Toshiro

[Guest Robin_Mask]

Hi all, I thought I would promote my latest story. The link is to the first chapter and it updates roughly every fortnight.

Title: Toshiro

Author: Yagami Raito

Rating: Adult ++

Summary: "Toshiro hated the monotony of a prince's life . . . all he wanted was a change, but having returned from war he realised not all change was for the best." - It's a revenge tragedy focusing on the trials and tragedies of Toshiro as he returns from war, and his search for justice and retribution.

Feedback: Constructive criticism and feedback greatly welcomed.

Fandom: Original - Drama

URL: http://original.adul...hp?no=600103234

Thank you all for taking the time to read this post, and thank you to anyone who takes the oppurtunity to read my story.

Robin Mask (Yagami Raito)

Edited April 4, 2011 by Robin_Mask

[Guest Robin_Mask]

Two new chapters up, thank you to everyone who's read

Part Two, Chapter Seven: http://original.adul...3234&chapter=10

Part Two, Chapter Eight: http://original.adul...3234&chapter=11

[Guest Robin_Mask]

Part Two, Chapter Nine: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103234&chapter=12

Part Two, Chapter Ten: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103234&chapter=13

[Guest Robin_Mask]

Part Two, Chapter Eleven: http://original.adul...3234&chapter=14

Part Two, Chapter Twelve: http://original.adul...3234&chapter=15

Part Two, Chapter Thirteen: http://original.adul...3234&chapter=16

Thank you to anyone who's read so far, and a large thank you for all the feedback, I vastly appreciate it.

These chapters mark the end of Part Two. Part Three (final part) will begin in a month's time.

[silkyselkie]

Part Two, Chapter Eleven: http://original.adul...3234&chapter=14

Part Two, Chapter Twelve: http://original.adul...3234&chapter=15

Part Two, Chapter Thirteen: http://original.adul...3234&chapter=16

Thank you to anyone who's read so far, and a large thank you for all the feedback, I vastly appreciate it.

These chapters mark the end of Part Two. Part Three (final part) will begin in a month's time.

Yay! I'll have to start reading this one. I'm not familiar with the fandom, but I'll fix that!

[Guest Robin_Mask]

Part Three, Chapter One: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103234&chapter=17

I'm really glad that you're willing to read my story, Silkyselkie, and thank you for your review, too. I ought to point out that the story is an original novel though, it's not based off any fandom

[Guest Robin_Mask]

There are four more chapters up: Part Three, Chapters 2, 3, 4, and 5

I will edit in links later, I am having trouble with the new forum format. Until then please hit one of the links previously given and go to the appropriate chapters through the chapter list, thank you

[RogueMudblood]

Robin_Mask, two way to do links in the new format:

1) type the text, highlight it, add link by clicking on the icon.

2) [ url = " http:// original.adult-fanfiction.org/ story.php?no=600103234 &chapter=18 " ]Part 3, Chapter 2[ / url ] - just take out spaces

Part 3, Chapter 2

Part 3, Chapter 3

Part 3, Chapter 4

Part 3, Chapter 5

hope that helps!

[Guest Robin_Mask]

Robin_Mask, two way to do links in the new format:

1) type the text, highlight it, add link by clicking on the icon.

2) [ url = " http:// original.adult-fanfiction.org/ story.php?no=600103234 &chapter=18 " ]Part 3, Chapter 2[ / url ] - just take out spaces

Thank you so much, RogueMudblood!

It seems that I've finally gotten it to work, so I can't thank you enough!

Final Chapters:

Part Three, Chapter Six

Part Three, Chapter Seven

Part Three, Chapter Eight

Edited December 9, 2011 by Robin_Mask