I'm rather new to these forums, but I'm not new to writing, if a tad rusty.So I'd like to get as much feedback and critique as possible. 'Adult' fiction is a new venture for me, so I'd really appreciate it.
Author: Blueshirt Title: The Adventures Of Jaune Summary: Jaune makes his way around the girls of Remnant. Feedback: As much as possible would be great, as long as it's polite (Even if you hated it). Fandom: RWBY Pairing: Multiple, but all involve Jaune
Warnings Femdom, D/S. In the future there will be some rape and even yaoi, but I will include a warning at the beginning of those chapters. Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered URL: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094923
Thanks for taking the time to read.