Billion Dollar Harem

[Guest Bill Friese]

What a great conclusion to the Taylor-Bella-Cara triangle! It’s been a while since we’ve had an all-smut chapter, and this one did not disappoint. I forgot to say this last chapter, but the use of food was so hot! Bella’s rage was so well done and realistic. I can’t wait to see how the guards torture Taylor.

 

Great chapter as always!

[Guest Alpa]

My current top 5 would be

1 Sophie Turner

2 Maisie Williams

3 Emma Watson

4 Camren Bicondova

5 Alexandra Daddario.

 

Although, I do have other favorites like Jeri Ryan during her run on Star Trek Voyager, Tricia Helfer from the reimagined Battlestar Galactica, Lucy Lawless and Renee O’Connor from Xena The Warrior Princess, Chloe Bennet and Elizabeth Henstridge from Agents of Shield, Elizabeth Olsen from the MCU films, Jodelle Ferland and Melissa O’Neil from Dark Matter and Dakota Blue Richards, recently of Endeavour. And I don’t think that anybody would’ve minded waiting for a few more days for you to have wrapped up the Taylor Swift punishment in this chapter

[Mal]

I Alright gang, sorry it took me so long to get back on and address the comments, but I’ve had some relaxing days off and I just didn’t feel motivated to do much other than sit at home and play video games  .But I’m here now. First off, I’m really hoping you guys have been enjoying chapter 42. From the few comments, PMs and emails I’ve gotten so far it seems like most people are so that’s great! Also, I’m still working hard on chapter 43 and I still have high hopes to get it to you guys by the end of the month. Ok, let me address the comments so I can go back to work on BDH .

Romavictrix: Lets see. I like your list, but I have to say its not quite for me. Most of the girls there are of middling hotness (at least in the celebrity world) for me. Selena Gomez is pretty hot, but she just doesn’t have that wow factor for me. Jessica Alba and Elisha Cuthbert are hot, and it if was 10 years ago, I’d definitely feel better about them. Jessica Alba circa Sin City… wowzers…  I watch The Flash and I think Danielle Panabaker is pretty damn fine, she just wouldn't top out on my list. I saved the best for last. Alexandra Daddario I certainly approve of. I think she is super hot. She doesn't have what I would think of as a perfect body, (which is really the only thing that keeps her out of my top 5). But, I love her eyes... Those eyes I maintain could melt steel…

Bill Friese: I like your list too. But again most of the girls there wouldn’t top out my list. For one thing, Demi Lovato has a pretty enough face, but, I really don’t care for her body type. Quite frankly, she is pretty far out of my top 20/25 or so… I obviously like Taylor and Ariana. Both are super hot and I love their body types even though they are different. I like tiny and petite almost as much as I like tall and slender. Taylor also has the light colored eyes that I really like so yeah. I think both Taylor and Ariana would be in my top 20, just not top 5… Finally with Elle. I think she’s pretty hot too, but something about her face… maybe its just a little asymmetrical… a tiny defect to be sure, but its enough to keep her out of my top 20/25...She does have amazing eyes though, I will give her that… Finally, to address your second comment, I’m really happy that it seems you liked the last two chapters. I loved my idea for Emma to cover her feet in sweaty liverwurst juices and make Taylor suck on them… I thought it was very fun! I’m also happy that you like the resolution to the Taylor-Bella-Cara love triangle. When I first started writing 42. I knew Bella’s turn was going to be interesting, but it didn’t honestly occur to me for her to take a revenge pee on Taylor until I started writing her turn. However, as soon as the idea came to me I knew I had to implement it… just too much fun. I loved the poetic justice of the situation. As far as Cara’s reaction. I had originally intended for Cara to take a turn just like everyone else. But as the scene developed I just thought it was out of character for her and changed it mid scene to what happened. 

Joe: Funny enough, I don’t read a lot of celebrity fan fiction. Its nothing against those who write it, but most of the writing is pretty terrible and I find it so hard to get into a story when I’m correcting grammar and spelling mistakes in my head and finding tons of continuity errors… Most people who write celeb fan fiction just seem to be interested in the “money shot” so to speak. Where all they’re interested in is the smut, or even just putting the celeb in some horribly fucked up situation. But almost none care about developing the story or explaining how the celeb ended up in the compromising position, especially in mind break stories…  Honestly, a lot of my inspiration comes from porn. I see positions or situations and think to myself “how could I put a celebrity into something like this  .” There are a few writers that I’ve read and liked though. There is a writer called Muhabba I think he writes mostly on CSL (Celebrity Story Library) but I’ve found he does a really good job developing a story and not just word vomiting porn onto a page… Another few good writers on CSL are Noopster, Dark_Swordsman, Blackjack and MiamiLyfe. I’ve read a few stories over there and liked those guys the best. 

