TheLadyMiya Posted February 26, 2011 Report Posted February 26, 2011 Hello! Thank you so much for your reviews! Here are the replies for the prologue! Body of review from Ms Velvela follows: I am really liking where you're going with this, no doubt about that! What is more, it is clearly seen that you have done some background research concerning fairies...gives it a certain feel to the tale! Those creatures might not kill but they play mercilessly - which makes them even more dangerous in that aspect. Thinking back on all folklore texts I've read, I fear that I might already have an inkling what price Morgana has in mind...a natural result of Hermione's and Voldemort's night together...their child? I might be wrong, however. Looking forward to your update! Reply: Haha, I'm glad you find it interesting! Actually, I didn't have to do too much background research just now *blush* I've read so much about fairies in my days I just had to print it down. Your inkling is quite right, as you'll see in the very beginning of Chapter 1 so yay you! You were the only one to guess that! Hopefully I'll get Chapter 1 back from my beta later today or tomorrow so I'll update right after that! Thanks for reviewing! Body of review from Addictive_Writer follows: I like how this story is starting. I want more because I LOVE your writing Reply: Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying the beginning of the story and my writings. More will come soon! Body of review from iheartskittles follows: I am so excited that you are writing a new story! I love all your stories. This sounds like it's going to be a very interesting one. I wonder what the consequences of their little tryst is going to be? Hmmm...can't wait to see where you take us! Reply: Yes, sorry it took me so long to start writing a new one. I had other projects I've been working on, but I just couldn't keep away from Hermione/Voldemort anylonger! Haha, and you'll see the consequence of their little tryst in the beginning of Chapter 1! Which will be out shortly. Thanks for reviewing!
TheLadyMiya Posted March 4, 2011 Author Report Posted March 4, 2011 Reply to all reviews for Chapter 1 sarahdaye9: Oh my! 'Marcus' as her professor- I am very interested in seeing where that goes! I also like that she wants to have an abortion first. I mean, I like that you wrote something that seems more realistic (in my mind) for Hermione rather than not writing it because some people don't like abortion. I also like the whole dynamic with her parents taking care of the baby and Hermione not bonding with her so much. Again, it seems like something Hermione would do, being so driven (although I have to say there are lots of OOC stories I like as well- I'm not a stickler for people acting exactly the way they did in the books). Keep up the great work!!! Reply: Haha, yes, "Marcus" is a professor! You'll read more about that in the newest chapter! I'm glad you found Hermione's feelings for a child. I found it more realistic too. As well as with letting her parents take care of the baby. If it had happened to me, I would probably run to Mum as well. Oh, well. Glad you liked the chapter! iheartskittles: Dun Dun Dun! How is he going to react? And wow, Hermione is a horrible mother! She doesn't notice that her kid hasn't said a work in 3 years? That is really bad, lol. Can't wait for the next chapter! Reply: You'll see how Voldy reacts in the chapter which have now been uploaded! However, I'm not sure if you can call Hermione a horrible mother per se. As her mother said, she just needs to try it by herself and not leave it up to her parents. However, she is very uncertain with herself and uncomfortable. Hopefully that will change with time and practice Thanks for reviewing Mari: I've enjoyed so many of your stories and am quite looking forward to this adventure. I cant wait to see how Voldy takes meeting his heir who I assume he knew nothing about. Your stories were the first HG/LV I read and remain the bar I set others against. Thank you for sharing and I eagerly await the next installment! Reply: I'm glad you are enjoying my stories! You'll get to see Voldies reaction to meeting his daughter in the chapter which have now been uploaded, hope you enjoy it Oh, and I feel honoured by your words! Thanks! jazzflame: Please update! Thanks! :) Reply: I've updated now! Hope you like it!
Guest Lady Miya Posted March 19, 2011 Report Posted March 19, 2011 What the hell? Where did all my replies for chapter 2 go?! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Annoying. And sorry I didn't see it and answered them again... will do it now. Reply for chapter 2: iheartskittles: I'm glad you are enjoying Voldemort's reasoning, he he is very fun writing And I do hope you won't find Hermione too whiny in the next chapters. I like her strong as well, but right now, she is still awfully uncomfortable and confused over everything... but that won't be the case forever! SarahLuvsZombehs: Maha, I won't tell you about the fairies right now... however, how interesting would a story be if everyone was being nice all the time? Glad you enjoy Althea, I've had some problem writing her. I don't want her to become too Mary-sueish, but I find it quite hard to write original female characters for some reason... So I don't know why I continue to do it Or well, I do... there aren't a lot of interesting females in the HP-world except Hermione and maybe McGonagall and Bella. Oh, well. Glad you enjoy the story so far! QueenRuby: Haha, yes, daddy-Voldemort is always so much fun to write. You never know what he can come up with! And now, the answer to the review I got on chapter 3! SarahLuvsZombehs: Actually, I think Tom is a bit more interesting to get to know Hermione than he wants to admit You'll see more about it in chapter 4 which I hope will be uploaded later today or tomorrow And I'm glad you still enjoy Althea She and Tom will be talking more in the next chapter Thank you so much for reviewing!
