Guest Guest Posted November 15, 2013 Report Posted November 15, 2013 Following the Fourth Shinobi War, Naruto decides that, after saving the world and effectively ending war for the foreseeable future, he'll try something more normal, like just having a simple romantic relationship. And, well, even though he probably picked up some experience on the trip with Jiraiya (like he'd let his godson remain as clueless as he was), he's more or less got nothing to draw on as far as actual relationships go, since they were always on the move. Luckily, there's what seems like an easy answer: Hinata. She confessed to liking him, they've known each other for years, he'll freely acknowledge that he finds her really hot, everyone seems to think they belong together, and it feels to him like he's doing right be Neji somehow. So they get together, and everything seems hunk-dory. Except it's not really. They frankly don't have much common ground to build a relationship on. She still has trouble looking him in the eye. And to be frank, the sex is boring. He can only be entertained by knocking her out with pleasure and having to finish some other way (either by his own hand or with her body) so many times. Even then, sometimes he feels the need to just finish inside her while she's out, just to sell the lie that she was able to get him off that time. But it seems like everyone would be really upset if they broke up, and like it would be insulting to Neji's memory to have gone this far and break it off. Then someone else comes along. Ayame's been looking out for Naruto for years, and he grew up nicely. Karin was ecstatic to meet another Uzumaki, and really loves the feel of his chakra. One of the foreign kunoichi (Samui, Karui, Kurotsuchi, Temari) is in the village as a diplomat and got to know the hero personally. The Mizukage insists he be her personal escort on her possibly more frequent than necessary or proper visits to the Konoha. Since he's been around more, Hanabi gets to know Naruto and see why her sister likes him. Or even someone is messing around with Time-Space ninjutsu and accidentally brings the Hinata from Road to Ninja to their world, and no one can figure out how to send her back. The point is, whoever this woman is, she decides she wants Naruto for herself, and has no qualms about being unfair and underhanded to get him. She doesn't care that people think they were meant to be together, and if she can take Naruto away from Hinata, clearly their relationship was never really that strong anyway, right? With those thoughts in mind, she sets out to seduce Naruto away from Hinata. Of course, he's too loyal to cheat on her right away, so she has to start slow, build up the connection. It works, naturally. They can talk easier, have more interests in common, can treat each other more as equals, and it doesn't feel forced. But Naruto still won't consciously cheat, not yet. One night, while Hinata is otherwise occupied, the other woman takes her opportunity. Gets Naruto a bit drunk, just so he won't question changes in "Hinata's" behavior, then fucks him. And it's actually good, give and take on both parts, the best he's ever had, really. Next morning, Naruto wakes up to find Woman X lying next to him and figures out what happened. He freaks out, chases her off, but she makes it clear she's always open for more. He doesn't admit what happened, obviously, but instead has sex with Hinata that night. And realizes exactly how empty their relationship is. They have no deep connection, and even the sex is boring, especially compared to Woman X. So begins his shameful affair with Woman X. They meet up and have sex frequently. Eventually, Hinata happens to see them, preferably in what she always thought of as her and Naruto's bed. She sees the look on his face and realizes that he'd been faking the pleasure their entire relationship, and, much as she hates it and herself, as she continues to watch, she can't help but masturbate furiously, getting her off harder than anything but the best sex with Naruto ever had before. But she can't stand the idea of losing Naruto, so she tries desperately to keep him, falling deeper and deeper into depravity, embracing the kinkiest and most humiliating sex acts possible to try and keep him: anal, Kage Bunshin gangbangs, Kyuubi Chakra Mode violations (extra hands, tentacles, dicks, whatever), having him use the Version 2 transformation to hump her into the ground, full-on bestiality style, even going as far as disregarding her own physical well-being to do stuff like dilating her urethra so he can fuck that. The problem is that she doesn't realize Woman X is keeping an eye on them, and knows full well what's going on. More importantly, Woman X is still better than her, so whatever Hinata has Naruto do to her, Woman X will do, and manage it better. Other scenarios that eventually take place include Naruto ditching events with Hinata for Woman X: disappearing from a dinner date to have sex in the bathroom, going missing during Hinata's birthday party, only for her to see him in another room with Woman X, etc. Eventually, Naruto and Hinata are going to get married, because it's still a practical