Billion Dollar Harem

[Guest ArcherNexus]

So, Felicity is third on your list of hottest celebs. I'm pretty sure Emma is first. Who's second? Margot?

Just curious. 

[Mal]

ArcherNexus: Good question. When I first started Billion Dollar Harem, Emma was indeed my undisputed favorite. But around the time I started considering her for a spot in my story, Cara Delevingne really began to grow on me. So much so that about 9 mo – 1 yr ago I couldn’t deny it any longer. She had replaced Emma at the top of my list.

My Current Top 5 Favorite / Hottest Celebs:

1. Cara Delevingne
2. Emma Watson
3. Felicity Jones
4. Margot Robbie
5. Saoirse Ronan 

Saoirse recently replaced Chloë Grace Moretz at the number 5 spot. And as I’m sure you can tell, I have a thing for blondes and particularly a thing for girls with accents! 

Anyway, I wanted to pop on to answer this because peoples favorite celebs is a topic I enjoy discussing and it occurred to me that I never really shared my favorites with you guys…

Alrighty, I probably won’t be back till Sunday when I briefly pop on to do the update for the new chapter of Becoming Bitch.

Till next time,

-Mal

[Guest ArcherNexus]

Okay, that was an unexpectedly quick answer. Thanks for that. And it's funny you said Cara because I finally watched Valerian and the City of a Thousand Planets literally two days ago. She looked amazing in that movie and really went up in my book. Oh and her accent definitely has something to do with it. 

Saoirse is also growing on me, but I wouldn't put either of them on my top list. For now, at least. That list changes all the time.

Anyways, thanks again for the prompt reply. I too enjoy this topic very much. 

[Juan]

On 5/5/2019 at 7:35 PM, Mal said:

 

Juan: Interesting question. I think Taylor is probably sluttier. Meaning that she wouldn’t balk at doing pretty much anything, sexually that Alex asked. But Chloe is probably more submissive. There might be a few things she would be a little hesitant about doing,, but she probably wouldn’t fight even in that case. I’d also say that it would depend on the bedroom. In Emma’s bed (without Alex) I don’t think there is anything Chloe wouldn’t do if told. 

 

Pretty great that you’ve got two characters who are at pornstar levels of submissive sluttines, except actually believable. Since like chapter 23-24, I’ve been hoping for a scene featuring the two of them with maybe a third person just to show how far gone they are. I hope that Bella gets there soon with her developing drug addiction. Keep up the great writing, Mal. 

[Guest Well]

I hope the the men had a great time dressing Taylor. You could  just put a chapter just on what they did to Taylor. 

[Guest King]

Thanks man! 

 

Looking forward to that ari-cat scene and the addition of either gadot (Wonder Woman :0) or daddario… Sounds incredible! 

 

I am one for twisted fanfics so I'll definitely be checking out your new one – Becoming Bitch… I’m sure it will be amazing considering how brilliant the harem has been!  

 

Also was wondering how long you intend to keep the harem going? I would hope forever haha, but do you have a time in mind when you’ll stop or is it just when you feel like you’ve exhausted the creative potential?

until next time!  

[Guest ArcherNexus]

I think he said he's looking to finish it around chapter 60.

Btw guys, what are your wishes for the mystery newcomer? 

For me, there are a lot of different girls I'd like to see introduced to the harem - Nina Dobrev, Dianna Agron, Victoria Justice, Jennifer Lawrence, Kate Beckinsale, Kaley Cuoco, Alison Brie, Mila Kunis, Amber Heard, Cheryl Cole, Rachel McAdams, Zoe Saldana, Scarlett Johansson, Karen Gillan, Ashley Benson, Megan Fox, Jessica Alba, Vanessa Hudgens, Daisy Ridley, Emma Stone, and many, many others.

But if I had to pick one, I think I'd go with Nina Dobrev. At least that's how I feel at the moment, I might feel differently tomorrow. And Mal never said in what year BDH takes place, did he? Because when I imagine these celebs, I always picture them in their prime. For Nina that would be early 2010s.