TheLadyMiya Posted March 25, 2011 Author Report Posted March 25, 2011 Review Reply to chapter 4 iheartskittles: Haha, I like writing Voldemort the most I think He is so fun with his reasoning! I'm glad you like reading it as well And yes... who could that shadow snake be? You'll find out in a later chapter! Thanks for reviewing. SarahLuvsZombehs: Maha, and I won't tell you whether you are right or not, you'll just have to wait and seeeee I'm glad you enjoy Althea, though. I've been adding a lot more about her in the next chapter so I hope you'll enjoy that as well. And yes, the Dark Lord and his many, long titles. The-Man-With-Too-Much-Spare-Time, we should call him Hopefully, he doesn't see this and have us tortured... hm... what is that peculiar red light coming my waaaaAAAAAAAAAAH! Haha, thanks for reviewing! Mari: Thank you so much for your compliments! I'm glad you enjoy the way I write Voldemort, I find it very funny as well And I think you are quite right in your belief that ones he is invested, he can be quite protective But you'll see how that unfolds in later chapter. And the same goes for what will happen with Hermione and Voldemort, mohahaha! I have quite many things in plan for those two... hihi. Thank you for reviewing!
Guest Lady Miya Posted March 28, 2011 Report Posted March 28, 2011 Review reply to iheartskittles for chapter 5 Oh I hope we get a Volemort POV next! I can't wait to see if Althea asks him about Voldemort since she had to of heard them talking about him. I also really want to know what was going through his head when he "met" Harry Potter. That was awesome!I'm glad that she and Ron seemed to have buried the hatchet. It's definitely weird to think of the Golden Trio being so distant with one another. I mean, they all risked their lives for each other. That's got to mean something, right? I wonder what the deal was with Mrs. Weasley. And it seems like Harry is suspicious of Voldemort being Althea's father. I mean, the timing is pretty coincidental. Thanks for the update! I can already now say that your wish will be granted Chapter six will begin with Voldemort's POV. To what he and Althea will talk about, you'll just have to wait and see! I think he was laughing evilly on the inside at the meeting with Harry. Yes, the Golden Trio have been so very close, but I just felt like it wouldn't be too strange if they drifted apart. Especially Hermione and Ron. I'll never know what she sees in him... but I guess the whole "saving each others lives again and again" has something to do with it. But yes, now they are somewhat friends again. Haha, well, I just felt that since Mrs Weasley have been quite cold to Hermione before, like in the forth book after everything Rita Skeeter said, she would take a bit time to warm up to Hermione after she had disappeared from all of them. I guess Ron have said some mean things about her at home... Oh, well, thank you so much for reading and reviewing New chapter should be up by the end of the week!
TheLadyMiya Posted April 6, 2011 Author Report Posted April 6, 2011 Hello! Here are the review reply for chapter 6! iheartskittles She's going to try to stay away from him? Oh good luck with that, honey. The man just decided he wants to have regular interludes...you aren't getting away from him that easily. I don't see how she thinks she could stay away from him when he is her neighbor, either. This should definitely be interesting. And that had to be some hot smexing if they literally set the place on fire! No, he is definitely not going to let her go any time soon.I'm glad that Hermione is discovering the motherly instincts that were previously evading her. Maybe with her attention focused more on Althea she'll be able to start speaking English and communicating better. I hope so, I feel so sad for Althea. It's got to be lonely to only have a weird shadow snake and undercover Dark Lord to talk to. Thanks for the udpate! Haha, yes, Hermione will need all the luck and skill in the world if she is going to stay away from him, and something tells me she doesn't have that I hope you will find the next chapter... interesting. I know I do. I'm glad you enjoyed the smexing. I had a very fun time writing it. I hadn't planned for it to begin this early (or... well, from my point of view, it was early) in the fic, but then they were just so... horny so they had to get some steam off. And they sure did. Yes, I think a lot of people are relieved that Hermione has finally found her mother instincts, Hermione included. And I think it's safe to say that Althea's English will pick up more quickly now, even if she will continue to speak Parsel now and again. Yes, I can imagine Althea being quite a lonely child... oh, well, having a undercover Dark Lord isn't all that bad either, though! