, I still think Ino would do anything for anyone once she becomes attuned to it. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 8, 2017 Author Report Posted June 8, 2017 trust me, Ino will have all the pushes Naruko gives her. As for Sakura, I have a plan for her but she will still be Naruko’s number two on missions to back her up in a sexual situation. naruko will make sure of that. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 10, 2017 Author Report Posted June 10, 2017 (edited) alright, so a lot has happened for me right now I wasnt able to write the chapter at all these past few days. But I will try to do so after my summer class midterm (which is this coming friday). Priorities guys. Sorry XP Edited June 10, 2017 by CuriousWriter Quote
Guest guisniperman Posted June 11, 2017 Report Posted June 11, 2017 ok, that happen. What do you have planned for Tenten btw? Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 11, 2017 Author Report Posted June 11, 2017 what can I say, college is important. as for tenten, got nothing for her right now to be honest. always open to ideas. I was thinking a toy fanatic but that’s been done to death... Quote
Guest guisniperman Posted June 11, 2017 Report Posted June 11, 2017 Daddy fetish? Not sure if she's an orphan or not but I imagine Tenten being fucked over an anvil moaning "Daddy" over and over. That's how she got most of her weapons. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 11, 2017 Author Report Posted June 11, 2017 lolz! thats something to think about. Quote
Guest guisniperman Posted June 11, 2017 Report Posted June 11, 2017 Idea! Tenten began to echange favors for equipment before meeting Naruko and never bothered using contaceptives so when they meet either Tenten is pregnant and don't know it yet or she has a baby sibling which is in reality her child. Or she can get scared from her near misses by Naruko. Either off. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted June 11, 2017 Author Report Posted June 11, 2017 not rly looking from a preg part. Quote
Guest guisniperman Posted June 11, 2017 Report Posted June 11, 2017 18 minutes ago, CuriousWriter said: not rly looking from a preg part. Pregnancy scare then? With Tenten being VERY grateful that Naruko prevented her from ruining her Kunoichi career? Quote
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