Billion Dollar Harem

[Guest Joe]

I’ve been loving the last few chapters. Though I hope that Bella’s drug addiction plotline goes somewhere… hot? dark? dramatic? I don’t know, but the idea of Bella being broken in a different way is interesting to me. If only because it’s different from the “conventional” mind break narrative, which Taylor has followed for the most part. 

[Mal]

Hey guys, sorry I haven’t gotten a chance to address all the comments from the previous chapter. Unfortunately my job, my RL (which to be fair barely exists), and my work on the story has taken up all of my time recently. I’d sit down to do it now, but I have to make a choice. Spend 2 hours writing up responses to all your wonderful comments, or work on BDH for that long. Normally, I’d just do the responses since I have the entire month to get the chapter done. But, in this case, I go on vacation next week so I really only have this week and maybe the first couple of days in the last week of Nov to get it finished if I have any hope of posting it before December 1. 

Seeing as right now I’m on about page 5, I am, unfortunately, going to have to  choose to work on the story instead. As I said in my previous post I really want to spend all of December working on my original. I’m really hoping I can get a lot of good work done on it while things are slow here. So, I’m just not going to be able to work on addressing comments this time around. I really hope that doesn’t dissuade anyone from commenting or asking any questions you have. I promise after I post in November I’ll address comments at that time.

In the meantime, I hope you all are enjoying chapter 46. Please know that I’m hard at work on 47 and that I am very much looking forward to reading any and all comments or questions you may have.

Till next time,

-Mal

[Juan]

Mal, I’m very impressed with the massive body of work that you’ve done, all without financial motive. Those numbers are impressive and you should feel very proud. Congrats again on crossing 200,000 dragon prints. Thing is, I believe if someone views more than one chapter at a time, it still only counts as one print. So really, your chapters probably have even more views in total. 

You keep the story fresh and surprising, appealing to a very wide variety of tastes. From the rougher crowd to the more traditional drama and romance readers, you give everyone a little taste of what they like most. And again, nothing stops someone from just reading a chapter once for plot and then never coming back to it. 

I’m very excited to see what you have in store for us, both in BDH and in the book you’re writing. Thank you and please keep up the great work. 

[Guest Soro]

I was happily surprised to learn that this story is still a WIP as most stories you find online are a decade old and abandoned.

I really enjoyed reading all of it and am very much looking forward to what you have in store for the future.

Also i'd like to add a small remark:

I see why you (have to) do it, but I personally often find myself a little confused, when you address the girls with their nationality or hair color – especially in situations, when most or all of the girls are present.

 

[Mal]

Hey guys, just a super quick update. We had a family health emergency last week. Don’t worry, everything is fine, (more or less now). There’s just some recovery to be done, but this event did cut into how much time I had to write. The end result is I’m now looking to finish chapter 47 sometime in the first week of December (I hope), and plan to post it during that second week.  I’ll also respond to the comments when I post the chapter.

Ok  that’s it for now. Just wanted to keep you guys in the loop.

Till next time,

-Mal

[Guest Romavictrix]

Hope everything is well with your family Mal! Post when you can. 

[Sazbi]

Hope everything’s all right, Mal! 

[Mal]

Everything is good. I’ll fill you guys in more sometime late tonight…. hint, hint, wink, wink….

Edited December 16, 2019 by Mal

[Mal]

Greetings from the Black!

Hi everyone, I’m back / here, or something again! I know its been a while and for that I do apologize. It seems like all I do lately is miss my self imposed deadlines… In this case, I have one good excuse and one not so good excuse… First, let me put everyone’s worries to bed. I am fine, and the family medical emergency which kept me from writing for about a week has been resolved. The effected family member is doing better and getting stronger every day. We (my family and I) all have high hopes that a full recovery for the person involved is not only possible, but is well underway. So that is excuse number 1. I had a big family emergency which drastically cut into the time I had to work. Excuse number 2 isn’t nearly as good… but here it goes… As some of you know I struggle with mental health issues from time to time, and while I wouldn’t say this was that… I went through a period of about 2 weeks where I found it nearly impossible to motivate myself to work. As you will see when you read this chapter, it is something different and introduces a new character ( I won’t revel who here), but because I was doing something kind of new with a kind of new character the story didn’t come as easily to me as chapters of BDH usually do, add to that a general feeling of malaise and the writing of this chapter just sort of dragged on…. I missed many self imposed deadlines which caused me to feel worse and it wasn’t easy to pull my shit together…. All I have to say is thank goodness my editor is a very patient person!

