Farlance Posted April 3, 2012 Report Posted April 3, 2012 Hey there; This'll be the place I post responses to all reviews for Ashes and Ice. I don't want to add them directly into the chapters because, well, I'm lazy. And until I get a proper beta, I won't be able to really look at my chapters much more than I already do without spending triple the time editing them, because I'm neurotic. Chapters should come rather quickly; I'm new-ish at this (Not writing, posting stories online), so I try to shell out as much as I can whenenver I have the time to do so. I have a lot of time invested into research and development for this project, and I want to see it come to fruition. Also, a little warning here; So far (As of chapter 3) this is mostly a somewhat dull, if sex-filled, Day in the Life of Cameron. That's not what it'll be for long -- Expect to see the story ramping up soon, and adding the modern fantasy in that I've promised. Quote
Farlance Posted April 3, 2012 Author Report Posted April 3, 2012 smint45: Thank you for your comments; Even simple compliments keep my self-esteem up, and make me want to write more. :> games for days: I can only hope that it turns out to be as interesting as you hope, and I'll do my best to live up to those expectations. poohkie87: I hate when stories just slap you in the face with an unexpected description; So far Erin's been rather vaguely described -- He sort of flits in and out of the picture, just out of eyeshot, all mysterious and sexy. In Chapter 3, he'll be getting a more direct description, courtesy of Cameron ogling him like a dog in heat. Quote
Farlance Posted May 13, 2012 Author Report Posted May 13, 2012 smint45: So many reviews! Thank you! I can't say a lot, but I can say that fae in A&I aren't the happy-go-lucky wingaling fairies you'd expect in a story like this. Keep your eyes open! games for days: Thanks for another review! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond and update the story. I'll surely continue now that I've worked through my creative roadblock. Mignightsscream: You'll certainly find out more; I have dozens of pages of backstory, profiles, and history written about the fae. I plan on incorporating the majority of it into the story by the end. (It's going to be long!) Purgatorium: Oh there'll be many more sex scenes. I can resist manlove. :> Itrasheditgood: I'm glad it's more interesting than it initially was. D: I'm sorry for the slow start, but it'll ramp up quickly! Quote
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