PineWreaths Posted October 4, 2015 Report Share Posted October 4, 2015 After being advised about the forums by Edward_or_Ford, I'm adding my own in here to reply. Thanks Ed! Edward_or_Ford on The Tunnel:Okay, I'm cheating on this review because I've already read it on Tumblr ("pinewreaths" over there). That said, this is a great story!This is another “how they first got together” Pinecest story, and it is wonderful in every way. Characterization and dialogue are both spot-on. The premise and location (at an elaborate amusement park themed around water slides and attractions) are original, and the interactions are adorable, yet awkward. And there is absolutely top-notch NSFW content here as well, if that floats your boat.Everyone is going to love the stuff you'll be getting from PineWreaths. Thanks Edward! I'm glad you liked it, and appreciate the kind words. From an Anon for Horny Ghosts:Nice intro chapter! Looking forward to more! Might I guess that a certain red head lumberjack will appear? I don't currently have anything with Wendy in it, but I'm certainly looking at possibly adding her in to a few different stories and drabble I have planned over the next couple weeks. From an Anon on Horny Ghosts:Whew boy,another good chapter! Keep them up! 👍 Thank you! Once Horny Ghosts is finished posting in its entirety, I'll start posting the parts of the 6-installment Return of the Horny Ghosts. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PineWreaths Posted October 4, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2015 From Ib54 on Horny Ghosts: Oh, oh, where are they going? What is between the shops?! WHO?! They're heading into a new shop, the contents of which will be revealed in the next chapter... Edward_or_Ford 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Edward_or_Ford Posted October 6, 2015 Report Share Posted October 6, 2015 OK, two (related) things about "The Tunnel": - If you had built up the release, chapter by chapter, surely you would have received at least *one* hate mail about that epilogue's ending! Since no one else has, let mine be the first :-) - You teased on Tumblr that you're going to write multiple options, to pick your own ending. No, damnit! :-) Just one real ending! Please? E-o-F Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PineWreaths Posted October 6, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2015 (edited) 3 endings is as close as I can get, but I can at least PM those who ask what the "real" ending probably is. Edited October 7, 2015 by PineWreaths Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PineWreaths Posted October 8, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2015 From Belfry on Spectrum:Wonderful story. I love how you have taken a twincest story and showed an unexpected twist at the end of chapter 3! Please continue the story! Thank you! There's one more chapter to this story for right now, and I eventually plan on revisiting this AU plotline in the future as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PineWreaths Posted October 15, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2015 From Big Brother on Spectrum:Good start. The twins had a lot of fun, hehe. Seven Mabel, Dipper will have much fun. Thanks. I eventually plan to revisit the story from Mabel's perspective, as she tries to hide her siblings and keep them from devouring Dipper alive before its time. This, of course, leads to oodles of selfcest (I guess it could technically be considered masturbation?) From GrayNeko on Spectrum:I had a sneaking suspicion that multiple Mabels was where this was going after that scene back in chapter 1. I enjoyed the various personalities each Mabel had and I especially liked Dipper's and BB's reaction to Tyrone. Good job hinting at potential turmoil in future chapters. Yeah, I normally write a 50-50 split of angst and smut, so a hint of the former spilled into the latter. Plus, while Dipper and BB might not be overly fond of the idea, they very well may be able to be convinced that bringing Tyrone back might be a good idea to make sure Dipper doesn't get drained bone-dry from the effort of keeping up with his sisters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PineWreaths Posted October 16, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2015 From DarkAlpha on The Tunnel:a absolutely great story! love it. I'm glad you liked it! That was my first fanfic I ever wrote, and the first creative writing I'd done in over a decade. From DarkAlpha on Spectrum:a absolutely great story! i love it. Thanks! I definitely plan to revisit that AU. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PineWreaths Posted November 28, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2015 (edited) From [/size] Big Brother on [/size]Spectrum: Chapter 4: Nice end.[/size] Thank you! I'm glad you like how it turned out. I'll be posting more stories in this AU at some point. Edited November 28, 2015 by PineWreaths Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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