Okay, enough of that. I want very much to talk about this chapter! But I also don’t want to give anything away. What I’ll say for now is that this chapter is a prologue and it introduces one of the two remaining women who will join Alex’s harem. In this chapter we learn even more of Alex’s back story… the whys and more importantly the hows behind him pulling off the bold kidnappings on that first night 46 days ago. Also, if you pay attention, you’ll be able to figure out a pretty detailed timeline of how and when things came together. The last thing I’ll say about the chapter at least before people have had a chance to read it, is that it adds a lot more details about Arcadia and how it works…

Chapter 48 will also likely be mostly a prologue. But I may jump down the timeline and give you guys a surprise at the end. I haven’t really decided yet. It will probably depend on how things come together. But the main thing the next chapter will focus on is to further develop the new character and to give you guys more insight on how many of the women in Alex’s harem came to be captured. Depending on how many pages it takes to finish this prologue story, I may end up back in the harem and back on the normal timeline. There’s a cliffhanger that needs wrapping up there, and then I want to do a time jump to get us to the point where I can bring in the final celebrity. If you guys remember from way way back, this last celeb will be the one you guys voted on, and who I told you would be one of two celebrities. I can’t say for sure when she’ll be unveiled, but it is coming very soon. 

This is the part where I’d normally address your comments, but its been so long since I’ve done properly done this that I’m not exactly sure where I left off. I know its been a long time since I’ve done this, but rest assured the I’ve read all your wonderful comments and I love hearing from you. Because its been a while, I promise you guys that I’ll be bouncing in the next few days and if you have a comment or a question you’d like addressed post it up. I’m going to try to be around and respond to them. And next time I post a chapter, I will make sure I address any comments that I haven’t gotten to. 

Thank you guys so much and I can’t wait to hear your responses to this chapter and to the new celebrity!

Till next time,

-Mal

Edited December 17, 2019 by Mal

[Sazbi]

Initially from the polling I did not care for the new girl, but now I’m for it.  Can’t wait for the training she goes through in the next chapter.  Only now I wonder how she’ll fit in with the rest of the harem.  Will she have to pretend to be kidnapped? Will she be content of not being one of the higher levels even though she is the first slave? Back with the others, I think Ari is the last one to wrap up before the time jump. Hopefully she still stays as a petgirl  . 

[Juan]

Pretty cool to learn a lot about Arcadia. It makes Bella’s path over the last dozen or so chapters very interesting. She has been even hornier and sluttier than before the toilet punishment. And I guess, now that I think about it, generally obedient and a good citizen of the harem. 

I’m also very curious to see how much drama Kendall’s intro to the harem will cause. I hope that there’s some instant tension with Emma IF Kendall feels her devotion to Alex doesn’t involve obedience to Emma. I’m sure whatever you do will be awesome though. Great work!!

[Mal]

Hey guys!

I noticed there were a couple of posts and thought I’d pop on (as promised) to address them.

Sazbi: First off, thank you so much for continuing to comment, even when I was having trouble putting this together and it may have seemed like I might not post  . Also, thank you for inquiring about my wellness. It was a hard couple of weeks after my family medical emergency. Dealing with that, work, and feeling pressure to get the chapter done made it very hard for me to work and focus. The support you and everyone here shows me is amazing and, as I’ve said before, is probably the only reason Billion Dollar Harem has survived this long. At this point, I want to finish it for you fans much more than I want to finish it for me (I know how it ends already  .  As to your post, the new girl in 47 isn’t the poll girl. The last fan poll was a sort of feeler to see who you guys MIGHT want to see and when it concluded, I told you guys it would be one of two people. Those two ladies were Alexandra Daddario and Gal Gadot. So one of them will be introduced as the final girl, and likely soon at that. I’m assuming, by the wording of your post that your comment and question refers to Kendall . In that regard, let me say this, her introduction into the harem will be unique, and I can promise you that it will be fun. I can’t / don’t want to say anymore about it because I don’t want to give anything away. Finally, your comment about the last girl before the time jump. In my previous post, I said something like there’s one more thing to deal with before the time jump or something to that effect. What I was referring to wasn’t one girl, so much as an event, and that event, of course, is the proposal cliffhanger I left off with at the end of 46. Once that is wrapped up, I’ll move forward with the time jump.