Anyway, your picks? 

[Guest Futanari]

I am loving both of your stories Mal. I just hope that my brain will shut the hell up about BDH. You've got your reasons for leaving us dangling of the edge of the cliff like that. I think I'll add my top five fave celebrities that I wouldn't mind making my own.

 

1. Anna Kendrick

2. Emma Watson

3. Molly Quinn

4. Taylor Swift

5. Emily Osment

I wouldn't mind making a story where I magically turn myself into Emma but with a huge difference between her legs. Or hell even as a dreamscape and all the celebrities that I have fun with/as share these vivid dreams with.

[Mal]

Alright Gang, its Sunday so I’m here to update Becoming Bitch. That’s right, chapter 3 is here!  In this chapter, we see Dove’s dog-girl training continue as she learns to fetch, and obey verbal commands from her new master. The chapter culminates in a most fucked up way, as you might imagine it would… I am very proud of this chapter. I think this is some of the most fucked up and depraved shit I’ve ever produced and honestly, I think its some of the best writing I’ve ever done. I know this fetish might not be for everyone. But for me, this is more about the humiliation and the depraved nature of a psychotic redneck than it is about the beasty stuff… Anyway, I hope you all enjoy it, and please let me know what you think. I know this shit is kind of over the top, but I really wanted to explore a dark and twisted situation and I think this story does that very well… 

Also wow! I’m so happy to see so many comments while I was gone. Please, if you’re loving the story (whichever one it is, let me know), I love hearing from my fans.You guys give me so much motivation to continue doing this stuff. I’ve said it before, but let me just say it again, I do this for you guys,  and without you, I’d have given up on this a long time ago. Ok, let me just address your comments and I’ll get of here.

ArcherNexus: No problem on the quick reply. I just happened to pop on to check the story count and saw there was a new comment and thought I’d reply since obviously celebrities are a topic I enjoy discussing. Valerian and the City of a Thousand planets was honestly a huge let down for me. I had such high expectations from the director of the 5^th Element and it really failed to meet them. I think the project was maybe just a little too ambitious, and  the quirky stuff that worked so well in the 5^th Element fell a little short for me in Valerian… As to Cara though, I thought she was the one bright spot in the whole movie. She was so sexy, that scene at the beginning with her on the beach… wowza is all I have to say… She is just an absolute bombshell. Saoirse is one of those girls that has grown on me over the years. I can’t point to a specific moment when she began to skyrocket up my list, but between her build, those brilliant eyes, and her amazing accent…. she is just the total package. For me, there is very little separation between Cara and Emma and then between Felicity and Margot, but those four are, in my humble opinion miles above all the other competition. The rest of my list as you said, changes all the time, 5-15 is really a toss up on any given day, but the top 4 pretty much stay rock solid for me… / Yes, the story will end approximately around chapter 60. That’s quite a wish list...I honestly can’t tell you if one of them is the mystery girl, but I will say that I have considered some of those babes for stories before. I’ve long considered for a chapter of The Orb of Janus, doing a mirror mirror type of story where two similar looking celebs are paired up in a “Twinning” situation. I’ve considered Nina Dobrev and Victoria Justice to be perfect candidates for that. I also want to write a Lesbian Rom/Com with Cara Delevingne and Ashley Benson…. but we’ll just have to see if any of those projects ever come to fruition…. Finally, I started Billion Dollar Harem in March of 2016 and I always considered that to be when the story takes place.

Juan:  Believably broken sluts is what I try to strive for in every story I write. To me, there is nothing hotter than a classy, sophisticated woman like Cara or Emma, or basically anyone at the top of my list succumbing to their baser nature and becoming a cock-craving slut. A scene with Chloe and Taylor you say… interesting idea. Not two of the girls I’d say would naturally come together… but certainly an interesting idea considering how broke they both are. It might be something for me to keep in mind. Though as I begin to ramp up towards the end, I have several very specific scenes in mind, so we’ll just have to see how that might play out what between that, the up coming fan-selected scene and the much touted sex competition… Who knows, maybe randomness will pair them up for the competition… wouldn’t that be interesting.

