nintendodude Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 (edited) Hey, I just posted my first story on here, and would like some constructive criticism on it. If you like Nintendo Characters and yuri and/or futa action, then please give this story a read and tell me what you think. Any opinions are welcomed and apprreciated. Title: Roslalina's Seduction Author: ADM Rating: Adult+ Summary:Seeing a light spilling into the dark moon-lit hallway, Rosalina spys on Peach in her bed room at the Smash Bros. Mansion she is staying at. What will happen next? Feedback: Would like as much as you're willing to give. URL:http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600086771 If this seems like you're kind of story, please take a read and tell me how I did. Edited July 11, 2011 by ADM MokaMcdowwll 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MokaMcdowwll Posted June 11, 2012 Report Share Posted June 11, 2012 this is gonna be a good read, i can tell Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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