Guest Moony Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 (edited) I am a long time fan of yaoi and slash. I finally have the inspiration to write my own story. I need someone who can give constructive criticisms without being too harsh to a first time writer. My first pairing is Will/Jake from Brothers Grimm. Please don't be put off by the "brothers" part. I fixed that it my story. I only have one chapter finished and I want input before I go on. Please respond!! Moony Edited June 10, 2008 by Moony Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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