Guest GIn Posted February 15, 2017 Report Posted February 15, 2017 For clan the they could have a temporary seal called the clit bird seal that works sort of like the cage bird seal but goes on and around her clit instead of the forehead. maybe have her live in with the branch house for a week with the seal on with them being able to activate and torment her with it Quote
Guest GIn Posted February 15, 2017 Report Posted February 15, 2017 I meant for that to be for the hyuga clan Quote
Guest Gin Posted February 15, 2017 Report Posted February 15, 2017 On 2/15/2017 at 4:18 PM, CuriousWriter said: kinda meh Expand I know that wasnot a very good suggestion bit k can't really think of anything else that the Hyuga might do to her. i guess the Hyuga my also get off on verbally a useing her Quote
Guest Gin Posted February 15, 2017 Report Posted February 15, 2017 ^Verbally abuseing or make clothed Hyuga naked Naruko Quote
C_Wade Posted February 15, 2017 Report Posted February 15, 2017 (edited) I don’t understand why she always needs to be abused/humiliated/tortured. I mean once in a while… meh it’s just not mine. Anyways, this story is called #1 Slut, not #1 trainwreck Just let her fuck for fuckings sake once in a while, or for money of course... Edited February 15, 2017 by C_Wade Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 15, 2017 Author Report Posted February 15, 2017 On 2/15/2017 at 4:33 PM, C_Wade said: I don’t understand why she always needs to be abused/humiliated/tortured. I mean once in a while… meh it’s just not mine. Anyways, this story is called #1 Slut, not #1 trainwreck Just let her fuck for fuckings sake once in a while, or for money of course... Expand exactly, sure humil once in a while, but only if she’s getting the bucks for it. a mile long humil train aint for me. unless she’s doing it to someone else of course. Quote
Guest guisniperman Posted February 16, 2017 Report Posted February 16, 2017 On 2/15/2017 at 4:38 PM, CuriousWriter said: exactly, sure humil once in a while, but only if she’s getting the bucks for it. a mile long humil train aint for me. unless she’s doing it to someone else of course. Expand Good to know, I’ve been worried as to the direction the story was going to. Quote
Guest Gin Posted February 16, 2017 Report Posted February 16, 2017 Sorry about that my mind was just going in that direction. Quote
Guest guisniperman Posted February 16, 2017 Report Posted February 16, 2017 I think I got an idea for how to get Naruko pregnant without saddling her with a baby. How about a kinky couple hire her services? See, the wife's infertile and they really need a child from the husband's bloodline. Also a third person in their beds. They weren't specificaly looking for Naruko but when they saw her they found their baby's mama. You can even use that to skip months at a time. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 16, 2017 Author Report Posted February 16, 2017 dude, no baby. On 2/16/2017 at 11:46 AM, Guest guisniperman said: I think I got an idea for how to get Naruko pregnant without saddling her with a baby. How about a kinky couple hire her services? See, the wife's infertile and they really need a child from the husband's bloodline. Also a third person in their beds. They weren't specificaly looking for Naruko but when they saw her they found their baby's mama. You can even use that to skip months at a time. Expand Quote
C_Wade Posted February 16, 2017 Report Posted February 16, 2017 On 2/16/2017 at 11:46 AM, Guest guisniperman said: I think I got an idea for how to get Naruko pregnant without saddling her with a baby. How about a kinky couple hire her services? See, the wife's infertile and they really need a child from the husband's bloodline. Also a third person in their beds. They weren't specificaly looking for Naruko but when they saw her they found their baby's mama. You can even use that to skip months at a time. Expand This might actually work, at least from the ‘no baby in the story sense’, but there are a few other problems I see with it 1 nobody in konoha would want a child from the demon brat 1b naruko’s looks are very unique, especially the whisker-marks, nobody would think that it wasn’t her child 2 as an orphan, i don’t think naruko would just give away her child, even for money, it would literally be the only family she has. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 16, 2017 Author Report Posted February 16, 2017 On 2/16/2017 at 12:04 PM, C_Wade said: This might actually work, at least from the ‘no baby in the story sense’, but there are a few other problems I see with it 1 nobody in konoha would want a child from the demon brat 1b naruko’s looks are very unique, especially the whisker-marks, nobody would think that it wasn’t her child 2 as an orphan, i don’t think naruko would just give away her child, even for money, it would literally be the only family she has. Expand exactly Quote
