Blueshirt Posted November 15, 2015 Report Share Posted November 15, 2015 I'm rather new to these forums, but I'm not new to writing, if a tad rusty.So I'd like to get as much feedback and critique as possible. 'Adult' fiction is a new venture for me, so I'd really appreciate it. Author: BlueshirtTitle: The Adventures Of JauneSummary: Jaune makes his way around the girls of Remnant.Feedback: As much as possible would be great, as long as it's polite (Even if you hated it).Fandom: RWBYPairing: Multiple, but all involve Jaune Warnings Femdom, D/S. In the future there will be some rape and even yaoi, but I will include a warning at the beginning of those chapters.Solo story or chaptered story: ChapteredURL: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094923 Thanks for taking the time to read. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blueshirt Posted November 23, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2015 Chapter four is up. It doesn't introduce any new girls to Jaune's harem, but it is a special chapter in its' own way. Jaune has all three girls at once. Though he's not exactly in charge of the situation. http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094923 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blueshirt Posted October 23, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2016 Almost a year later and I’ve actually finished chapter five. It’s a character I know people wanted, Ruby Rose herself. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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