SierraLuna Posted April 6, 2007 Report Share Posted April 6, 2007 (edited) http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600093226 Science fiction story about depraved rulers and their unfortunate slaves. Jahhan, in the latter category, never even knew humans existed off his planet until one dragged him away from his home (with help from his own people). Now his life and his planet's future depend on the people torturing him for entertainment. I have chapters three and four completed, but I'm still working on chapter two. Chapter two is a difficult plot heavy sucker. I'd love some feedback. SL Edited April 6, 2007 by SierraLuna Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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