Altari Posted July 10, 2008 Report Posted July 10, 2008 Please? Pretty please? I have this fic : Unrequitted Love The title seemed appropriate in 2005 when I first wrote it, but now I hate it. I also can't get a good description going. And chapter 11 is slow as [cold] molasses. I fail all around with this one! Quote
Altari Posted July 11, 2008 Author Report Posted July 11, 2008 With some help from cu-kid (<3) I now have this as a description A final desperate act leaves the group changed forever. Can new comers fill the painful voids left by lost friends? And can they come together to face the challenges that come after Naraku's defeat? Language, M/F, Violence Would this entice you to read? Quote
cu-kid9 Posted July 12, 2008 Report Posted July 12, 2008 Oooh, I would read it! But I may be biased now... Quote
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