Well: Not at the moment. Currently all my focus is on Billion Dollar Harem. As you guys know, I’ve got a sixty chapter end game in mind, and I really want to start working toward finishing it. At some point, I’d like to start working on some original writing that I might be able to market and make a little money out of my work, but I really want to finish BDH, and not having it done really divides my attention too much to get much work done on anything else…

Sazbi: Well, first thing, I’m glad you liked 42. I knew from the beginning that I didn’t want every one of the girls to participate. But honestly going into it I had no idea who would and wouldn’t be taking a ride on Taylor’s face (other than Margot obviously). Similarly, I know the Finale with Taylor and the guards and Taylor and Alex is going to be wild, but at this point I honestly have no idea how the whole thing is going to play out. Should be very interesting though. I would certainly say that Taylor is forever changed. Honestly, I would say everyone of the original 5 girls are forever changed, just in different ways. Taylor has probably been the most affected of the original group, however. I think she was boarder line prudish in the beginning, and now, she is probably the biggest slut in the harem. As to the Cara situation, I have big big plans for the Emma Cara relationship especially as it pertains to one of the two new additions. I can’t say more obviously, but a lot of the things that have happened and will happen between them has been well planned. You know, I didn’t think about Ari being affected by the guards. I mostly had her sleeping because I knew she wasn’t going to be taking part in the show and wanted an easy way to not have to explain what she was doing and how she was reacting… It does make a ton of sense though that she likely wouldn’t be able to sleep with them in the room though… I probably could have handled it better…  

Alpa: Hey man nice to hear from you again, it seems like its been a while. Lets see, I have very mixed feelings about your list. First off, let me just say this about Sophie Turner. For me its like she’s either super hot or …. just fugly… I can’t explain it. Sometimes I see a picture of her and I just think why do people think she’s hot… Other times I see one and I’m like holy shit why is she not in my top 10! All that aside though, she does have beautiful eyes and Eyes are probably my favorite feature…. Maise is cute, but I just have a really hard time calling her hot. For me she looks like the cute girl who lives two houses down. She’s only hot because you see her a lot… but if you were to pass by her on the street and didn’t know her you probably wouldn’t take much notice. Emma obviously is amazing. I commented on Alexandra above. As for Carmen, I don’t really know anything about her. I had to google her to even know what she looked like. She looks pretty hot though, but without knowing her I’d find it really hard to say much more. I was never much of a Jeri Ryan fan or Star Trek Voyager either for that matter. It seems to me that Star Trek just cast her to save that series… However, I love love love Tricia Helfer. You’re right, on BSG she was fucking amazing. (Also a big fan of her voice work in Mass Effect 2  . The girls from Xena are ok, much better back in the day. I love the girls from Agents of Shield, but I’ll say that I honestly find Elizabeth just a little hotter than Chloe, not that they aren’t both super fine. Ellizabeth Olsen is also attractive, I just wouldn’t put her in my top 20/25… and I have no idea who Jodelle Ferland or Melissa O’Neil are  . Dakota Blue Richards isn’t my cup of tea though. I don’t care for her body type at all and she just has a decent face… 

Going to address Alpa’s last comment for everyone. There are two big reasons why I ended up releasing early and not just finishing up. If it was a matter of a few days, I would have just finished it up. But if I had delayed, it would have taken me at least 3-4 days to finish. Then, my editor would be back on vacation which would have added another week to the release date. Add to that after he got back and did the edits, it would have taken me 1-2 days to make the corrections he suggested… All told if I had waited, 42 wouldn’t have come out till close on to the end of June and I just didn’t really want to wait that long. I’ve kept you guys waiting long enough…   

Alrighty guys, that’s it. Thanks as always for your comments, and I look forward to chatting with you guys more in the future. Remember, look for BDH 43 sometime near the end of the month, which will likely be the next time I’ll be back on to address comments. But rest assured, if you guys have something to say, I’ll do my best to respond.

