Young Sage Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 Title: Black Star Cross Author: Young Sage Rating: Adult++ Summary: Shawn hates everything in life. It doesn't help that he has a personal tormentor of 4 years. What will happen when their worlds collide? Many codes apply; few persist. More details in 1st chapter. Abuse, Anal, Angst, B-Mod, H/C, HJ, Language, M/M, N/C, OC, Oral, Other, Rim, SoloM, Tort, UST, Violence, WD, WIP. Feedback: Yes please! The more the merrier. Constructive criticism is always welcomed, along with blatant statements about how cool the story is. Fandom: Original Slash URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094518 Other stuff: I'm adding this because I think things need to be said that don't belong in any of the above categories. This is a story about REAL people, in the REAL world, dealing with REAL issues. There are no vampires, werewolves, angels, demons, elves, made-up creatures, etc. in this story. Just humans. And just high school teenagers as well. No mafia, secret organization, characters who's name you can't pronounce, undercover cops, etc. I tried to make this story as close to the real world as possible. If this appeals to you, then I invite you read Black Star Cross for your viewing pleasure. This is not a PWP (thank goodness). At the time of this posting, there are 18 chapters up for viewing. I faithfully update every other Sunday with a new chapter. And believe me, there's still A LOT left to the story. Apparently, according to the hits and reviews for the story thus far, it's kind of popular. Who knew? That's all for now. I'd REALLY like it if you would just give it a try. Thanks for reading all this! Young Sage Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TemptedTruth Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 Hmmm.. I really like it so far. Your writing style is easy on the eyes, and pretty true to life. Sorry, but I don't see much I'd change about the story xP. I wish I could write as well as you >.< Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Part 1 of Chapter 19 is now up. Part 2 will probably be posted next Sunday. Feel free to read it at any time. Be sure to read the Author's Notes, like always. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted March 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 Part 2 of Chapter 19 is now up. The story isn't listed at the top of the Slash page due to it technically being just an "edit", so you might have to search around for it. Getting it via my profile page is probably the easiest way. Whether Chapter 20 will be posted next week or the week after is still up in the air. We're alomst up to 100 reviews! Let's see if we can do it before Chapter 20 comes out! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted April 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 Chapter 20 is now up. Let me know what you think! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted May 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Sorry for not updating this like I should. Chapters 21 and 22 are now up. Please let me know what you think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted May 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 Chapter 23 is now up. Tell me what you think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted June 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Chapter 24 is now up. Read the Author's Notes and ask away! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted June 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 Chapter 25 is now up. Also, I posted my new PWP, "Dirty Lay" under the Erotica Slash section. Please give that a read as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted July 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 Chapter 26 is now up. Enjoy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted July 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Gahhhh!!! I'm so horrible at this! Chapter 27 was put up on Sunday. Do people read this still? Anyways, enjoy the chapter. A new project will be up on August 1st. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted August 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Chapter 28 is now up. Celebrating Black Star Cross's one-year anniversary! Whoo! And please read the new oneshots as well. Pwetty pwease? *puppy dog eyes of doom* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted August 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2008 Chapter 29 is up. The Rumor Arc begins. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted August 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 Chapter 30 is up. Things always seem to happen when a chapter reaches a "_0" number (10,20,30,etc.). Maybe it's just me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted September 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 Been awhile. Generally don't pay too much attention to the forums. Don't know if anyone reads these. Chapters 31 and 32 are now online. Enjoy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted October 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Chapters 33 and 34 are now up. Celebrating my 21st birthday! Happy Birthday me! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted November 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Chapter 35 is now up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted December 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 Chapter 36 and 37 are now up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted January 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 Chapter 38 is now up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted February 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 So yeah, I completely forgot that the forum exists. Chapter 39-42 are now up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest MiriuOniaya Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 I don't know if I ever posted anything for this story, but; It is freakin' AMAZING! You all should totally read it. I love it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted February 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 I love YOU...in a platonic way, of course! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
knight Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 Finally started reading this one over the weekend and finished yesterday. Wasn't sure about reading it at first, since I really don't care to read 'first person' fiction. I'm happy that I did give it a chance!! The writing style makes you almost forget that it's 'first person' or Shawn's POV=author. Love it!! Many times I wanted to reach through the screen and throttle Anthony and his short memory, jock or not, he kept forgetting how badly he tormented Shawn over the years and how quickly he forgot. That lead to a lot of yelling from Shawn and Anthony still didn't get it. I like their little bickering matches. Sorry, couldn't help but to giggle through the whole first BJ for both of them, guess that is what made it so good, hot, both of them inexperienced and learning what the other liked as they went along. Hopefully Anthony will accept that he is gay at some in point, one less thing for them to argue about. I'll put the rest of my reviews/feedback where it should be. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted February 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 I don't know why people are suddenly starting to comment on this topic. But, I'm not complaining! Seriously, thanks for the reply. The POV is Shawn's, not necessarily my own. Remember, Shawn's thought are NOT Young Sage's thoughts. Nor Anthony's, come to think of it. Though Shawn and Anthony won't admit it, they really do argue like an old married couple. I made BSC to be something different than your run-of-the-mill slash fic, focusing on REAL guys with REAL problems, in the REAL world. No vampires or government conspiricies here! Or feminine boys (except for Peter). I tend to avoid them, even in real life. I figured that if Shawn and Anthony are truly virgins (at least to oral sex), then it would be highly unlikely that they'd be "experts" in the field on their first go. Thus, the scene you're talking about, knight, where they're both clearly inexperienced and totally don't know what to do or how to react. That's all for now, folks. Keep replying here as well as the actual story! And if you have any questions or need something clarified, then ask away here as well. No two week wait here, no-sir-ee! ~YS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Young Sage Posted March 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 Chapter 43 is now up. This will be the last chapter for awhile. I don't have anymore on me. The story will go on hiatus until I make more, whenever that happens. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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