Well: I imagine that Ulu and the other guards had quite a fun time dressing Taylor for her big scene. I suppose it is interesting to think about the details of that moment, the humiliation Taylor must have felt as the guards stripped her down and dressed her up… Very hot thought indeed… 

King: I hope you’re enjoying the new chapter of Becoming Bitch. I honestly think its the most twisted thing I’ve ever written. The Ari-cat / Emma / Alex scene should be quite hot. I already have a few ideas for how it will proceed. But first, have to finish up Taylor’s big show . I’m looking forward to adding the newcomers. It’s at least 3 chapters away from happening, probably more like 4. But, it will be a much more rapid introduction than most of the other girls experienced. As to your question about the end. I do have an ending in mind. Currently my thoughts are that it will take to around chapter 60 or so to finish everything I have in mind. But it wouldn’t surprise me if the story ends around 62-63…. 

Futanari: Welcome to my thread, Futa! Thanks for joining the conversation. First off, thanks for the compliment. It means a lot to me that you’ve enjoyed my work. Sorry about the cliff-hanger. Normally the new chapter wouldn’t be so far behind such a dramatic moment, but I was really close to finishing Becoming Bitch. I’ve been working on this new story for about 5 months in my spare time, and with it being so close to done, I just decided to delay BDH 42 and finish up Becoming Bitch. Right now, I’m aiming for a late May, early June release for chapter 42. We’ll just have to see how things work out. I obviously love some of the names on your list. I don’t know much about Molly Quinn, but after looking her up, I’d have to say she has a pretty enough face, but the full-figured body type has never really been my thing. I’ve also never really found Emily Osment to be all that attractive. I kind of missed out on the whole Hannah Montana thing (too old sorry lol). But, I love Anna Kendrick. She’s not really near the top of my list, but I find her very attractive and I think she’s actually a fairly talented actress. As to a story staring a Futanari, I’ve always wanted to write one. I started a story on CHOYA where there was a path with Kylie Jenner that eventually was going to have her as a futa. She actually transforms at the end of the last chapter I worked on, but I never followed up on it. I have too many writing commitments as is and I find the open ended nature of CHOYA very hard to keep going… I wouldn’t rule out the possibility of a futa story at some point, maybe in a chapter of The Orb of Janus, or some stand alone thing…. who knows….

Ok gang, that about does it for me. I’ll be back next Sunday with the fourth chapter of Becoming Bitch.

Till then,

-Mal

[Guest Well]

If Emma puts on weight you could put her down a level to 2 level two or one. 

Most of them  wear shorts how about them wear mini dresses about 6" from there bottom. 

[Guest Well]

What do they wear at night? 

[Guest Joe]

Cool to see your top 5. But if you could recast the story with your top 5 of all-time (with the women in their respective primes), who would you have? I’ve been seeing a lot of “what if the Avengers had a 90’s cast” stuff and it got me thinking. Like let’s say there’s some Orb of Janus level of magic where the main character can warp in 5 women from any time. What would yours look like? 

[Mal]

Alright guys, I’m just on real quick to herald the announcement of Chapter 4.. The title of this chapter says it all. Dove makes a desperate attempt to escape Carl’s kennel and in the process falls further into depravity.  Saying much more would give too much away, but I will say that this chapter, while short, is the perfect lead in to the big finale of chapter 5. I’m in the process of editing and getting Chapter 5 ready now, and I see no problem with it being done for next Sunday. After I finish with the edits, I plan to jump right into work on Chapter 42 of BDH. Things are slow with me right now, but a 15 page (or so) chapter still takes time to write. I’m anticipating a release in early to mid June. 