Till next time,

-Mal

Edited June 15, 2019 by Mal

[Guest King]

Hey Mal, 

Really enjoying the progression of the harem but I feel like Alex has a much smaller part in terms of the sexual encounters in the harem nowadays. Also Ari still seems to be a bit part player which is unfortunate because she is one of the hottest members in the Harem. 

Excited for these new additions and I just wanted to make a little list of the celebrities I would love to see in the harem

1) Emilia Clarke

2) Gal Gadot (Wonder Woman roleplays ) 

3) Shakira 

4) Meghan Fox

5) Scarlett Johansson

 

look forward to chapter 43!

Thanks for the best quality celebrity fanfiction out there!!

[Guest Morgan]

Hey cap’n, great stories. Looking forward to the next part! I like everything that’s been going on with Ariana. I hope that she and Felicity get some more time together. 

If this was twenty years ago Alyson Hannigan would be the only name on my list, but since it isn’t here’s my five. 

1. Emily Bett Rickards 
2. Tessa Thompson
3. Jade Tailor
4. Elizabeth Banks
5. Anna Kendrick

[Guest Romavictrix]

Hey Mal,Jessica Alba and Elisha Cuthbert were my highschool crushes a few years ago... lol 

[Mal]

Hey everyone! So I just popped on to give you all a quick update. Unfortunately, chapter 43 won’t be done by the end of the month. A couple of weeks ago at work, I took a tremendously klutzy fall of a set of stairs onto a concrete footpath. I skinned up both my legs very badly and sprained my wrist. That tumble left me sore and fatigued and as a result, the very next night, I took a second fall down an entire flight of stairs. Luckily, I wasn’t seriously hurt… I’m honestly pretty sure I could have died in that second fall if things had gone just a little differently. But because of that second fall, I had to take it very easy the past 10-12 days or so. I probably could have done some writing as I recovered, but I was very tired and sore and I didn’t really feel up to anything but sitting in one place and doing absolutely nothing… This means, as I said at the beginning, that chapter 43 won’t be ready by the end of the month. I’m feeling much better now, my wrist is still pretty sore, but I’m anxious to get back to work on the story, so that is just what I plan to do. It is my hope that I can finish it by early next week and have it ready for publishing by the week of 7/7… I know this is a disappointment for many of you, and I apologize for that, but I just want you all to know that I plan to buckle down this week and get it done. I’ll let you guys know if there are any further developments, but hopefully the next time you hear from me will be when I publish chapter 43 in about a week or so…

Till next time,

-Mal

[Guest ArcherNexus]

It's okay, just stay away from any stairs in the meantime, please. 

Just kidding, glad you're not seriously hurt. Looking forward to the next chapter, but you take your time and relax. Recovery comes first. 

[Guest Romavictrix]

Hey Mal, 

 

I understand m8. Take care of yourswld and we will see you when your ready! Might wanna take a different stairway to heaven next time though.... jk ive been where you are sitting and its not fun... get well soon man. 

[Guest Well]

I hope you get better soon after  your fall. 

I love the last chapter god can Taylor  get  more of a slut? I love it when she says  that  i do anything. 

[Juan]

Mal,

Holy crap. So sorry to hear about your falls. We’re just glad that you’re OK. Please take care of yourself and focus on your health. Get well soon, man. 

[Guest Bill Friese]

Get well soon. Don’t try to rush anything. Please make sure to take care of yourself.

[Guest Joe]

Damn man. Sounds like you’ve had a rough couple of weeks, Mal. Hope your recovery goes well. Hang tough!

[Mal]

Hey everyone!

First off, I wanted to thank everyone for the support and concern you’ve shown for my well being this past, tremulous month. It hasn’t been easy with the injuries I incurred from those two falls, but I pushed through it and its finally here, if a little late. That’s right, chapter 43 is here!

I’m not going to do what I normally do and go through a big long spiel. For one thing, I’ve been up for like 24 hours and I’m extremely tired. For another, I’m just about out of time and wanted to get this up before I have to been done for the day. I’ll try to swing back on sometime in the next few days to give a little insight into this chapter and the next. But for now, enjoy the chapter and I look forward to hearing from you all again real soon.

