Desperate for "Readers" (rather than full blown betas)

[mannahpierce]

I am onto my third book and I am desperate for some feedback on my latest chapters.

Book One, Cast Adrift, and Book Two, Foothold, have been published.

I am paying for editorial services. What I need is feedback about stuff like:

• Can you imagine the scene?
• Do you believe what the characters are doing and saying?
• Are the emotional messages too muted?
• Are there parts of the writing where you are 'thrown out' of the story?

I have had two people doing a great job but one is a bit tied up and the other has fallen silent.

I do need someone (or more than one person) who can reply within days rather than weeks.