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Mari Another great chapter. I am blown away by how hot and spontaneous all the smexy times were. I still stand by the fact old Voldy is gonna kick some serious ass when he finds out someone is messing with his little girl. I think as much as you have made me love this ship (and really, it was a BIIIIG stretch to jump on board and now I'm just loving it), seeing him as a father figure and also his snide comments about Harry are just priceless. Wonderful update, thank you for sharing with us, always a treat to read. I'm glad you enjoyed the smexy! And oooh, yes, I can imagine that Voldemort will be very, very pissed off. But we'll see what happens in the future with that, mohahaha. He is very enjoying to write as a father. All... protective of his things. Tihi. I'm also glad to have lured you on-board this ship, now when you are here, I hope you'll enjoy it because you will never get off! MOHAHAHAHAHA! Er, sorry... please don't run away. I have big plans to update again this weekend so stay tuned Thanks for reviewing! SarahLuvsZombehs Update again woman! No really though! Voldemort had good self control, but Hermione's anger is understandable, she was scared. xD Good to see she finally sees herself as a mom because clearly she cares about her daughter, she just never realized how much. That shadow thing freaks me out, is it the Fae I wonder? probably. :[ Cannot wait for the next update! Good work, once again! xoxo Rei Yes, Hermione was indeed both angry and scared. And she does cares, I think she has just been very afraid to fail, so she haven't really dared to open up until now. Hm... don't tell you too much about the shadow thing, but you can be sure it will come up again in due time I'm glad you are enjoying the story so much, and I will update again, probably this weekend so stay tuned! Thanks for reviewing.
TheLadyMiya Posted April 19, 2011 Author Report Posted April 19, 2011 Hello everyone! Here are the replies for chapter 7! SarahLuvsZombehs: Yay!No girl wants a guy who holds back from her, even if it is because he wants to be the 'gentleman'. I wonder if he saw into her mind before he pulled that stunt or if it was all just anger? Ah well, either way he has given Hermione something to think about, 'Passionate' indeed. *bwahaha* I love it though Nooo, they don't want a guy like that But he was just pulling the stunt out of anger. He hasn't been inside her mind... yet I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter as much! Thanks for reading and reviewing iheartskittles: Ha! So the reason she wasn't that into him was because he supressed too many of his Dark Lordish tendencies! Oh the irony! I have a feeling she's just unleashed the beast. She better hold on tight, cause I have a feeling things are about to get crazy.I loved his conversation with Althea about Hermione's possible boyfriends. Voldy told Althea he'd terminate anyone who Hermione was interested in and Althea saying, "Good." That was awesome! She definitely got a lot of her Daddy in her. I wonder how long it will take for Althea to let her father's identity slip. Can't wait. I also loved Hermione bringing up what an asset Snape was against the Dark Lord. Mwahahaha! I hope she remembers that conversation when she finds out his true identity. And he said he'd never join the Death Eaters...That's technically true, I guess. He'd never join them, he'd rule them. There is a distinct difference. Thanks for the update; I loved the chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next! Haha, I'm glad you are enjoying the irony. I had a very fun time writing it. Mehehe... and yes, pretty crazy indeed. But more on that later And yes, I always picture Althea being quite similar to Voldemort in some ways... but I think she is a little less... homicidal But I have a feeling they will be quite good friends in the long run. Hihi. Haha, yes, Hermione will have a lot of reflecting to do ones she finds out who he really is. A lot of things will have a whole new meaning... mehe. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I hope I'll be able to update later tonight or tomorrow QueenRuby: LOVE!! The story. Though I still want to read a story where Voldamort had to change nappies. Though I know you have hims with a new face in this story the thought pops in my head. How dose one wrinkle ones nose if one has no nose? Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying the story so much HAHA! Now you got the picture of snake-Voldy changing nappies. Hm... I think he would just frown instead actually. And make a grimace with that no-lip mouth XD tee hee. And you never know what the future have in store for Voldemort Thanks for reviewing! MrsPrince: I love the story and how you ended ch. 7! Please update!!! Haha, thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying the story, and I'll update quite soon, I think. If not tonight, then tomorrow Sludgeycore: This story is great! I especially liked the most recent chapter; Hermione's character seems especially on spot. The way she notices that Voldemort is holding back his personality is incredibly realistic. I was a little reluctant to read a story about Hermione being a (at the time) single mom, but the way you're taking this store is remarkable. I hope you update soon. I'm glad you like the story so much! I do try to be true to the characters, but sometimes I do stray away... but I'm glad you find it realistic. And now she isn't really single anymore But you'll find out more in the coming chapter, which should be up soon enough! Thanks for reviewing.