Till next time,

-Mal

[Sazbi]

Hope you’re feeling better, Mal and taking it easy. Loved the conclusion to Taylor’s punishment, and what I think it’s leading to for Taylor’s future   If I’m right, Ari wanted something to do and it seemed like she might be getting more than she bargained for. So definitely can’t wait for the next one!

[Mal]

Hey gang,

I just popped on for my promised check in. I’m sure by now most of you have read the chapter, so I won’t really say much about it. All I really have to say in regards to chapter 43 at this point is that it, (43) and the previous chapter (42) were some of the most difficult I’ve done since the pool party chapters. Writing chapters filled with basically non-stop sex really isn’t fun. Its tedious and almost kind of boring. That isn’t to say that they aren’t fun to read, and that they can be great pay off chapters for everyone reading along. But for me, the writing of those kind of chapters is just hard to push though. There is a lot of repetition, and little dialogue to alleviate the big bulky paragraphs of description… Just all an all not very fun to write. In this case it was worth it. This was Taylor’s big pay off chapter, the culmination of many many chapters worth of plot for her, and I think, especially in her case (being particularly slutty at this point), that such a chapter had to be filled with sex…  And as for the dog / barking stuff… I never really intended to make Taylor a dog-girl…. I  mostly used that stuff for a new form of humiliation.  While I think it could be interesting to take Taylor down that path, I’m sure many of you would agree that such a transformation would only serve to limit her character as beyond that point she would be locked into a role similar to Ariana and I just don’t think that would be in the best service to the story….

Now, let me just say a little about the whats next for me and for BDH. For the rest of July, I plan to work on some original fiction. As I stated many months back, I would really like to create some fiction that I can market and sell. My financial situation at this point is so dismal that I’m sure it would make most of you tremendously sad if you knew even half of the truth… The only way I can see to change that is to create a story that I can market without being sued, in other words, an original story. A while back, I began work on such a story, but the scope and honestly the setting were just far too ambitious for a first attempt at this sort of thing. Therefore, I have put that story on the back burner, and embarked on a new project with a much more modest, yet still sexy as fuck, story. I don’t want to go into too many details at this point. But I will say that I plan to work on this each month after I’ve published that month’s chapter of BDH. I plan to work in small manageable “chapters” of about 50 pages each that I’ll put up for sale on Amazon as soon as they are ready. My current goal for this first story is to write 3-4 of these 50 page “chapters,” and then to see where the story and I am ready to go from there…  I’ll try to keep you guys posted, as its still in the early stages of development…

As for BDH 44 and moving forward. I plan for chapter 44 right now to continue to evolve a few of the plot lines that have been developing in the past several chapters as well as for it to contain the fan selected scene featuring Emma, Ari and Alex. I can’t really say yet what plot lines I’ll be moving forward on… But I can say that I have a rough guide that I’ll be following moving forward all the way to chapter 50. Most likely, the next 3-4 chapters (depending on how long it takes to resolve certain things) will all take place in the next few days following the Taylor show. I then plan for there to be a fairly big time jump (maybe the largest time jump we’ve had yet…. I plan for the end of that time jump chapter to tease the final two celebrities who will enter Alex’s harem.  So hopefully sometime in the next 4 possibly 5 chapters you guys will know. After that, I plan to bring those characters in very quickly (much faster than the other ladies). By chapter 50, I plan for all the girls to be in place. Then I’ll begin ramping up towards the big finish. I expect this to take approximately 10 chapters. I know all this is a long way off… But I hope to bring BDH to its dramatic climax (pun intended) sometime right around chapter 60.

All right guys, I’m going to sign off. I’ll try to pop on again soon to address any comments or questions you might have before I settle in to start work on chapter 44. So please, if you have something you’d like to ask or say let me know  .

Till next time,

-Mal

[Juan]

Incredible stuff, Mal! Looking forward to your new story and whatever you have planned for Billion Dollar Harem. 

[Guest Romavictrix]

Welcome back Mal. Looking forward to your original story!

[Guest Joe]

You've done such a great job with Taylor. And it was interesting to see Emma get creative in this punishment. How much was planned before with Alex and how much was her improvisation? 

[Guest Zack]

Hey Mal! 

Just wanted to say I’m sorry about the financial struggles… you have a talent and whatever you decide to write will be undoubtedly talented and entertaining - whenever you decide to put your original story on Amazon – I’ll definitely be your first customer

the story so far has been so incredible and nothing like I’ve ever seen before.

i’m really looking forward to the inclusion of Ari with Alex and Emma! 

