Chained to the Whirlpool Reboot

[Yami-Iko-Kami]

Author: Yami-Iko-Kami (new author), originally by Gravemind
Title: Chained to the Whirlpool Reboot
Summary: (May change) Everybody knows how Naruto and Sakura act toward each other. He loves her and she hates him but what if things were different and two certain girls are going to get sucked into a world of pain, pleasure and slavery.

Feedback: Feedback, suggestions and constructive criticism much appreciated.
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: Naruto/Harem
Warnings: BDSM, SM, Oral, and many more.
Chaptered story:
URL: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600104808

Thank you all who took the time to read this and now I ask you for some help. I plan to rewrite this story but I'm having some trouble deciding what changes should I make. So I have created a poll post, http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/63607-chained-to-the-whirlpool-reboot-polls/#entry395664 which will have polls to help me decide what to change or keep the same. Keep checking for more polls as well.

FYI I'm currently writing an Omaka featuring Hinata and Anko.