TheLadyMiya Posted April 27, 2011 Author Report Posted April 27, 2011 Hello, here are the review reply for chapter 8, even if it comes a bit late.... will hopefully manage to answer to the reviews for chapter 9 later today! SarahLuvsZombehs: I just wrote you a super long review, then accidentally clicked a link and lost it. . . xDLet's try this one more time. Hope you like them long. > I'm glad Hermione is starting to learn a little bit more about how manipulative Tom, excuse me, Marcus can be (even though we've pretty much already known what he is up to. Like a new form of Slughorn my goodness). I also feel a little bad for her that the girls are disliking her because she has a past with Draco, but at least she made a new friend. Also because all those female students making googly eyes at 'her man'. (Ok so they aren't technically together but she obviously feels highly attracted to him and he seems to only be sexually attracted to her. I wonder how those girls would take it if they knew? Jealousy can be a dangerous emotion). As for Draco I want to know so bad what he is doing there. If he isn't a student why was he there and is he still a bigoted jerk or does he realize Pureblood doesn't mean you're better? Also Hermione's hatred of him is perfectly understandable, and I doubt they could ever be friends unless he somehow shows regret and apologizes. Althea, I swear, she just gets cuter and cuter. Hermione Granger (even in the books) had to of been pretty if not beautiful, if you think about it. The reaction at the ball(Which proves she could look drop-dead gorgeous if she fixed her hair and put on a little make-up), Cormac (who is so self-absorbed and narcissistic would not go to a party with an ugly girl), Krum (Famous, super quidditch star who could of had anyone) and Ronald all had a thing for her. Tom Riddle was notoriously good looking. So therefore chances are Althea is going to be a beauty. And then her parents are both like, super geniuses and extremely powerful magic-wise. This leads me to believe she will most likely inherit her parents intelligence. Therefore my deduction is any child born from Tom and Hermione would most likely be talented (magic wise), intelligent and beautiful like her parents. (Ok Handsome in Tom's case. Not even I dare call Voldemort beautiful in fear of a quick Avada being sent my way). And I think you're playing her out exactly as she should be. (I also think you're developing her nicely without turning her into a Mary Sue). Oh, I hate when I've written a review and it disappears for some reason. I has happened to be several times so these days I make sure I've copied it now and again But yes, I do like them long! So thank you, and I'm sorry I didn't get around to respond to the chapter earlier. It will be quite some time before the other girls in the class finds out about them... and what happens then, you'll find out then But first, a lot of other things will happen so... among other things, you will find out what Draco's deal is first, so I hope you'll enjoy that little story! Yes, I've always pictured Hermione as beautiful. But not one of those big boobs, long leg porn-starts-people like I've read in some fics before... and Tom, even as Marcus is very beautiful (or handsome... ) as well so yes, I think Althea will be very pretty. And powerful. And intelligent I also really hope I'll be able to keep her from becoming Mary Sue, I know I have a problem with original female characters so therefore I'm always very careful not to give them too much meaning in a fic. Ugh, I still remember a horrible Swedish fic I wrote when I was in the beginning of my teens which was about Voldemort's daughter and she was so Mary Sue I can't believe I actually thought it was funny to write at one time... but oh, well. Hopefully, I won't make that mistake again. Thank you so much for reading and giving a nice long review! iheartskittles: Oh, how wonderful for Draco to be in Voldemort's classroom. I wonder how the Dark Lord feels about having a traitor in his presence. I loved it when Hermione said, "I got back. Aren't you in prison?" Hahaha! Would love to see the look on the ferret's face when she came back with that. So Marcus believes he is able to be strictly professional while in class and treat her like she was any other sudent. I wonder if that would be the case if he saw on of his male students make moves on Hermione. I would love to see something like that. Especially from his POV. I think Hermione is right about seeing him soon. We all know how they both get turned on by learning and knowledge. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the update! Haha yes, Draco have no idea who his teacher is! And the Dark Lord does have his plans... but I won't reveal them just yet And yes, Marcus does think he can be professional... you'll see how well that goes later on. Haha, and I won't tell you about whether someone hits on Hermione or not... but I think you'll like something that is in chapter 15, 16 or something like that And yes, as you could see, she met him again in chapter nine! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
