The Black Veil

[Nerys Dax]

Hi,

Here I shall post the review replies to my new, completed story "The Black Veil". I hope you will all enjoy the story.

xx Nerys

[Nerys Dax]

Review Reply to Nick:

Awesome!

Thank you.

[Nerys Dax]

Review reply to Alassea Malfoy:

Nerys, Nerys! You've done it again! Amazing! Wonderful! Fantastic!

*blushes* Wow, thanks. *blushes some more*

I just *knew* it was Voldelicious the whole time I KNEW IT!

Yeah, I am sure my name as the author and it being in the Voldemort-Hermione list wasn't a clue at all. *sticks out tongue*

I am amazed.

Thank you again.

Yours truly

She-Who-Must-Read-The-Prisoner-Soon-Or-You'll-Die xD xD xD

- Alassea M.

Yikes! *hides* You do know that if one kills me, any and all new chapters are an impossibility? *frightened face*

XD

Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing,

xx Nerys

[Nerys Dax]

Review reply to Somebody French:

I can't do a full review right now, but i need to say that I love you.

"'Could we not talk about that anymore? It's getting old. Besides, I doubt the boys made his skin glitter and dumped him back through the veil after his death to be eternally stalked by crazy, middle-aged women and teenage fangirls,' Rowena said, staring at Helga pointedly.

Helga giggled softly and smirked unapologetically. 'Well, he thought he was soooo wonderful and one of a kind. Now he truly is. I sincerely hope he enjoys getting a taste of his own medicine, the disgusting, emo stalker that he is. "

You have no idea what this means to me.

I will come back, but I had to say thank you. You made my day.

You're welcome; but no thanks are necessary, it was my absolute pleasure to make fun of Twilight. It's such a delightful target. XD

Thanks for telling me you enjoyed that bit,

xx Nerys

[Guest Alassea Malfoy]

Review reply to Alassea Malfoy:

*blushes* Wow, thanks. *blushes some more*

Yeah, I am sure my name as the author and it being in the Voldemort-Hermione list wasn't a clue at all. *sticks out tongue*

Thank you again.

Yikes! *hides* You do know that if one kills me, any and all new chapters are an impossibility? *frightened face*

XD

Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing,

xx Nerys

Well, then you can very well hurry, before you get crucified quite horribly - only the Dark Lord can beat my cruciatus curse >

[Guest Alassea Malfoy]

Review reply to Alassea Malfoy:

Yeah, I am sure my name as the author and it being in the Voldemort-Hermione list wasn't a clue at all. *sticks out tongue*

Oh, that? I totally missed the list (yeah, riiiight ) and no, I actually first saw your name at the end xD Buuut, I must confess that my laziness when it comes to read the author name was good for me, 'cause I found out I could recognize the writing (YAY ). I was just in doubt whether it was yours or Serpent In Red's. So I feel happy for being so observant *cough*

Hugs & Butterfly kisses

Your

Alassea

P.S: Tell mama to bugger off

[Nerys Dax]

Well, then you can very well hurry, before you get crucified quite horribly - only the Dark Lord can beat my cruciatus curse >

MOOOODDDSS! I am getting threatened by this poster! *emo sob* I thought this was a moderated forum, but nooo ... they just allow death threats and torture threats to go undisturbed. *more emo sobbing and pouts* Well, puh! *stomps foot*

I suppose that means I should just continue writing then.

No protection at all! *WAILS*

Nerys is a sad, emo puppy.

At the other end of the AFFnet forum, mods united whisper: Crazy author talking about herself in the third person, best not get involved with the crazy ones. *all tiptoe away rapidly*

[Nerys Dax]

Oh, that? I totally missed the list (yeah, riiiight ) and no, I actually first saw your name at the end xD Buuut, I must confess that my laziness when it comes to read the author name was good for me, 'cause I found out I could recognize the writing (YAY ). I was just in doubt whether it was yours or Serpent In Red's. So I feel happy for being so observant *cough*

Hugs & Butterfly kisses

Your

Alassea

P.S: Tell mama to bugger off

Well ... YAY FOR YOU!

