AnthonyFiction Posted January 15, 2015 Report Posted January 15, 2015 (edited) This is where I will be replying to reviews left on any stories in the 'Your Art as a Sexy POV Story' series. Story listing: YASPS #1 - Ahri's Tease: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600089288 Izanagi 2015-01-15 id # 3000050745You shouldn't tell people not to leave negative reviews, with a threat to delete them. That's not how you get better as a writer. Otherwise, good writing, though the lack of actual sex does leave the reader a bit wanting, afterward. Would love to see what you write in the future, perhaps with a touch more non-implied intimacy? I appreciate the fact that you took the time to review my story. However, my insistence on countering your first point is too strong. There's literally no reason to feel the need to write a negative review. What I meant was negative reviews without constructive criticism: i.e., "THIS STORY SUCKS, YOU'RE AWFUL," etc. A long time ago, people called these "flames." Not sure if they're still called that. That is not how you get better as a writer. I very clearly stated that I accept any and all constructive criticism. Negative reviews are pointless and have no place anywhere. Like I said in the opening notes, "Feel free to comment, just don't be a jackass." The 'lack of sex' was the entire point of the story. It's supposed to fuel your own imagination, just as a good piece of artwork (such as the one this story is based off of) would do as well. If you're looking for 'non-implied intimacy' I have an entire novel's worth in my story 'Time for School.' Thanks again. Edited January 15, 2015 by AnthonyFiction Quote
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