Guest Christian1040 Posted February 25, 2015 Report Share Posted February 25, 2015 Max did say he was letting them win on purpose. And the people on Death's list are anyone but Max, Nadi, and Amy since they were all included in future scenes of the story. I guess you could call it a Flashfoward? Opposite of a flashback? Anyway and i guess alice too, because if her body is destroyed she'll just go back to her old mainframe at the house. Hans dying at the Vatican would be kinda poetic. Dying trying to destroy what you once believed in. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angeldust Posted February 25, 2015 Report Share Posted February 25, 2015 Yeah, now you got the idea. I agree with Hans as a possibility as he seems to be getting involved and it would be sorta a way to make up for being programed by saving Max or one of the girls. My other choices are because they are getting closer involved with happiness. And life does that, sets you up just to kick the stool out from under you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Missyg Posted February 25, 2015 Report Share Posted February 25, 2015 Magusfang, I just have 1 question, now that you have Max, Emma and petra getting so close, what about Max and Marge. I hope you leave them time to be together and not have Marge take up with Rick. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted February 25, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2015 Of course. Marge is sort of like an older version of Amy, she'll be with the older women but only with Max. In fact I had a scene with Max and Marge after he gets back. a whole angst thing that Marge fixes, sometime a boy just needs his mother...or his wife's mother as it were Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted February 25, 2015 Report Share Posted February 25, 2015 Yay, no max dying on this mission. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted February 25, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2015 Yeah, chapter 48 is up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted February 25, 2015 Report Share Posted February 25, 2015 (edited) Thanks again!! I hope you are having fun writing these last two chapters because I damn sure enjoy reading them. The interaction and story back fill with the family love are magnificent. I hope we can have some more before Max has to go take on some more of the religious order. B Edited February 25, 2015 by Rescue25 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest crazychickhull Posted February 25, 2015 Report Share Posted February 25, 2015 Holy back story batman! That was awesome and beautiful CCH Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted February 25, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2015 Thanx. Writing chapter 20 in Northstar, I think it's gonna be a long on...almost double my usual chapter length Rescue25 and COJimmyV 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigMan7307 Posted February 25, 2015 Report Share Posted February 25, 2015 I love how Mel seduced Mike... how much input do the girls have on sections like that? I'm a little surprised that no one at the school even asked about Max and Emma not being there when the rest went back to school, then again, I'm sure "honeymoon" was part of someone's conversation regarding them. Yeah, sappy chapters, but, they can't all be shoot em up, they are a loving family after all. You would think that since Joanne's issue is a chemical imbalance that Legion could step in and tinker around a little bit with it. I know it goes against self preservation that Legion will inherently have too, but, I'm hoping that they can either filter them out of her body or flash them before they take her out of the pod. Only the great and powerful Magus knows where things are going, I'm loving the ride. I wonder if Cat is somewhat modeled after your new found "Monkey" enjoy them when they're young, as they get older they cause more gray hairs. We did miss you while you were gone, Enjoy your little bit of snow, and slightly cool weather, just watch the ice. I say cool because it's a lot colder and more snow here, lol. Can't wait for the next NorthStar. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest crazychickhull Posted February 25, 2015 Report Share Posted February 25, 2015 Bring it on magus can't wait been too long between chapters on that one salivating at the thought! CCH Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted February 26, 2015 Report Share Posted February 26, 2015 It will probably take a long one for everyone to get up to speed on the characters again. I know on the last one I had to go back and reread a chapter or so to figure out who was doing what. B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted February 26, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2015 Yeah, i do tend to neglect this story Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted February 26, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2015 Chapter 20 of Northstar is up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted February 26, 2015 Report Share Posted February 26, 2015 Yeah, i do tend to neglect this story Yeah but many of us prefer GITG if we have to make a choice. Nice chapter on North. Again kudos to you no hangers on this one. B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted February 26, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2015 I love how Mel seduced Mike... how much input do the girls have on sections like that? I'm a little surprised that no one at the school even