TheLadyMiya Posted April 30, 2011 Author Report Posted April 30, 2011 Hello there! Here are the review reply for chapter 9! SarahLuvsZombehs: HELL FUCKING YES!!!Not only did I get to read a new chapter but I got two, see it, TWO Lemons! <br /> *swoons* I freakin' love you. The whole power exchange thing makes sense, since we use a lot of energy to have sex and our emotions can be so wrapped up in it. Also, he is such a manipulative bastard. I love it. And I love him. :3 I kept imagining Althea saying Scank you since she couldn't say the th sound. . . xD I think it is time for me to take my Harry Potter addiction to a whole new level and start talking with a hiss. :3 Haha, yes, lots of lemons to go around And there will be more of that in future chapters as well, just wait and see! After all, Voldemort will want more of those powers... mohahahaha! Yes, Althea can be quite cute sometimes Haha, well, if you get happier by speaking with a hiss, then be my guest People have do weirder things with their addictions XD Thanks for reading and reviewing! iheartskittles: Thanks for the update! The smut was smut-tastic! I love how they both seem to get worked up over intellectual discussions. They are such nerds. I wonder what's the deal with Hermione entering his body. There's got to be some fairy trickery going on causing that, yeah? Also, I wonder if there is going to be some kind of side effect of the "stealing" of their sex magic. Perhaps it will bind him to her even more irrevocably than he already is? I'm very interested to see what comes of that. I would also love to see either someone hit on Hermione or threaten her in front of Marcus to see his reaction. I think that'd be quite interesting, especially if the person is a death eater. I really really love this story, and think about it way to much! Thanks! I'm very glad you like the smut! And well, intellectual discussions are hot Nerds have better sex, moahahhahah! And actually, the fairies have nothing to do with Hermione being able to enter his body... but you'll find out more about that later Haha, of course someone will be stupid enough to hit on Hermione... eventually. But that will be a later happening and I hope you'll like the story until then! Than you so much for reading and reviewing!
TheLadyMiya Posted May 10, 2011 Author Report Posted May 10, 2011 Oh, wow, the reviews really increased with the last chapter. Thank you all very much for taking your time to tell me what you think about the story! I really appreciate it! Here are the review reply for chapter 10: jaspersluv1863: OMG! She knows! She knows! Does that Shadow friend of Althea's have something to do with the fairies in the beginning of the story? Can't wait for your next update! Indeed she does. I think it's safe to say that things will be quite interesting from now on. Ooooh, good question about the shadow friend and the fairies. Won't answer you now, but I think you will be able to figure out a thing or two in the next chapter! Sludgeycore: You're evil. Evil evil evil. Please update right away That, I am. However, I need to give my betas time to work on the next chapter, so I can't update right away. But the chapter should be up soon, like, tomorrow. Hope you'll like it! iheartskittles: Ah! I knew as soon as he said "Duelling" that either Hermione was going to figure him out or I was going to have to boycott this story. No way in hell does Hermione Granger see the man duel and not know it's him, and that's not even considering the fact that her parsel speaking daughter asked her what Voldemort has to do with Marcus. Mwahahaha! I'd be surprised if Draco didn't figure it out as well. Voldemort teaching Transfiguration is one thing. Voldemort with his wand out ready to duel is another thing entirely.But why oh why wouldn't Hermione grab Althea and bolt?!? You can get new clothes, honey! My ass would have grabbed my daughter and then apparated to Hogsmeade where I would have run into Honeydukes to use the secret passage into Hogwarts! Then I would have asked the RoR to give me a room where I could hide that would not be able to be found by Tom Marvolo Riddle, Lord Voldemort, The Dark Lord or Marcus Foster. Then I would have sent a patronus to Harry, Kingsley and McGonnagal asking them to meet her in the RoR with a pensieve, stat! But hey, that's jut me. I mean, she HAS to understand that if he got his hands on her he would probably either kill her or obliviate her. There is no way in HELL he'd let her go. Ever. He's the single most possessive person on the planet. As far as he is concerned, she is his. End of. I wonder if he'll try to convince her she's gone completely mental. I can hear it now, "He-who-mus-not-be-named? Really, Hermione? Are you listening to yourself?" Then he will spout off all the reason she did when she tried to deny what her eyes were telling her. Arg! I can't wait!! Please don't leave us hanging on this cliff for too long!! Thanks for the update...and for Hermione sending Voldemort flying! I got so caught up in the big reveal that I forgot to mention the awesomeness of that part of the chapter! Then I'm very glad that my plan from the beginning was Hermione finding out while watching Voldemort duel. Unfortunately, Draco was too thick to figure it out. Or he was snogging his girlfriend... or nursing his pride after being struck down. I need Draco to not be aware of who he is, otherwise he won't do the things I want him to do! Mohahaha. Actually, my beta asked the same thing as for why Hermione