2 Sonic SatAM fanfics

[Velvet D Coolette]

Hello everyone,

I know we all want to be critiqued on here, but I'd like to for a special reason: it would appear that a great deal of the adult fanfics, especially homosexual ones based on any of the Sonic universes exploit people's sexual curiosity about lesian and gay relationships, whereas in mine I would prefer to explore primarily the other aspects of homosexuality: the general paranoia, the loneliness, the determination to succeed that it can foster, the tactical thinking that goes into integrating oneself into a community, etc.

Therefore, I would love a critique or 10 to know how I have handled this issue in my first homosexual fic, Soul Control. You don't have to be gay to review, but a review from somebody who knows what it is like would be helpful!

Soul Control is accessable from my profile.