Ok, Let me just respond to the few comments, and I’ll be off. I’m looking forward to hearing your thoughts on this chapter.

Well: I’m assuming the comment about Emma putting on weight has to do with potential drama and how she might lose her position? I can say with certainty that 1) Emma will remain the smoldering slender goddess that she is right now. and 2) rest assured, there is drama to be had with Emma. I can’t say anything about the form that drama will take, other than to say part of what I have planned for her has to do with the ultimate ending I have in mind for BDH.  The shorts the girls wear, are those tiny gym shorts that barely come down to their asses as is. While I suppose those dresses could be sexy, and certainly provide for easier access, the shorts they wear now actually show more skin… As to night wear. I imagine most girls either go nude, or wear panties to bed. I suppose I could see them wearing oversized tee shirts to bed as well…

Joe: Interesting question. I’ve never done a top 5 of all time, and I can say for sure if I were recasting BDH today, the line up and the roll out would be much different…  I suppose the easiest way for me to answer this question would be first, to say that I grew up in the 90’s. So many of my all time babes would have to come from the 90’s and the 00’s. Perhaps, the best way to answer it would be with two lists.

BDH w/ 90’s and 00’s babes:

1. Christina Aguilera (circa 1994)
2. Kiera Knightly  (circa 2003)
3. Megan Fox (circa 2007)
4. Kate Beckinsale (circa 2003)
5. Natalie Portman (circa 1999)

BDH w/ my top 5 of All Time

1. Emma Watson (circa 2013)
2. Christina Aquilera (circa 1994)
3. Cara Delevingne (circa 2013)
4. Kiera Knightly (circa 2003)
5. Felicity Jones (circa 2014)

I made these lists pretty quickly so I might have left out some worthy people, or not placed them in the exact order they deserve… but that is a pretty close approximation. Other notable mentions from the 90’s 00’s era include: Shannon Doherty and Jennie Garth (circa 1990) Had a huge crush on Brenda Walsh and Kelly Taylor (the characters they played on 90210 waaaay back in the day...)  Kim Basinger (circa 1988) It was a terrible movie, but she was sooo hot in My Stepmother is an Alien. Cameron Diaz (circa  1994) When I first saw her in The Mask, I was smitten. Olivia Wilde (circa 2009) She was soooo sexy on House. Angelina Jolie (circa 2001) Its hard NOT to include this bombshell in any throwback babes list… Mila Jovovich (circa 1997) I so very nearly included her in the first list of BDH babes. I had a huge crush on her after Resident Evil and The 5^th Element… Jennifer Love Hewit (circa 1997) When I first saw JLH in I Know What You Did Last Summer I was blown away. She was my top babe for a long time. But I think the others on my list beat her out. Jessica Alba (circa 2005) I was never as huge of a fan of hers as most people, but its hard to deny she was very hot, still is really… Her dance in Sin City… is a moment that will be forever etched on my brain…. Nicole Kidman (circa 1999) I can’t tell you how much I was enthralled by her topless scene in Eyes Wide Shut. She was so hot back in the day…. Britney Spears (circa 1994) I was always more on team Christina, but there is no denying the other side of the 90’s pop rivalry was also sooo freaking hot back in the day… I’m sure I’ve left some out. But that is a pretty good list…. Hope that answers your question.

*edit* I forgot to add a few important babes: Lindsay Lohan (circa 2004) The old Lindsay of the Freaky Friday / Mean Girls era was just WoW hot!  Reese Witherspoon (circa 2001) Reese was nearly unbelievable in Legally Blonde. Shannon Elizabeth (circa 1999) She was sooo freaking hot in American Pie. Christina Applegate (circa 1990) I had the biggest freaking crush on Kelly Bundy from Married with Children. Yowza! Oh, yeah, and two more Sarah Michelle Gellar  and Alyson Hannigan (circa 2000) I’m ashamed to admit I never watched much Buffy the Vampire Slayer, but its hard to deny back in the 00’s both these babes were to die for!