Hope you are feeling a lot better after that fall and you are doing alright. Can’t wait until chapter 44!... 

keep up the amazing work!

 

I hope you know We all appreciate you !

[Guest A girl likes this story]

I love this story, and I think one of the major pitfalls that you could've hit is differentiating the girls. By that, I mean that it could have been incredibly easy just to give them all the same personality, especially with that many characters. I think what you did by giving them different roles in the harem, such as Emma Watson, and specific punishments (such as Taylor Swift), was genius. 

That said, I have to say that Ariana Grande is my favorite, and it's so amazing what you did with her story. I wish there was more of her, but I completely understand that you have to make room for the other girls as well. Thank you so much for writing this, and know that I will continue reading it till you're done!

[Sazbi]

Well can’t be too upset about Taylor not turning into the harem’s dogbut seemed until the new girls come in, she is a pariah so would’ve had something to do like chase Ari to keep her from getting too confident about being different from the others.  Definitely can’t wait for the final girls, and find out how long the time jump is. Hope everything is going good, and can’t wait for the next chapter!

[Mal]

Hello again friends!

First, the good news! The good news is that chapter 44 is up and ready for you all to read. The bad news is that once again I find myself without enough time to give a run down or to address all the wonderful comments. On the bright side though, I very much want to do both of those things and while I doubt it will get done today, I should be able to get to it tomorrow. So, if your reading this today, please do check in tomorrow for the full rundown, an update on my plans and progress with the original story, and of course to address the comments.

Till next time, happy reading, and I’ll see you all very soon,

-Mal

[Guest ArcherNexus]

The new chapter was something of a roller-coaster for me. 

The beginning was fantastic with the whole roleplay thing, and the way Emma presented Alex's options to him was super hot. So I was disappointed when that got abandoned in favor of a more "traditional" threesome. It was by no means a bad scene, just a bit lackluster after such a great build-up.

Aaand then that thing at the end happened. It did not see that coming. Which is still the most impressive aspect of this story if you ask me - how even after 44 chapters you can still surprise me while keeping it more or less believable. Now I'm just hoping this was the turning point for Emma's character and possibly the first step towards certain scenarios with her that I've been waiting for ever since she became the harem's mistress. I guess I'll have to wait and see.

In any case, I didn't get quite what I had hoped for in Emma/Ari scene, but the way it ended may have made way for something even better. So I'm excited about that. 

[Mal]

Hello again, 

I’m back tonight for the promised update!

First, let me address the new chapter. A long time back, you guys voted on a scene with Emma, Ari and Alex. This chapter first and foremost was meant to deliver on that promise. I was pleasantly surprised and excited with how the chapter turned out. Once again, I found myself in one of those situations where my free-flowing writing style took me in a very unexpected direction. In this case, the ending. I’m very interested to hear what you all thought of the way the chapter ended. Though it wasn’t part of my initial plan for the chapter to end on such a dark note, I think it serves very nicely as a build up for things to come. As  you all know, we are ramping up towards the end at this point. We are by no means there yet, but I think the little speed bump Ari and Emma hit at the end of 44 will definitely influence the way things play out from this point on. Perhaps it will be in a more subtle way at first. But as we get closer to the end game, I think, I hope you all will be surprised and excited for those things.

Next, for the foreseeable future, I expect the chapters to come later in the month, as I won’t be starting new BDH chapters until the first day of each month. I will use the time between publishing the new BDH chapter and the end of the month to work on my new original story. But before I tell you a little bit about how that project is proceeding, lets talk BDH 45 and beyond. I have two more major scenes planned before the time jump chapter. The time jump chapter will, as I said before will be a long jump. Probably the longest yet. As for 45, it will encompass one of these two major scenes and hopefully will set up the other. I can’t say for sure how things will play out, since I now have the fallout from 44’s ending to deal with as well. But, if things go according to plan, 46 will then deal with the final planned scene and resolve the remaining plot points that are still floating around out there. 47 will then be used for the entire time jump. I will announce one of the two ladies at the end of 47, and the final girl will be announced in a very different manor with her very own chapter. I don’t want to say too much about this special chapter yet, but I will say that I’ve been thinking about this moment for probably close onto a year now so I’m very excited to finally be writing it. If things all go according to plan, the entire cast will be apart of BDH by chapter 48 and from there, we will really begin to ramp up towards the end.