asked about Max and Emma not being there when the rest went back to school, then again, I'm sure "honeymoon" was part of someone's conversation regarding them. Yeah, sappy chapters, but, they can't all be shoot em up, they are a loving family after all. You would think that since Joanne's issue is a chemical imbalance that Legion could step in and tinker around a little bit with it. I know it goes against self preservation that Legion will inherently have too, but, I'm hoping that they can either filter them out of her body or flash them before they take her out of the pod. Only the great and powerful Magus knows where things are going, I'm loving the ride. I wonder if Cat is somewhat modeled after your new found "Monkey" enjoy them when they're young, as they get older they cause more gray hairs. We did miss you while you were gone, Enjoy your little bit of snow, and slightly cool weather, just watch the ice. I say cool because it's a lot colder and more snow here, lol. Can't wait for the next NorthStar. they don't have a lot of input per se, but the characters are pretty heavily based on my girls - to a point obviously, the five year old doesn't wear kevlar LOL. But they usually dont read the stores until after they're posted, but I do ask for advice from time to time. as for Joanne, Legion could fix her but wont because that would change who she is, plus she would never give him permission Haven't decided what to do with her nanites yet...we're not quite done with her...there woll be a lot of ghosts bubbling up from the past in the next book...hehehe As for my niece, she's more like the twind than Cat, even got her one of those 22 caliber crickets, it a miniature rifle for young kids (sister-in-law nearly had a stroke) and she loves going to the ranhe like a big girl, pretty good shot too Rescue25 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
COJimmyV Posted February 26, 2015 Report Share Posted February 26, 2015 A little late to the party for GITG 48 but I, too, LOVE the backstory character development. While I'm a huge fan of the action chapters, variety IS the spice of life and these kinds of chapters are not only well-written but just a pleasure to read. Once again, beautifully done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angeldust Posted February 27, 2015 Report Share Posted February 27, 2015 I basically skipped Northstar as I wasn't into it, I'd prefer it to have been a bit more explaining about current time and the girls questioning with more details about the formerly abused sisters. I guess that it was just too long about the same thing over & over. Just me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted February 27, 2015 Report Share Posted February 27, 2015 they don't have a lot of input per se, but the characters are pretty heavily based on my girls - to a point obviously, the five year old doesn't wear kevlar LOL. But they usually dont read the stores until after they're posted, but I do ask for advice from time to time. as for Joanne, Legion could fix her but wont because that would change who she is, plus she would never give him permission Haven't decided what to do with her nanites yet...we're not quite done with her...there woll be a lot of ghosts bubbling up from the past in the next book...hehehe As for my niece, she's more like the twind than Cat, even got her one of those 22 caliber crickets, it a miniature rifle for young kids (sister-in-law nearly had a stroke) and she loves going to the ranhe like a big girl, pretty good shot too Excellent. My 3 yo grandaughter has been shooting for a while. Start em young, teach them about safety and supervise closley. My son takes her to sport goods store and she chooses what gun she would like to have. . Saw on shout you are going to Jamaica. Business?? B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted February 27, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2015 yeah, few days, babysitting duty, then the girls are gonna meet me for a long weekend Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted February 27, 2015 Report Share Posted February 27, 2015 Enjoy yourselves Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted February 27, 2015 Report Share Posted February 27, 2015 yeah, few days, babysitting duty, then the girls are gonna meet me for a long weekend If memory serves, and it doesn't always, your last 2 "babysittings" led to recovery time for you. Wear the vest. At worst you'll get it salt stained from sweat. Otherwise have fun AND keep "us" posted. We worry as much or more than your "real" family. B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
magusfang Posted February 27, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2015 yeah, i learned my lesson...rookie mistake and lucky all i got was a scratch...at least i get the stitches out monday, should help with the itching Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that-one-guy Posted February 27, 2015 Report Share Posted February 27, 2015 yeah, i learned my lesson...rookie mistake and lucky all i got was a scratch...at least i get the stitches out monday, should help with the itching Ask yourself this, a bit of uncomfortable heat or at least a week of itchy wounds. Not to mention you probably got your ass chewed off when the girls heard Rescue25 and Samara 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rescue25 Posted February 27, 2015 Report Share Posted February 27, 2015 Scratches DON'T get stitches!!! B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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