My first AFF posted fic Naruto

[SirGeneralSir]

So its a slight AU of Naruto but is still some what close to cannon.

story takes place some weeks after the invasion of Pain, Naruto has suddenly started to change, some thing is up as he is not acting like his normal self and no one knows why.

its just the first chapter so not all tags will apply at the moment

Abuse, AFFO, Anthro, Bi, D/s, MCD, OC, Other, Preg, TF, Tort, Violence, WIP.

if you read it please i ask that you review it, please be respectful while still being a critic

http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103481

[marley_station]

So its a slight AU of Naruto but is still some what close to cannon.

story takes place some weeks after the invasion of Pain, Naruto has suddenly started to change, some thing is up as he is not acting like his normal self and no one knows why.

its just the first chapter so not all tags will apply at the moment

Abuse, AFFO, Anthro, Bi, D/s, MCD, OC, Other, Preg, TF, Tort, Violence, WIP.

if you read it please i ask that you review it, please be respectful while still being a critic

http://naruto.adultf...hp?no=600103481

A "slight AU of Naruto but is still some what close to cannon" is correctly referred to as Alternate Reality, or AR.

And for the record, cannon = a mounted gun for firing heavy projectiles; a gun, howitzer,or mortar; canon = any officially recognized set of sacred books (such as, in this case, the Naruto manga series).

Therefore, your fic represents AR.

If you need further clarification, please refer to this.

[SirGeneralSir]

well ether way, AU or AR.

im still new the the entire whats what and every thing, hence my first posted fic.

....... you didnt happen to read it did you?

[SirGeneralSir]

yes im sure some of you may think this, but im not trying to be an attention hog or desperate for any.

BUT, if any one that did read my story, i would really really like to know what you think of it.

should i keep going, do you even like the story, im working on the 2nd chapter now so some kind of feedback would really help me out alot.

was it too short?

was it too polite? *not enough cursing*

was it too violent? *ha is there such a thing?*

was there not enough violence? *i could see that*

please please pritty please ........... yeah i sound desperate dont i? .... and my spelling sucks too i know.