RogueMudblood Posted March 22, 2011 Report Posted March 22, 2011 (edited) profile board orismoris 2008-02-14 id # 3000028729 One after another, a never ending, pile of crap that are called stories. What are you a thirteen year old? Your writing sucks no use beating around the bush. All your stories need more than just a spell-check. They need to be reevaluated I mean all of them. Another flaw you have. You keep using the same words over and over again, use different synonyms of a word. Because it seems like you keep repeating yourself throughout many of your fics. Refer to a Thesaurus you idiot that's what they were created for. Flesh out a better plot and reread your work don't post crap that you deem in your mind as good. Because in reality it's far from it. Good Day Orisius cleanup same review left here RID 3000028730 Edited March 23, 2011 by RogueMudblood
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