didn't just grab Althea and run. And well, Hermione was about to run, but other than the fact that I didn't want her to run (and since it is me who is writing, I do have a say in those things, tee hee), I think that Hermione would have been out of that apartment if she had been given five more minutes. And it has been over four years since she was last at Hogwarts, so I don't think RoR would pop directly into her mind, she was probably thinking about some other place. But she is a rather practical girl and knows that if she leaves, Voldemort will come looking and so she will need a place to hide and thus, she will need some things to be able to suffice for a while, manly for Althea. She is not a rich girl by far, only surviving on a scholarship. However, I do think she would have contacted Harry the moment she was out of the apartment, but Voldemort was just too fast for that And for how Voldemort will react... mehe, that you'll just have to wait and see! However, I think it will be very, very difficult for him to convince Hermione she is wrong. But oh, well, the next chapter should be up tomorrow or the day after that. I hope. If my betas have had time to work on it by then. And you are welcome by the flying. That was so much fun writing! Jade: Ack! Cliffhanger. I hate those so here's cookies for you muses. I hope you update soon as this is a wonderful story. Haha, yes, I usually don't like cliffhangers either, but sometimes they are just too good to pass up. But the next chapter should be up shortly so I hope you'll like it! My muses is very happy for the cookies, btw. QueenRuby: Noooo!!! That was so mean! Leaving us hanging like that. So why dosen't Hermione ever call for back up from her freinds in this situation? update soon please! Yes, I am mean sometimes, mohahahahaha! And yes, that's a good question. Maybe she doesn't want them to risk getting hurt or maybe she is just used on doing things on her own? I'm not sure, but I don't think it helped her ability to count on her friends in need when they hardly saw each other for four years time... but oh, well. Now she is alone with him at least. Mohahahaha! SarahLuvsZombehs: HOLY MOTHER OF CHEESESTICKS, BATMAN!!Wow. What a cliffy. I really distrust/don't like the shadow creature, it needs to stay away from Althea! Poor Voldemort, his secrets out, What to do? HERMIONE, YOU IDIOT!! You don't just say to Voldemort when he is trying to keep his identity a secret "Stay away from me, Voldy!" That's like simply trying to walk into Mordor! *facepalm* Voldemort got shot out a window *giggle* but he made Hermione and Althea cry! *Rage* Anyway. . . Update soon *airkiss* Mohahahahaah! Yes, I'm evil that way. And yes, that shadow creature seems a bit spooky, mehehe... you'll find out more later. Haha, yes, I think that was Hermione's reckless Gryffindor-side showing. You do weird things when you are scared. Haha, and I'm so glad you remember the window-scene. Not that it's very important, but oh, well. I found it very funny to write. I mean, of course you throw the man who has made your daughter cry out the window. I know I would! I'm hoping on updating tomorrow or something like that. We'll see how much time my betas have to work on it! raven: omggggg you have to update sooon!! im in love with all of your stories I'll update soon I hope. Maybe tomorrow, if my betas have the time to finish going through chapter 11! I'm glad you are enjoying my stories Thanks for reading and reviewing! mrequecky: oh wow, absolutely loooved! >D Haha, thank you! I'm always happy when my stories are being enjoyed by someone other than me!
TheLadyMiya Posted May 19, 2011 Author Report Posted May 19, 2011 Thank you all for your wonderful reviews! Here are the responses for the reviews of chapter 11. jaspersluv1863: That was so much better than what he could have actually done to her. I was holding my breath the entire time thinking he was going to do something so horrible to her! It was funny how in the beginning he tried to reason and pretend he didn't know why she was calling him Voldemort. Classic! Great chapter. Hope you update soon. Haha, well, that's the beauty (or something) with Voldemort, you never know what to expect. He could do something horrible, but then he could also... do something else, mehehehehe. And you know, sneaky Slytherin and all that. Can't let go of his secrets that easily. Glad you like the chapter and I'll update as soon as my betas are finished with their RL and have time to beta iheartskittles: Mwahahaha! I knew he'd try to make her think she's crazy! He is a Slythrin after all! I wonder how long Hermione will be able to hold out not sleeping with him. My bet is not very long. Not that I can blame her. I wonder if he would have been able to follow through with torturing Althea. I know Hermione would never allow it, but I still wonder what, if anything, he would feel. I mean, he is already worried about boys. That line was awesome..."Boys will stand in line...to die." Mwahaha!Thanks for the udpate! Haha indeed he is. And I don't think it's about how long Hermione will be able to hold out, but how long he will let her stay away... and since he is Voldemort, I'm thinking: not that long. And well, I think Voldemort could go through with his threat. He is Voldemort after all. But what he feels about