Edited May 20, 2019 by Mal

[Guest ArcherNexus]

Well, all I can say is that's a damn good list. Mine wouldn't be too different. And the "obsession" I nowadays have with Emma Watson used to be Nicole Kidman. Only, Nicole actually showed stuff. Plenty of times. 

[Guest Joe]

Really liked your expanded list. Lindsay Lohan circa Mean Girls was like literally the first thing that came to mind. Apparently when she was in Herbie Fully Loaded, Disney actually had to edit out some of her boob jiggle to make it more PG. I’ll never forgive drugs (was it crack or coke or ????) for taking 2004 Lindsay away from us. 

Figured I’d share mine: 

1. Jennifer Love Hewitt circa 2001 (Heartbreakers- awful movie but JLH is just… soooo fine)
2. Emma Watson 2009 (whatever you call the hairstyle she’s rocking in Half Blood Prince- perfectly suits her beautiful and elegant schoolgirl look)
3. Rosie Huntington Whiteley 2011 (her in Transformers. TBH, I have no idea how she hasn’t been swooped up by some European prince, Grace Kelly style. She just naturally looks like royalty.)
4. Lindsay Lohan 2004 (such an incredible pair of boobs) 
5. Britney Spears 2000 (the Oops I did it again outfit and video… not gonna lie… pretty sure that made me hit puberty lol) 

I’m not too into the beastiality stuff, but I always enjoy Dove Cameron. It’s really fucked up, man. Great job. 

Also, you’ve convinced me to never try Liverwurst! 

[Guest Bill Friese]

My throwback top 5:

1. Ashley Tisdale (2007)
2. Adriana Lima (2008)
3. Christina Aguilera (1999)
4. Paris Hilton (2003)
5. Katy Perry (2008)

[Juan]

Jumping in on this, cus who doesn’t like talking about attractive women? Also trying to bring something new to the table. 

1. Once more going old school to say Grace Kelly. Props to Joe ^ for mentioning her indirectly. Would definitely be the leader/ main character for me. 
2. Gonna go old school and say Marilyn Monroe in her prime. I watched Some Like it Hot and had to give an Owen Wilson “Wooowwwww” 
3. Alison Brie, basically any time before she lost weight for Glow. Her leaked photos. Check em out. 
4. Jennifer Garner early 2000s. She was (and still is) just stunning. But always gave off a sort of snobby vibe, in my opinion. Would be the perfect fall from grace. 
5. Mila Kunis late 2000s. Forgetting Sarah Marshall and Friends with Benefits. 

 

[Mal]

Hey guys. Its Sunday so I’m back again with the final update to Becoming Bitch. The story is finally finished. Which means I’m ready to return all my focus to Billion Dollar Harem. I started work on it last night, and already have two and half solid pages. I think I mentioned this before, but this is a slow time of year for me, meaning i have a lot of time for writing. Its my fervent hope that I can have primary writing finished by 6/8. My editor is going on vacation, so if I can’t get it done by then, it will be closer to the end of the month before the chapter comes out. Because of this for the next two weeks or so I’m going to be busting my tail to get the chapter written by then. Assuming I can make that deadline, BDH 42 will be out sometime around  Wednesday 6/12 give or take a day here or there.

I hope you guys have been enjoying Becoming Bitch. For a very long time now I wanted to write a very dark, very fucked up story. Something filled with depravity… I mentioned House of a Thousand Corpses, not because I’m a fan of horror or gore or that kind of stuff, but because of the weird fucked up nature of that movie. It was a method of telling a porn story that I really wanted to explore, and I think I’ve done so very well with BB. I know this fetish / genre isn’t for everyone so if you’ve been anxiously waiting for BDH 42 and have been disappointed this past month for only seeing a story that didn’t appeal to you, I apologize. But occasionally, I need a break from  BDH. I’ve been working on it for over 3 years now, and every once in a while it feels good to explore a new project. I’m very happy that with this side project I was at least able to complete it… Emma Watson’s Blowbang Spectacular still haunts me because I left it incomplete…. Maybe one day I’ll finish that too….