Now, my original story. The title is still a work in progress, but if you read my previous update post, you will know that I plan to release it in short episodes that will be around 50 pages each and contain their own mini story as part of a larger overall arc. I’m guessing each episode will have between 5-7 chapters, maybe less…. Anyway, after I finished up chapter 44 last month, I spent the rest of the month writing the first chapter of the first episode. That chapter is currently in a semi polished state, to be further refined as the entire episode takes shape. I don’t want to go into too much detail, but I will say that it is an original story, obviously and that it will contain many of the same themes / kinks / fetishes as Billion Dollar Harem. However, the primary kink I plan to focus on is Step Fantasy with a lesser but still significant focus on Slut Training / Mind Break themes. I plan to mostly shy away from the extreme and darker fetishes (at least with this first episode), in order to appeal to the maximum number of people. Perhaps in future episodes or when I eventually move onto a new original work I will return to the dark side… 

Finally, let me address all the comments.

Juan: Thank you as always for your support. I’m very glad you enjoyed chapter 44 and hope you find 45 equally pleasing. I will try to keep you all at least semi updated on the progress of the original story. I obviously don’t want to divulge too much as discovering the story is half the reason to buy it . But, rest assured that as it nears completion, I will let you all know where and how to find it should any of you want to check it out.

Romavictrix: Thank you, Romavictrix. I wasn’t really gone, but I did have a rather long break in production after my two unfortunate tumbles. Thank you for your enthusiasm about the original work, I promise to keep you all posted.

Joe: I’m very glad that you liked Taylor’s progression. I can’t say at this point she is complete, but I think she’s reached about the maximum level of possible slutiness. The questions for her at this point will be more centered around relationships and  winning back her friends…. It should be an interesting journey. As to Emma’s involvement in the punishment. As soon as I knew I was going to do a foot fetish as part of this scene, I wanted two things out of it. 1) I wanted the foot / feet in question to belong to Emma. and 2) I wanted that foot to be absolutely disgusting in order to humiliate Taylor as much as possible. I think most of Emma’s involvement was coordinated with Alex. He for sure picked out both outfits, and suggested the foot fetish. I picture the liverwurst part to be born in Emma’s brain though. He also suggested, in my imagining, getting one of the guards to provide a topping for her foot. But I like to think it was her idea to make it a team effort. 

Zack: First of all, thank you so much for your very kind words. I often like to think my work is appreciated. But you never really know unless someone tells you or shows it in some way. When someone tells me how much they appreciate the hard work I’ve put into this or any of my projects, it really makes me feel good and encourages me to soldier on when things are tough. My financial situation is tough right now. Hopefully my original work will help me get out of the enormous hole I find myself in…. <fingers crossed> I’m glad to know though at the very least I’ll have one or two people lined up to buy it  . I’m glad you’ve been enjoying BDH. Is this your first post, I don’t remember seeing your name before (my apologizes if you have… )  I like to think the main reason my story is so different from the other celeb fan fiction out there is just the fact that 1) I pour my blood sweat, and tears into this story. (That’s not true exactly, mostly I pour wrist cramps into it and pent up frustration into it  ) But I’ve always favored quality over quantity I never release a chapter until I’m happy with it and I try my very best to make each chapter different than any of the ones before it. and 2) This might be cliche and maybe even corny, but you guys, my readers / fans are the other reason this story has so much success. Without all your kind words, comments and criticisms, not only would BDH have died off long ago, but even had it persisted, it wouldn’t be half as good as it is now. I hope you enjoyed the new chapter, and yes, I am doing much better since my falls. Thank you again for your support, and I look forward to hearing more from you.