C_Wade Posted February 16, 2017 Report Posted February 16, 2017 Its not like there aren’t any other ways to make a pregnant scene, → henge for the belly and swollen breasts, and some seals (or jutsu, whatever) to make her lactate quick and easy, and if even that is a no go, simply make an omake/bad-end where she ends up pregnant and is shown a few months later. This way there is no child, and all the kinks are fulfilled, if the chapter/scene is written from the clients perspective, then it wouldn’t even be obvious that naruko isn’t really pregnant, at least until afterwards Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 16, 2017 Author Report Posted February 16, 2017 On 2/16/2017 at 12:12 PM, C_Wade said: Its not like there aren’t any other ways to make a pregnant scene, → henge for the belly and swollen breasts, and some seals (or jutsu, whatever) to make her lactate quick and easy, and if even that is a no go, simply make an omake/bad-end where she ends up pregnant and is shown a few months later. This way there is no child, and all the kinks are fulfilled, if the chapter/scene is written from the clients perspective, then it wouldn’t even be obvious that naruko isn’t really pregnant, at least until afterwards Expand the former sounds gd, idk about bad endings thou. unless they were kind of like the violated heroine ones, but that might take away from Bitter. Quote
BitterNTR Posted February 16, 2017 Report Posted February 16, 2017 On 2/16/2017 at 12:17 PM, CuriousWriter said: the former sounds gd, idk about bad endings thou. unless they were kind of like the violated heroine ones, but that might take away from Bitter. Expand Nah. Go ahead and write whatever you want to write. I don’t really care about that. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 17, 2017 Author Report Posted February 17, 2017 Hey bitter, while I love naru recruiting how would she even pitch what she does to the girls wo them running to mommy n daddy Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 17, 2017 Author Report Posted February 17, 2017 (edited) Also thinking on some cosplay fet ideas https://nhentai.net/g/182083/ like this, any other requests? Edited February 17, 2017 by CuriousWriter Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 17, 2017 Author Report Posted February 17, 2017 I kno what Hutus naru going to learn from the scroll of seals! Going a bit obscure but I like it http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Summoning:_Rashōmon Quote
BitterNTR Posted February 18, 2017 Report Posted February 18, 2017 On 2/17/2017 at 10:54 AM, CuriousWriter said: Hey bitter, while I love naru recruiting how would she even pitch what she does to the girls wo them running to mommy n daddy Expand Maybe the promise of money, or popularity amongst classmates? Ino was clearly one of the characters who wanted popularity, and Sakura could apply for both since she comes from an ordinary family. The rest of the girls can join in through peer pressure or because they want to be 'cool' too. They're young so they going to be naive enough to buy those excuses. If you want, you can maybe have a scene where a few don't want to join Naruko and tells her that they're going to tell their parents about this. You can have Naruko go about collecting blackmail on them to ensure their silence. Maybe embarrassing pictures of them? That part's up to you. Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 18, 2017 Author Report Posted February 18, 2017 Or makes forced blackmail? rmbr, she’s a business gal, she not a afraid to get messy in this. maybe knock them out n take pictures of them but yes, like ur ideas. thx u! Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 18, 2017 Author Report Posted February 18, 2017 Gd news! Ch3 is over half the way done! goshujin-sama 1 Quote
CuriousWriter Posted February 18, 2017 Author Report Posted February 18, 2017 Now here’s a big question...Where’s Danzo during all this? I doubt he’d let a Jinchuriki accumulate this much power late game. Quote
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