Guest orleans Posted January 22, 2008 Report Share Posted January 22, 2008 Edit: No longer needed. Found someone somewhere else, since no one seemed interested here. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Fandom: Finnish musicians /real persons Caharcters: Antti and Nakki, boh members of a band called Negative Rating: harmless R Warnings : Mild slash, two males kissing It's not necessary to know these people; I just need someone who will have a look or two at my mistakes. I'm no native English speaker, and I have problems with commas and word order. It would be also very helpful if you could have a look a my grammar in general and my spelling too. The story itself is not long; word document, 6 and a half pages. Please help me out! Thank you for reading. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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