A girl likes this story: Oh! Come on, everyone knows there are no real girls on the internet… this must be some kind of trap   Seriously though, thank you so much for your support, and assuming you really are a real girl ( ) I ‘d love to ask YOU  a couple of questions. (I’ll wait till the end) First when I set out to write this story, my main goal was NOT to just dump two dozen celebs in a basement and have some guy screw them once and thereby turn them into sex crazed sluts…. I wanted each girl to have her own personality (that’s realistic, right?) ( I don’t know any girls….) And I honestly wanted them each to have their own unique roles. That’s probably one of the reasons it took me so long to bring in more celebs after the initial five. When I sat down to start this, I never thought there would be more than five girls. But as the story evolved, I realized there was room for more. Besides if I didn’t write a story with Cara and Felicity in it, I was going to lose my shit. I’m glad you liked the way each celeb evolved and that you like the punishments. (More on that in a sec). I find it interesting when people tell me Ariana is their favorite. In my mind, she might be the least developed of the characters (she’s one of the newest), and I really feel like she needs more attention to be fully developed… My favorites are Emma (obviously) and probably Cara but mostly because I find her unbelievably attractive. Now, if you’ll indulge me, a few questions. I’d love a “real girl”(‘s) perspective. (Also feel free to email me your response if you don’t feel comfortable posting it. Alternatively, ignore this all together if you like. I’m merely curious)

1. As a man (checks) yes, as a man, I know what is appealing about a story like this. (Hot female celebrities in wild, steamy sex scenes have been my fantasy since…. well ever since I starting having fantasies….)  I’m curious what a girl finds appealing about this story? Feel free to be as vague or specific as you like. 
2. As a girl, do you find any of the more graphic / violent parts difficult to read? I mean, you made it this far, obviously you had to have encountered some of the darker stuff… Do you sympathize with say Felicity, Taylor or Ariana when they are handled so brutally and inhumanly in those really dark punishment room scenes. Or does it…. (how to put this delicately) tickle your fancy ….   I guess the base question here is do you read a story like this for the plot or for the sex?
3. What does a character like Alex make you feel? Do you like him? Sympathize with him? Love him? Hate him? Do you think he has any redeeming qualities, and if so what, in your mind, are they?
4. (Last one) You said Ariana was your favorite character. I’m curious what makes you feel a connection with her? What qualities does she have that makes you identify with her? Or is it just that she’s really hot dressed up like a cat?

Thanks again for reading along, A girl likes this story. As I said take the questions or leave em, I’m just curious. I hope either way you’ll continue to follow the thread and be entertained by the story.

Sazbi: Yeah, I worried a little when I was writing 43 that people might think I was turning Taylor into a dog, but I was really just looking for a way to humiliate her even more. Personally, I think someone calling you a dog and making you bark and beg is pretty humiliating….  As for the whole pariah thing… I’m not sure that is going to be entirely true. After all, she didn’t directly assault Cara, all she did was cheat on her gf with her…. I think her social status is redeemable with some time and work. And, as you’ll see in 44 she’ll have at least one friend… As for the new girls and the new chapter, I’m excited to announce them and bring them in, and the new chapter is here! What are you waiting for, go read it!

ArcherNexus: I get that it kind of sucked to end the RP between Emma and Alex. But, I was trying to show that he didn’t need some elaborate fantasy to show her how he felt about her. In my mind, Alex genuinely cares for Emma, certainly above all the other women in his harem and he has to use small things to show her that. Otherwise she might grow too bold, or on the flip side too meek to do her job. By that same measure, Emma wants him to care for her. She likes to tease him and find new exciting ways to entice him. But ultimately, she wants to be with him as herself. I thought that by flipping it, going from the sexy RP and transitioning to it just being Emma and Ariana as themselves was a great way to show that. (However, I can perfectly understand your feelings. Writing Emma as that cute, naive girl was a super turn on). I’m glad you enjoyed the ending. When I sat down to write this chapter, that wasn’t something I was intending to happen. But as I said above, I don’t think the fact that it was accidental takes away from the effect. Alex’s darker side was bound to come out at some point and Emma was the one most likely to see it (outside of the punishment room) so it really just makes sense. I'm not sure exactly what it is you’re hoping to see for Emma moving forward. But I will say this, of all the girls, Emma’s future is the one I have most set in my mind. In other words her path has a pretty set trajectory and its unlikely that it will alter much from how I have things set in my head. I guess I only hope that what I have planned for her and for the story at large doesn’t disappoint you and everyone else…

Ok folks… wow that took a long time… lol Anyway I really wanted to take a moment to respond to your comments and to address things moving forward so it was worth it. I would expect chapter 45 not to be released until near the end of September as I won’t even start it until next week. I may pop on to address some comments if we get a bunch in the next week or so, if not I’ll talk to you all again at the end of next month.

Till next time

-Mal