Mamacita Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 PAGE 38 Just Love Me http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=24252 Menu 1: [this one’s gonna drive you crazy: JUST ONE BIG PARAGRAPH!] • “Wil”Willow! Menu 2: • and movedardsards him • and starto uto unbutton [wow—between the amateurish attempt at writing porn and the level of angst involved and the frequent insertion of song lyrics into the text, i would almost think this was written by a 13- or 14-year-old; even taking into consid. that they seem to not be a native english speaker; any way to check their age?) Menu 3: • would love anke cke care of you • idea why choochoose you Menu 4: • into theininining room Menu 5: • n’t,n’t, Buffy... • best ce, ce, but it was Menu 6: • you want o doo do, baby • consconsequences could be • grabbing jackjacket off • callingceasefire [don’t know if this is a glitch or just part of her bad typing] • Heart rea reasons that Menu 7: • some teaolleolled over her • said, gng ung up and • Gileclaiclaimed • There’s a wo sao save him • forbidden sp wer were Menu 8: [thank GOD she finally got a beta!] • tingting up the dust motes Menu 10: • wng ong over to her • shked ked him Menu 11: • en sen she hugged Menu 12: [ah...the beta must have given up on her {sigh}] • She said, stg atg at one point Menu 13: • Yeee Gil Giles said • That c be be good Menu 14: • GILES!!ffy ffy and Spike • on the couchthe the living Menu 15: • Tell me what you reme” [para] “ Acting The Part http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=21421 Duplicate of 21420. 21420 has 32 chapters, 21421 only 17 although they are written in the same time period. Must have accidentally dup’d it somehow. I would delete 21421, keep 21420 which is posted in AU as it should be. One Moment More http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=31007 Menu 3: • her arm acrBuffBuffy’s back • little love by hide.ide. 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And the Menu 6: • that Ge Get some • etiquette I g I get off • The bike!tingting off the Menu 7: • He is yingying my face Menu 8: • want you to bwarmwarm.” • suresure I should • throat.t fat fair Menu 9: • loss fords.rds. Never Menu 10: —first of all, i think this should be labeled as Ch10, not Ch11 • minSoftSoft at first • can’t get er.er. Muse http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=29790 Menu 1: • up in leidleidoscope of • pick a bed alr,. B,. But none • realized handhand had • dumpster toccuoccupied it • for this [para] “T [para] “That Menu 2: • excuse foickeickers • hrushrust his coat • Buffy for thght ght and enjoy • suspsuspected • someplace q whe where we • as shtchetched his • jacket foldfolded it • shuddered against. [para] . • ah. ah. Repeat • then, sned,ned, “you • with We We could Falling Under http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=30587 Menu 1: • lush mouthkingking very Menu 3: • makmovemove. He • words wereded ded as • back and ed aed at • eft eft before the sun • 2 fledgling vampires. [para] ] [para] “What cuz • regainheirheir balance • with her arms sm as he • Hen ren remembered Menu 4: • S lov love with Menu 5: • black kneeh boh boots • Cou aro around them Menu 6: • whlep elp,elp,” he Menu 9: • Its htimetime Buffy • at Willow and Xr. [para] r. • sure hthouthought about Menu 10: • looked illoillow when Menu 12: • es Des Dawn?” Menu 15: • open his can [para] “S [para] “Six Menu 16: • was that? *t? * Spike That Thing http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=30599 Menu 1: • “Hello?&quofontfont> • means... somethitherther than • “Mm-mm,t; t; she denied • adorable. hap happened • &quoe dee deep stroke • you’re--&quofontfont> • Abthatthat thing... All That Love Went to Waste http://buffy.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=18707 Menu 1: • on paper had he heartfelt Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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