it, that's another story... which I'll tell in a later chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing! SarahLuvsZombehs: So I was browsing my favorite FanFiction.net authors (One of which was you) just to see if there were any new interesting stories out (Mostly Tomione/Voldmione) and I noticed you updated Shared Flame on it! Imagine my shock and happiness as I quickly rushed over to AdultFanFiction.net to read the unedited version! (At least I assume you edit the FF.net version since they have a vendetta against sex scenes. The bastards). Haha, great timing for me then! And actually, I didn't censor chapter 11 since I felt it would be hard to follow if I removed that scene. But chapter 12 will be censored so make sure you read it on AFF! I think FF would die of shock if they knew what I've planned for Hermione... mohahahahhah! Oh ho ho ho ho. What a devious, sneaky bastard! How I love him. I simply just love his manipulativeness!(Which believe it or not manipulativeness is not considered a real word! Well balderdash says I! Anything can be a word as long as a person creates it! That is, after all, how all words started! A person created them!) Exactly, words are created. Take part in the process And I of course agree with you. He is so much fun to write. Now that I have gotten my idolization of Voldemort/Tom/Marcus out of the way I can really get down to business. --Yeah, she started to get that feeling as well. However, knowledge was power, and as long as she was stuck with him in this tub, she thought she should try to learn as much as possible. -Yes but knowledge corrupts, so watch how far you're willing to go Hermy. Besides you're one lucky girl, having the Dark Lord all to yourself! He's even the father of your daughter. Plus there is lots of great sex involved. What's not to love!? So maybe you shouldn't watch out and just let yourself get corrupted. . . ;] Oh, but Hermione is such a nice girl, and have always been on the just side and are friends with Harry Potter so of course she CAN'T become corrupted Oh, the sweet lies you tell yourself when you don't want to see that you are getting corrupted... and in Hermione's case, what is not to love, indeed! Just stay there and keep the Dark Lord entertained, haha. --When she grew up, she would no doubt be as beautiful as Hermione. The boys would stand in line to … get killed.-I love it. Protective Father Voldemort is so adorable. 'Get Killed' Indeed! Hehe, yes! Another reader expressed her wish to see a one-short spin off on what will happen when Althea brings home a boyfriend for the first time. I'm feeling very inclined to write it... but we shall see. First I need to finish this monster of a fic! --Voldemort’s expression hardened. Salazar, he did not look forward to Althea growing up. If she became half as stubborn as either him or Hermione, she would be a handful.-I can see it now. Voldemort may be a bad-ass but I have a feeling somewhere along the line he might just get a teensy bit soft towards his daughter (and even her mother). And yes with two such intelligent/stubborn parents she will most likely be a devious little handful. But let's remember she is also her mother's daughter, so she'll probably be just as loving and brave as she is sneaky and manipulative. . . Indeed! And I think Althea is getting and will get a lot of influences from her mother. So never forget that! And I do think Althea is able to feel empathy and all those sort of things Voldemort can't. Thus, she shouldn't turn out as bad as him... but we shall see. Haven't written that yet That about covers it! I really loved this chapter, I think the relationship can finally go somewhere AND we also have a little bit more insight to the creepy shadow things. I have a feeling they're going to either just try to make things hard for Voldemort, use Althea for their own gain or maybe just maybe they're trying to save Voldemort by making him fall in love.While they seem disturbing and scary and sometimes malicious they also seem like they have a motive, I just haven't worked out what it is yet. (Wouldn't it just be like a mischievous fairy to try and make Hermione/Voldemort fall in love by endangering their daughter/telling Hermione exactly who he is through Althea?) Haha, I shan't say a thing about what or if the shadow thing is up to something! But I think it's safe to say that this isn't the last time you'll see it. So until you do, I'll zip my lips. Leave it to me to try and wrap up a review and then just go on blabbing some more. xD Anyway update soon!!! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! I happen to like rambling so I don't mind at all! Thank you for reviewing and I'll update the minute my betas are done with the fic! Kyliehawks: Love this story, great piece of writing!Look forward to reading more of your work x x x I'm glad you think so and happy that you enjoy the story! If you haven't read my other work, you can find them on my profile here on AFF. Thanks for reviewing! Atlantean_Diva (who seem to have reviewed more than chapter 11, and I haven't copied them all here, but I hope that's okay): I'm glad you are enjoying the fic so much! Hopefully you'll get an update soon enough. Don't want to leave you in the Darmione section for too long! Hee hee. I hope the next chapter will be up soon, but it seems like my betas have got a heavy case of RL going on so they haven't had time to beta yet. But oh, well. I hope they won't take too long! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