Ok, enough of that. I’d just like to add that if you liked Becoming Bitch and want to ask a question or even just make a comment about it, I’d love to hear from  you.

Now, I’ll address the comments since my last post before leaving you guys to your reading and your Kleenex consumption... 

ArcherNexus: I wholeheartedly agree. As I said above, Nicole Kidman used to be one of my favorites. So hot back in the day… Glad you liked my lists. It wasn’t honestly too hard to throw them together since celebrity fantasy has been a hobby of mine for…. well a long goddamn time! lol!

Joe: I agree about Lindsay. Its a damn shame drugs fucked up her life so terribly. I know I write about a lot of fucked up shit happening to celebrities, but I can honestly say that I don’t want to see any of them hurt and watching a young beautiful woman go through all the shit she did really made me sad. That’s the truth. (I was also a tiny bit sad that the drugs didn’t drive her to do one porno before she went way off the rails. Not that I would wish something like that on her  ). I’m glad you enjoyed my list. I really liked yours too. I didn’t think about Rose Huntington-Whiteley before you mentioned her. I did a search of her pictures after reading your post and man you’re not wrong. She was so freaking hot in Transformers. The movie was terrible, but she was a knockout. Your Britney Spears comment made me laugh. I was fresh out of high school when she was in her prime and I always fantasied about her whenever one of her videos would come on. But your right, Oops I did it Again was the best! …….. Well……. I was also a huge fan of “I’m a Slave for You” Because well…. obviously…. Finally, glad to hear you liked Becoming Bitch. For me the story was never about the bestiality. It was more about putting someone like Dove into an extremely fucked up situation. BB to me is more about the humiliation and the mind break, which are obviously two of my big fetishes…

Bill Friese: Great list man! I was a little too old for the Ashley Tisdale Disney era. I mostly became aware of her because of the way the celebrity fanfiction community became obsessed with her several years back. Kind of the same way Dove Cameron was and is now. But your right, she was super hot. I was also a big fan of Brenda Song who, correct me if I’m wrong was on the same Disney show she was on… I don’t remember… but I remembered the name after you mentioned Ashley… Anyway, both way hot. Adriana Lima also a personal favorite. Victoria Secret sure has a knack for finding and recruiting the hottest women on Earth. I’m currently sooo obsessed with Elsa Hosk, Alexina Graham, and Barbara Palvin. I think a story about a Victoria’s Secret Harem would be really killer. I was never that into Katy Perry, slimmer women are more my thing, but Paris around the time she had that horrible reality show… Yowza… she was smoking hot… Totally love your list bro. Good work!

Juan: Ouch man… Your list… its killing me bro…. I have never been a Marilyn Monroe fan I honestly can not see what anyone ever saw in that chick. Don’t understand it, she was fugly as hell and well she obviously doesn’t have the body type that I like either. And Jennifer Garner…. yikes, a more boring Vanilla celebrity I don’t think I could name one …. I never understood what people saw in that chick… Grace Kelly, she was ok I guess… Maybe its the hair style she had in most of the pictures I’ve seen of her but she just doesn’t jump off the screen at me…. Now, Mila Kunis. She’s hot enough. Love her eyes, love her body but her face in general is a little plain. I’ll give her a pass though  . But, I will give you this, there is one true gem on your list my man. Allison Brie…. She is a fucking knock out. Those eyes… yikes! I personally like her slimmer look for Glow than how she looked on Mad Men, but she is a stunner no doubt. She did a photoshoot, I think it was for Men’s Health magazine. She’s in this one piece black swimsuit or maybe its lingerie but anyway, shes draped across this chair and staring at the camera… oh my God! my heart skipped a beat… she is hot!

