BigMan7307 Posted December 16, 2014 Report Posted December 16, 2014 Crazy makes the world go around. There really is no such thing as truly normal. Just normal relative to your own experiences and preferences. Quote
magusfang Posted December 16, 2014 Report Posted December 16, 2014 Uh oh... if it came from Magus, be careful, lol. You've seen how convoluted his ideas can be. I mean, I think most of the plans in his stories he tags as "Amy's" but, they're stripped down versions of his own plans. He does it to confuse us. Again, I do love where this is headed, and hopefully life will settle down a little for you so you can put a few more chapters in the book. It hurts that you would think that little ole me could come up with such wild things like Amy.... Hmmm, maybe I have multiple personalities.... Quote
magusfang Posted December 17, 2014 Report Posted December 17, 2014 Mmmm could be...could not!...shut up...you shut up... Quote
Sniper014 Posted December 17, 2014 Report Posted December 17, 2014 I agree with Magus and Bigman was to short but still nice chapter. Also agree in the reviews by Magus (caught in the room by the parents). It is going to be fun to see how this works out. But it also seems that the parents weren't to broken up about the scene. Maybe they have a part of their history that we do not know right now until you let us know what it is in future chapters. Post the next one in your time frame. Just remember though that if you wait to long we will move on to other writers because it will look like you just stopped writing the story. They are some on this site that stated that releases were coming but nothing done on those stories for over two to three years or longer. Will be looking for the next next post because the story is fun to read and you seem to be a very good writer. You learned from the master cliffhanger writers on how to leave the reader wanting more. Keep up the great work. Quote
that-one-guy Posted December 17, 2014 Author Report Posted December 17, 2014 I agree with Magus and Bigman was to short but still nice chapter. Also agree in the reviews by Magus (caught in the room by the parents). It is going to be fun to see how this works out. But it also seems that the parents weren't to broken up about the scene. Maybe they have a part of their history that we do not know right now until you let us know what it is in future chapters. Post the next one in your time frame. Just remember though that if you wait to long we will move on to other writers because it will look like you just stopped writing the story. They are some on this site that stated that releases were coming but nothing done on those stories for over two to three years or longer. Will be looking for the next next post because the story is fun to read and you seem to be a very good writer. You learned from the master cliffhanger writers on how to leave the reader wanting more. Keep up the great work. Thanks for your kind words, I know myself that it was short, but you have to admit, it was the best place to end. Time wise school finishes on friday so I will have plenty of time to write, but even if I complete it in a day or two, I want to post it on christmas, as a present to you all. Quote
Sniper014 Posted December 18, 2014 Report Posted December 18, 2014 Ok will be waiting for it. Thanks. Quote
that-one-guy Posted December 19, 2014 Author Report Posted December 19, 2014 Well thats school done with for the next few weeks, oh the joys of the holidays Quote
that-one-guy Posted December 19, 2014 Author Report Posted December 19, 2014 Gonna start on them tommorow Quote
that-one-guy Posted December 24, 2014 Author Report Posted December 24, 2014 Ok ive got the first half done, ill grind the other half out tommorrow. Merry Christmas everybody! Quote
that-one-guy Posted December 25, 2014 Author Report Posted December 25, 2014 Ok, theres a slight one day delay, got a new computer so I was busy setting things up all day but ill get to writing the rest tomorrow, hope you all had a wonderful christmas with your families and friends Quote
that-one-guy Posted December 26, 2014 Author Report Posted December 26, 2014 Sorry again, was kept busy all day by the family but tomorrow I have no additional family, no big dinners, nowhere to be so I WILL finish this chapter Quote
Hundybuns Posted December 26, 2014 Report Posted December 26, 2014 That's OK take your time and continue doing a great job. Merry Christmas to you and your family. Quote
Hundybuns Posted December 27, 2014 Report Posted December 27, 2014 Just read chapter four. Great chapter, nice way you had Gemma wake up on Christmas. Waiting patiently for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. Quote
Rescue25 Posted December 27, 2014 Report Posted December 27, 2014 Short and sweet. Glad you finally had her wake up. NEEEXXXT? B Quote
that-one-guy Posted December 27, 2014 Author Report Posted December 27, 2014 I have plans for the next chapter, the part magus gave me the idea for was the pregnancy Quote
Rescue25 Posted December 27, 2014 Report Posted December 27, 2014 Momma pregggers from camping trip OK. The girls not so much. Waiting on the next one. B Quote
that-one-guy Posted December 27, 2014 Author Report Posted December 27, 2014 From before the trip, they didnt have time on the actual trip. Quote
BigMan7307 Posted December 28, 2014 Report Posted December 28, 2014 Loved the chapter, good twist on it, can't wait to see everything Gemma worked out while she was out, what a lot of her decisions regarding Sam lead to. Quote
that-one-guy Posted January 6, 2015 Author Report Posted January 6, 2015 (edited) Ok, sorry for the delay in updates but for the next few weeks I have to knuckle down because now its proper exam time so there wont be any new chapters up for a couple weeks, sorry to disappoint But on another note me and a friend are going to start writing a novel and since its a non erotic one I can still keep my other writing time free by writing on the school bus or other places. But if any of you would like to review it once its done which probably wont be for a while (at least a few months) then drop me a message in my inbox as I wont be posting it on here. Again sorry for the delay but the next few chapters should see the introduction of some really saucy parts. Edited January 6, 2015 by that-one-guy Quote
that-one-guy Posted January 15, 2015 Author Report Posted January 15, 2015 (edited) So exam season is almost done for now so hopefully I will be able to get back to writing soon, I might take a few days down time because my god proper exams are so much more stressful than practice ones! Edited January 15, 2015 by that-one-guy Quote
that-one-guy Posted January 19, 2015 Author Report Posted January 19, 2015 (edited) Ok, as of tonight i will begin writing again, my apologies for the break Edited January 19, 2015 by that-one-guy Quote
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