Juan: Arcadia is an interesting plot twist. It wasn’t something that I went into the story intending to add. But after the first… I don’ t know, ten-twelve chapters at most I started thinking about how hard it would be to pull off the “heist” Alex does in the first chapter. At first I just thought “well this is a porno, who cares how he did it.” But as I’ve said from the beginning, what I care about most, within the context of the story, is believably. I want you guys to feel that, inside the story, that this guy could really have pulled this off. So I started thinking about “well, what if he had an inside man?” And the idea of a celebrity who was somehow forced to help him just sort of snowballed out of that, as did the Arcadia plot line. I would say that certainly by chapter 20 or so the idea of this drug and more or less how it might work had taken shape. But I also didn’t want to lose one of the more important plot points to a drug that could easily break these celebrity’s minds down. And that is just the fact that Alex enjoys the breaking process. He doesn’t want to rely on a drug and he would much prefer not to use it. So, in Bella’s case, I think he felt he’d had enough of her shit and wanted to make sure she was kept in line. And as for Kendall, he needed to ensure she was fanatically loyal to keep his secret and to perform the job he needed of her. In general, I don’t expect you’ll see too much more Arcadia moving forward (there are obviously some plot points involving it to tie up first), but after that, Alex prefers to and will always try to rely on the methods which have served him well so far. (and yes I love the new Bella too ) As for Kendall’s intro to the harem and the drama which will likely follow… again, I can’t really say that would be giving too much away. All I can say is what I told Sazbi, it will be fun and I promise it will be entertaining.

Thanks so much you two for the comments and questions. I’ll be around for a few more days at least if anyone else posts between now and then, I’ll be around to answer them.

Till next time,

-Mal

[Guest Bill Friese]

First off, I want to make sure that your family is well. I’ve been thinking about you and I hope that all is well. As for the chapter, what a shock! I was surprised to see how quickly Alex took advantage of Kendall, going right into breaking her. In addition, I enjoyed hearing more about Alex’s origins at the beginning of the chapter.  In addition, Arcadia was not what I had expected. I can’t wait to see how it affects the harem.

[Juan]

It seems to be implied that Alex takes Arcadia himself- Based on the description of how it affects men with the ability to have tons of sex and the sometimes uncontrollable lust and rage he displays. I respect a lot that you didn't say it outright. But figured I'd ask about it if you wanted to comment. 

[Guest King]

Hey Mal, it's a little belated but Merry Christmas! 

As I've said in the past – the world of BDH has been really fun and exciting to be a part off. 

I'm happy you and yours are better – I hope you had a lovely Christmas.

I'm excited with the way things are going In BDH. I really love how it can appeal to everyone – fans of romance and fans of taboo rough play. 

I'm excited for the next chapter, and was thinking you really should get involved with monetising literature such as books etc as I would love to read more – as long as there is a little darkness to satiate the sexual demons I'm sure everyone has haha. 

Just to reiterate – Merry Christmas! 

- King 

AKA – Zack 

  

[Mal]

Hey guys,

I really hate doing this. But I’m putting Billion Dollar Harem on the back burner for a maybe a month or two. I don’t really have an excuse except I think I’m getting a little burnt out on it. In the mean time, I’m going to be working on a new series called Going Gonzo. It will be a series of unconnected stories which will contain little to no plot. The only thing linking them together will be a magic / alien viewing screen that allows the viewer to see anything their heart’s desire. 

To decide who and what will be seen. I’m using the forum of another site I post my stories at to create a poll that users can vote. I’ve also created, on that site, another post where users can offer up suggestions for celebs and content they’d like to see featured in the poll.  I’m not sure if I’m allowed to do this, but if you’d like to participate, the site is called Celebrity Story Library, and the posts to look for are “The Going Gonzo Suggestion Box” for dropping off any suggestions, and the Going Gonzo polls will be labeled by number. (The second poll has 3 days left on it if you’re interested). I’ll happily take your suggestions here, but the only way to vote is on that site….

In other news, this has been a horribly shitty month for me, well past two weeks really. I got horribly sick with the flu (I never get sick fyi). The last time I was really sick was at least 5-6 years ago. I also wrecked my car. I was driving to a friends house where we were me and some friends were going on a day trip to a nearby big city to see the new Star Wars in Imax… Well I hit a patch of ice and flew off the road down a 25 foot embankment. The car was nearly a total loss and cost me the full deductible (money I certainly didn’t have) to repair it. Not to mention the fact that I nearly died… If the car had rolled, or there had been an on-coming vehicle, it would be my ghost typing this right now (not that I believe in ghosts ). Then finally, days after my wreck, I basically lost my job. I found out that my job was being outsourced, and if I wanted to keep it, I’d have to reapply with the new company.