"Tell mama to bugger off" - Er? What? *confused expression*

Eh, it's early morning (11:32) here. I am hardly awake yet; don't expect me to get something before coffee. *hears loud laughter across the globe and I could've sworn I heard someone whisper: as if she ever would*

[Nerys Dax]

Review reply to M0nt:

I'm loving the twist to the decreasing birth fic.

Thanks. I found it quite ironic to have them bring back the one person who caused it all. *sniggers* I just couldn't resist it. XD

Thank you for reading and reviewing,

xx Nerys

[Nerys Dax]

Second review reply to m0nt:

My god N! I just simply can not get enough of that brain of yours. I have know more. What happens after this? Does keep baby? Does he come back? Please don't leave us hanging. *puppy dog eyes and pout*

Oh noes! More puppy dog eyes. XD

Actually, I feel quite content with the story as it is now. The muse is back with my other stories, and we'll see how things go from there. First, I really need to finish one of those three WIPs. And second, I would actually need a plot for this one if I were to continue on it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing (again ),

xx Nerys

[Nerys Dax]

Review reply to lisa:

Oh, this is fabulous! Great smut with perfect InCommand!Hermione. I just hope you will write as sequel for Beltain. Heck, you could write one for ever festival! I really want to know what Hermione does next and what Voldemort thinks he'll do. This was brilliant.

Thank you. I loved writing Hermione like that. She's fun when she kicks arse.

You actually hit the nail right on the head. If (and that's a big IF) but if I were to write a second part, it would be then.

I'm glad you liked the fic and thank you for reading and reviewing,

xx Nerys

[Nerys Dax]

Review reply to Terri Vehrenkamp:

That was good but it feels so unfinished. Seems more like the first 2 chapters instead of the entire thing. I would love to see you continue this into something longer. The way you've written Hermione and her interactions with Tom would be a great tale.

Actually, it's a one-shot. It's only two chapters on AFFnet because it's so long, and I once heard that really long chapters take a lot of the database so I split it in two here. On GE and FFnet, it's just one chapter.

As to continuing on it, well, actually, I agree with one of my other reviewers who said that pushing it along could exhaust it. It's an "open end" story, basically a PGP: Plot to Get to Porn, and it was written for a challenge. My muse is completely satisfied with how it is now, and I already have three other Tomione WIPs that need finishing. I have no intention whatsoever to add to the pressure and give myself another one. I may (and that's a big "may") do a one-shot sequel at Beltane, but only if the muse supplies me with something interesting to do in that sequel and if I have at least one WIP finished by then, preferably two.

I'm glad though that you liked the story enough to want more of it. I'm also glad you liked how I wrote Hermione and her interactions with Tom. And I want to thank you for reading and reviewing,

xx Nerys

[Nerys Dax]

Review reply to ginger tea:

Great fic! Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope we will se more of Ron too, you write him very well!

*sticks out tongue to tea-drinking Queen of Gutter City* I know it's you, Queenie. No amount of "demure tea-sipping" will convince me otherwise.

But if you want Ron, surely, I can write you a special fic with you and him in it ... 2gethaaaaah!

Yep, I assume the "AAAAAH" was yours? As was the running around with flailing limbs at the prospect? XD

Thanks for reading and reviewing sweetie,

I hope your throat feels better,

xx Nerys

[Nerys Dax]

Review Reply to Lazy_Heart:

I enjoyed every second of this fic. I keep wondering and wondering why such a strong and mature witch would just submit to a ministry decree like that, and then out comes the bad @$$ Hermione we all know and love. That just gave the end the perfect clincher.

I'm glad you enjoyed the fic.

Yeah, it wouldn't be Hermione to me either if she'd just rolled over and followed orders she disagreed with. *snnnrks* I can't see her do that. So naturally, she had to have an ulterior motive for being there. I'm glad you enjoyed that part and felt it gave the end the perfect clincher. *wipes forehead about finally getting a reviewer who agrees with me that this thing is finished* Thank you for that.

And thank you for reading and reviewing,

xx Nerys

[Nerys Dax]

review reply to Tea Lady Miya:

Great thrid chapter. Update soon. *sniggers*

Thanks for the encouragement. I'll see what I can do.