Alrighty guys I think that’s enough out of me. I’m going back to work on BDH right now. I hope I’ll be back in a few weeks with a new chapter. I may pop on here once or twice to address any comments that pop up, we’ll just have to see how many there are… Till then!

I’m Back to the Black,

-Mal

[Guest Romavictrix]

My top five list would be 

1: Selena Gomez

2: Danielle Panabaker

3: Alexandra Daddario

4: Jessica Alba

5: Elisha Cuthbert

Critique if you want yall lol. 

[Guest Romavictrix]

My top five list would be 

1: Selena Gomez

2: Danielle Panabaker

3: Alexandra Daddario

4: Jessica Alba

5: Elisha Cuthbert

Critique if you want yall lol. 

[Guest Bill Friese]

For a modern top 5:

1. Demi Lovato
2. Selena Gomez
3. Taylor Swift
4. Ariana Grande
5. Elle Fanning

[Guest Joe]

Mal, Got any other recommended reading or particular authors you like for the mind break genre? I've read all your stuff, but curious to see what you enjoy reading. 

[Guest Well]

Have you got some  more stories in the pipeline?

[Mal]

Hello again everyone!

I’m back, and with a Billion Dollar Harem update! That’s right, chapter 42 is finally here! Before I get into any update news, I just wanted to say again how grateful I am for the patience you guys have shown while I worked on finishing up Becoming Bitch last month. While I know that project might not be for everyone. But, I thought it was fun, and it was a nice distraction and change of pace from BDH. That said, chapter 42, after such a long break, basically wrote itself. Though I do feel like a bit of an asshole… Let me explain. My initial plan was to finish up the Taylor punishment scene in 42. Not only did that NOT happen, but I left the chapter off on a pretty terrible cliffhanger… However, having said that, I’ll try to explain why things didn’t get wrapped up. I found that fitting the entire punishment, that of Taylor satisfying all the women of the harem into one chapter to be impossible. I think I did a pretty good job of not making it too repetitive, but one of the sacrifices of that was (as you’ll all see when you read it), that every scenario took a few pages to resolve. I thought about making the chapter longer, more like the 25 pages of old, and just finishing everything up, but a combination of my editor’s schedule this month and the fact that it has now been over 2 months since I produced a chapter of BDH led me to the decision that cutting 42 short and leaving it off as I did was the best choice. I certainly think this chapter is plenty hot, and I hope after you all read it that you’ll agree I made the right choice. 

Besides that, there is a sliver lining to this story. I’ve already started work on chapter 43, and am close to 4 pages into it. As I said above, this is a very slow time of year for me and I have a chance to get a lot of writing done. Because of that I intend to try very, very hard to get chapter 43 done, edited and up on the server by the end of this…. that’s right, this month. In other words hopefully by the end of June, you guys will have another BDH chapter to enjoy. I don’t want to say too much about what will happen in 43, other than to say expect a wild finish to Taylor’s punishment, and some plot development with Cara. Because of the fact that I didn’t finish Taylor’s punishment in 42 I am afraid that the much anticipated Alex, Emma, Ari scene will have to wait until 43… I apologize to those of you looking forward to that.

I want to take a minute to address the lists, and the comments, but I have been awake now for close on to 24 hours. I only stayed up so that I could publish the story to the site before I went to sleep. I promise that sometime within the next two or three days I’ll be back on to answer your questions and comment on your lists…  

Till next time,

-Mal

[Sazbi]

Liked the variety between the women who participated, and definitely can’t wait for chapter 43 for the finale of her Taylor’s punishment.  Wonder if after this, Taylor will be forever changed cause how she approached Dove seemed slightly scary haha. Sexy, yet scary.  Interested in the new development for Cara, and how it would affect Emma and their budding relationship.  Surprised that Ariana would be napping through the punishment, would think she would still be scared of the guards.