So yeah, bright cheery start to the new year….

In the week since those two weeks, I’m over the flu, just barely (still coughing and hacking up unrecognizable crap), but feeling much better. My car is done being fixed, I got it back just today actually. And I’ve applied and gotten the job with the new company. Now lets just hope they don’t fuck with shit too much so that I can continue to write and slack off while I’m here…. <fingers crossed>

Anyways, I’m planning to post the first episode of Going Gonzo sometime next week. If you have any questions, or comments or anything, feel free to let me know. I’m hoping that working with some celebs who aren’t in BDH will get me in the mood to get back to work on it. And in the mean time, you’ll have some random hot fantasies to read. Oh, the first episode (voted on by fans) will star Elsa Hosk of Victoria Secret fame in a cons style gangbang!

That’s it for now guys, till next time,

-Mal

[Guest Bill Friese]

I’m sorry to hear about your illness, get well soon!

[Sazbi]

Sorry to hear about that, Mal. Take as long as you need, and hope the year gets better.

[Guest King]

Hey Male,

To reiterate what some others have said – really upsetting to hear how things have just not been going your way. It's nice to see your productive rebound since – what with you keeping your job, fixing your car, and well… Not dying   

 

After writing a fiction for as long as you have with BDH – its common for boredom to arise – so I'm looking forward to reading the new story and am happy for the change of scenery. I'll go on the other site to leave some suggestions  

 

It did seem like you hit rock bottom, the best thing about that is there is no where to go but ⬆️

 

- Zack

 

[Guest King]

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[Guest Tricky Dick]

Hey,

So I believe I’ve read the whole story.  It seems to conclude with a flashback to the first slave…. Kendall.  On the previous page with Alex nearing a proposal of marriage to Emma at the present timeline...  Correct? 

I have two immediate thoughts.  If Chloe had killed Alex with the shiv early on…. The whole thing would have been over.  The guards don’t keep getting paid without Alex and even if they kill the girls…. They’re still FREE from the prison.  Better to be dead then a permanent fuck toy.

And two… Eventually the women will grow old.  Alex will get older.  Even if he’s only say 10 years older than the oldest member….. How long can all this go on?

It was REALLY smart to capture them without asking for any ransom…. this way there is no further contact with family or authorities and virtually NO CHANCE of the women ever being discovered.  The birthday scene with Emma was EPIC…. extremely good writing.  Of course having the loyal guards is essential.  One traitor would ruin the entire plan.

But I come back to ….. How will it all end.  Will Alex eventually kill off all the women when he’s grown tired of them?  Is he planning to keep banging them into their 40’s and 50’s and beyond… hahaha.  Granted Jennifer Aniston is SMOKIN HOT at 50…. but say 30 years in that place???   Oh and he’s already showing great affection beyond treating them as slaves…. He has genuine feelings for them.  How COULD he bring himself to kill them?  AND if he finally lets them all go…. what will happen to him?  Will the Stockholm Syndrome protect him from being locked up….  Will the world just consider them dead after 5 years?

At any rate…. the story is really quite captivating.  I found it to be a page turner….. and very erotic even  when it was brutal.  I don’t care for brutality or torture but I understand the need to control the behavior of the prisoners less things get out of control.  I believe you’ve moved on to another project.  But I do hope you decide to complete this story…. I’m very interested to see how it ends…. if it’s realistic or just some happy ending where there is no resolution or the issue I’ve raised isn’t addressed.

Thanks very much.


Richard

 

[Guest Romavictrix]

Hey Mal! Hope all is well and you return soon! 

[Sazbi]

Hope you’re taking care from all of this coronavirus situation and everything’s getting better for you, Mal. 

[Guest Alpa]

Speaking of the coronavirus situation, does Alex have a plan for any serious injuries and/or illnesses for either the ladies or the guards? Weather it be just a stockpile of easily accessible drugs and other medical equipment, right on up to medical personal (and things like an O.R.) for things like surgeries? Or would he have to ship them in or the injured party/s out?

[Guest Joe]

The girls definitely do not practice social distancing!