*skips huge empty space*

(Please note that "update soon" can be referring to any one of your fics. I'm not picky)

Okay. Thanks unpicky one,

xx Nerys

Review reply to Alassea Malfoy:

Haha! That was amusing.

Then, it served its intention. XD

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

xx Nerys

Review Reply to Colao:

I'd love to read more of this, if you'd consider writing more?

This is getting far too silly. Get on wit' it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

xx Nerys

[Nerys Dax]

Review reply to Sanely Insane Rogue:

OMFG, I love this chapter. You really have a knack in continuing one-shots. More chapters like this please.

S ... I ... R ... Yeah, riiiight. So clever, Serpent In Red. xxp

OMFG!!! I am soooo happy you enjoyed the continuation. XD

You want more of this silliness? But no, that can't be done. This is already getting way too silly. Get on with it!!!

Waves,

xx Nyers.

[Nerys Dax]

Review reply to Gramaticaly Corect:

The author was a bit OoC, IMO.

Mmyessss, you think? *frown in forehead* Well, I suppose you have a fair point there; the author wasn't nearly awesome and magnificent enough, that's true. Thanks for bringing it up.

Hope you can improve your writing, you kept writing "'e", which is not grammatically correct. It'd "he"

Mmm... *scratches neck* Mmokaaaay. If you say so, but mmm ... I'll probably need some more lessons to get it right. I did research the "e" marvellously and it's said to be used as such, but I don't doubt that you probably know better than me, GC.

Hope I've been helpful, can't wait to see where you're going with this!

-GC

Oh hhhmmmmmmmmokaaaay. Yes, very helpful indeed. Well, naturally it will go towards more silliness. Silly, silly, silly.

xoxox,

Nerys

[Nerys Dax]

Review reply to Ginger Tea (who's definitely not the same person as Gramatically Corect):

Nice update, hope you'll be able to update more soon! You should continue this; it's not as if your other works in progress are that developed anyway...

*clutches to chest in shock* Now that's not niiiiice!!! *cries out loud* My other WIPs are amazing wonders of fantastic writings!!! U NO NOTHIIIIING!!! *undignified sobbing* I shan't ever write again. EVAAAAA! I'm heart-broken. Destroyed. Evil Ginger tea took my cup and drank it all.

As always, hope to read more about Ron!

Next chapter, then. Wait for it ....

xx Nerys

[Nerys Dax]

Review reply to scarletwitchextreme:

"omggggg i wish this had a sequel sooo epic"

LOL. There may be a future one-shot coming. MAY. So no promise. I got some ideas, but I'm working on MOM2 and Prisoner now and want to focus on finishing those two first.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it that much. Thanks for reading and reviewing,

xx Nerys

[Nerys Dax]

Review reply to FFnet's Genevieve:

I'm just going to keep it simple and say that I adore(!) this fic

and everything about it. Not constructive, I know, but it is too early for

that.

Thank you. I love that you took the time to review and it's definitely constructive in that it always brightens my day to hear that someone liked what I wrote. So, thanks for reading and reviewing,

xx Nerys

[Guest AliceWonderland]

C'mon sequel revolving around Beltane & Tom knocking up Hermione! O/////O You know you want to, why else would it be mentioned? <3 Cheers for rough sex! ;}

[Nerys Dax]

C'mon sequel revolving around Beltane & Tom knocking up Hermione! O/////O You know you want to, why else would it be mentioned? <3 Cheers for rough sex! ;}

LOL. You're right; it's why I mentioned it. So, yes, I'm planning more one-shots for this "veil series", but I'm focusing on finishing my WIPs first. At least that's the plan.

I'm glad you enjoyed the smut and found the story interesting enough to want more of it. ^^

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

xx Nerys

[Guest Nerys]

The Black Veil Review Reply to Lbc:

Your right much better here!!!!

Well, I figured after your review of The Prisoner that you'd probably prefer the smut version of The Black Veil.

I'm glad you indeed liked it better. Thanks for letting me know,

xx Nerys