decision and he still feels obligated to the relationship, and Woman X knows he's really hers no matter what. And Naruto disappears from the celebration party, with only Hinata knowing where he is. They each refuse a bachelor(ette) party, with friends thinking they'll spend the night together, while Naruto didn't even know Hinata refused and she spends the night desperately masturbating while watching her fiance with his lover. The day of the wedding, she's the only one who knows that her maid of honor (or whatever ninjas have) has a pussy full of the grooms cum. And on the honeymoon, it all comes out in the open. Woman X decided to show herself directly to Hinata, Hinata got enough of a spine to confront them, or she just didn't hide well enough while masturbating. Regardless, it's out in the open now, and things are going to change. Woman X promptly kicks Hinata out of what should be her marriage bed, effectively telling her she's a servant now. If she wants anything, Naruto's cum, sex, anything, it comes only as a reward for doing well. If she wants one of Naruto's loads, she can get on her knees, beg, kiss her way up Woman X's leg from the feet up, and suck it out of her pussy. Even once they get back to Konoha, it's the same. Hinata is force to live basically as a servant in her home, subordinate to her husband's mistress, who absolutely loves humiliating her and treating her like an animal. Wearing a slutty maid outfit, being forced to clean the house, eating out of dishes on the floor, forcing her to watch with vibrators going in every way and pumped full of aphrodisiacs while Woman X fucks Naruto, pumping her full of diuretics and laxatives and then forbidding her from using the bathroom...whatever sadistic, humiliating thing you can think of, Hinata is forced into it. And what's worse, she loves it. Or rather, it gets her off like nothing else. Even the occasional sex with Naruto she's allowed is pure humiliation. It comes only as a reward for excessive effort, and it's always either immediately followed by Naruto having Woman X, as though to demonstrate her superiority, or Hinata is restrained and her ability to act completely taken away, so she's effectively just a living toy. And still, she's getting off like never before. Finally, the ultimate humiliation comes when Woman X decides to let Hinata have a child, the only one she'll ever have. After that, only Woman X will have Naruto's children. The child is raised in that house, and obviously sees Naruto as its father. But it sees Woman X as its mother, and Hinata basically as furniture. Woman X even teaches the child the same "games" she plays with Hinata, such that the child sees tormenting her or Naruto fucking her in whatever way he might not as any kind of human interaction, but just the same as playing with a toy or sitting on a chair. And with everything, her love, her marriage, her dignity, and even her child all stolen from her, Hinata stops caring about anything but pleasure and how to get it. Thinking about some points, this probably works best with Hanabi or a displaced RTN Hinata. The initial drunken mistake is easier explained by resemblance that way than Naruto not noticing a henge, and it would effectively handle the issue of child appearances, as whatever traits are inherited from the mother are easily explained away. Plus, RTN is NTR backwards, and this is reverse NTR in that it is a female NTR-ing a male away from another female. Quote
Guest arkbar22 Posted September 29, 2014 Report Posted September 29, 2014 This is good!! Will anyone try to do this. I've been trying to find fics like this but I always come out blank. Please someone try and do this. And if you do, please use Hanabi as woman X. Quote
Guest Guest Posted November 18, 2014 Report Posted November 18, 2014 In light of the end, and pairing confirmation...Using female Sasuke (Satsuki for simplicity), because we all know that if he'd been a girl, that would have been the canon.Basically the same as the canon end, but instead of going to travel the world, Satsuki stays in Konoha, to be near Naruto. Unfortunately for her, because of all the above circumstances, he winds up in a relationship with Hinata. Fortunately for her, he's not really happy with this relationship, as above. And since Satsuki is his BFF, they hang out a lot, and he confides things like that in her.Shortly after he confesses his boredom to Satsuki, he starts falling asleep while hanging out with her. And he notices that every time he falls asleep around her, he winds up dreaming about sex with her. Of course, he's too embarrassed to say anything, but as a result, Naruto starts thinking about his best friend as someone to have sex with. He even starts dreaming about her every time he sleeps.Naturally, the dreaming about her was Satsuki's work. At least, thinking it was just dreams. In actuality, she'd been seducing him and they'd been fucking every time they hung out, and she'd just hypnotize him so he wouldn't freak out with guilt, slowly building him up to NOT feeling guilty about it at all.It finally culminates as Naruto, having been teased to the point of breaking by Satsuki that afternoon, fucks Hinata into the matress until she passes out, and then some more. As he rolls over and lays back, still frustratingly hard but trying to go to sleep, Satsuki comes in, mocking the situation. Naruto assumes it's another dream, grabs her, and fucks her silly, right next to Hinata. Then when he doesn't wake up, he realizes it's not a dream, and Satsuki tells him everything.That's how their affair begins. People assume Naruto keeps Satsuki nearby to keep an eye on her, or as a bodyguard, or because they're BFFs, when really, it's just because they enjoy being able to fuck whenever they have the chance. Quote
Guest hornydog Posted February 5, 2015 Report Posted February 5, 2015 Wow, this is gonna be hot! Is there anyone capable of writing this? Quote
VotedforKodos Posted February 17, 2015 Report Posted February 17, 2015 How bad is it that I really want something for this with a new generation character? Like Kurenai and Asuma's daughter Mirai or Himawari or Sarada. Mirai is apparently part of Naruto's honor guard as Hokage, so something like he keeps staying late for work, she stays after everyone else leaves out of loyalty/admiration, and one night, she seduces him (an old crush on Kurenai doesn't hurt). Himawari was a daddy's girl, but between Boruto and Hokage duties, she never got as much time with Naruto as she wanted, so she wants to spend as much time with him as possible after becoming a ninja, but doesn't quite have the boundaries she should, and Naruto missed out on all of the moral lessons that say wanting to fuck your daughter is wrong. Sarada always had issues with her father, since he was hardly ever around. Naruto actually wound up being a better influence, and she kind of developed a crush on Boruto because of it, but Naruto is better in every way, and her Sharingan helps her get him. Some kind of training going on, training with his guard/daughter/practical niece, it's been slow and bad with Hinata for a while, things get a little too hot and heavy. Before long, training exercises, meetings, mission (de)briefings, visits, all wind up as time to spend fucking. There's usually someone under his desk when Hinata stops in for whatever reason. Or maybe they stumble on an existing affair, with Shizune or Sakura or Hanabi or someone. Possibly wind up with multiple girls, as they find out about each other and get pulled in, or mother/daughter threesomes. Quote
dragonman Posted February 19, 2015 Report Posted February 19, 2015 How bad is it that I really want something for this with a new generation character? Like Kurenai and Asuma's daughter Mirai or Himawari or Sarada. Mirai is apparently part of Naruto's honor guard as Hokage, so something like he keeps staying late for work, she stays after everyone else leaves out of loyalty/admiration, and one night, she seduces him (an old crush on Kurenai doesn't hurt). Himawari was a daddy's girl, but between Boruto and Hokage duties, she never got as much time with Naruto as she wanted, so she wants to spend as much time with him as possible after becoming a ninja, but doesn't quite have the boundaries she should, and Naruto missed out on all of the moral lessons that say wanting to fuck your daughter is wrong. Sarada always had issues with her father, since he was hardly ever around. Naruto actually wound up being a better influence, and she kind of developed a crush on Boruto because of it, but Naruto is better in every way, and her Sharingan helps her get him. Some kind of training going on, training with his guard/daughter/practical niece, it's been slow and bad with Hinata for a while, things get a little too hot and heavy. Before long, training exercises, meetings, mission (de)briefings, visits, all wind up as time to spend fucking. There's usually someone under his desk when Hinata stops in for whatever reason. Or maybe they stumble on an existing affair, with Shizune or Sakura or Hanabi or someone. Possibly wind up with multiple girls, as they find out about each other and get pulled in, or mother/daughter threesomes. all of my likes. take them. Quote
Guest Darth Horny Posted July 14, 2015 Report Posted July 14, 2015 please someone write this. This can really be a good story if someone takes it so plz anyone, write this story and finish it . Quote
Guest Ranma Shampoo forever Posted November 28, 2015 Report Posted November 28, 2015 La trama fue interesante, no pude evitar imaginarme a hinata road to ninja ¿todavia no existe esa historia? Quote
Guest Ranma Shampoo forever Posted November 28, 2015 Report Posted November 28, 2015 Me olvide de mi cuenta de gmail pero te puedo pasar mi nombre en face me llamo lucas gimenez u tengo una imagen de chibi kyubi de 6 colas y en G+ me llamo claudio gimenez y tengo la imagen de trunks del futuro con espada si te interesa y esta historia me encanto siempre veo historias donde naruto pasa por eso admito que fue un shock ver eso y hasta que punto se rebajo hinata Quote
Guest Prince Vekar Posted June 29, 2016 Report Posted June 29, 2016 This is pretty cool. Wish I had the time to write this, unfortunately work is taking its toll. I do hope someone writes this. Quote
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