TheLadyMiya Posted June 3, 2011 Author Report Posted June 3, 2011 Review responses to chapter 12! iheartskittles: Awesome chapter! Voldemort is so deliciously domineering! Although I don't blame Hermione for being disturbed when he told her his wand killed 38 people and then he used it to force her to orgasm. That would certainly be a mind fuck.<br /><br /> I also find it very interesting that it's Hermione that is unable to share the feelings of Voldemort, and not the other way around. Not because of who he is, but because she just isn't capable of having those feelings. It is a very interesting twist that you don't see in Tomione fanfiction. Ever. Very clever.<br /> The girl should count her blessings, though. I mean, instead of a bout of Cruciatus she got chocolate sauce and an orgasm. I'd say it's a much better deal. Her realization that she threw Voldemort out a window was awesome! <br /> Yes, Voldemort is rather dominating and all. Mohahahaha, Hermione is really in for a treat! And well, I thought it was an interesting spin too, so I'm glad you like it! But we'll see what that pans out to later in the story! The whole magical diarrhea concept was very interesting. If anyone could experience it so violently it would definitely be the child of Voldemort and Hermione. I'm very interested to see what kind of mischief Morgana brings into the mix.<br /><br /> Thanks for the update! And thanks to Nerys and Serpent in Red for their awesome beta-ing! We appreciate you fitting it in when you've got other, more important RL issues to deal with. Thanks! Yeah, I just found it funny to write diarrhoea in a story. Mehehehe... I'm childish that way! And well, she is doomed to be a very powerful child! And you'll see what Morgana is up to (or well, some of it) in the next chapter! Which is being almost betaing... I'm just changing things in the last minute and give Nerys and Serpent In Red more to do. They really are awesome! Thanks for reviewing! mrequecky: oh wow, awesome update!!! I wonder what Morgana has got to say to Voldi I'm glad you like it! And you'll find out exactly what Morgana has to say in the next chapter, which should be up now this weekend! Atlantean_Diva: I can't believe I actually love a Tom and Hermione story, but I do. This is story is soooo good. I'm constantly hunting for updates. Hmm, I wonder what Morgana is going to tell them. I sort of want Hermione to feel something more than lust for him, and at the same time I don't because the man is evil.<br /><br /> Thanks for updating! I'm glad you enjoy the story! It's a lot of fun to write and... well, I really like Tom Hermione for some reason, so I'm just glad when other people do to! Luckily, you are going to find out what Morgana is going to tell them in the next chapter, and it should be up sometime this weekend. However, about what Hermione will feel for him, well, she doesn't know herself yet. You'll just have to wait and see! And you are welcome, thank you for reviewing! Malfoys Bitch: Love this! So original! Glad you like it! Thanks! SarahLuvsZombehs: OH SNAP! <br /><br /> Morgana! This is awesome, she was always one of my favorite characters in the stories of King Arthur.<br /> <br /> YES! I have a feeling some things will finally be explained to us all! <br /> Whee, Morgana has always been my favourite as well! I especially loved how Marion Zimmer Bradly(?) wrote her in The Mist of Avalon. Oh, well. My Morgana are quite far away from that version... but still. It's so much fun to play around with old myths! And yes, some things will be explained, while others won't... you'll just have to wait and see! <br />Also, I love how Voldemort is portrayed so evilly yet you still maintain a required sense of humor and of course attraction. <br /> <br /> I also love how Hermione mentions that she would have to undergo a serious character change to accept him, made me giggle because I've been saying that for a while in my "Hermione and Voldemort" rants. Yes, I write rants/essays about Voldemort. <br /> <br /> Haha, well, it just wouldn't make sense for me if Voldemort was all of a sudden all romantic and goody-two-shooy... it's the evilness that makes him interesting! And well, same goes for Hermione, I guess. Would be strange if she just accepted him. However, nothing says they can't still have lots of fun together, mohahaha! The person I have the most pity for right now is Althea. She's misunderstood, practically a new species, can barely speak English (But knows fluent Parseltongue), had Lord Freakin' Voldemort as a father, is being stalked by a shadow beast, watched by fairies, her mom and dad hate each other, she was a 'drunken mistake' (Although her mom loves her very much), 'magical diarrhea' although for the sake of my sanity I shall refer to it as 'magical vomit' and her dad is practically using her to bribe her mom too. xD<br /><br /> She is going to have one hell of a childhood and probably some emotional issues somewhere along the line. I'm gad she shares her mother's high level of empathy because it would suck to have two psychopathic maniacs team up together. (Hmm. That would actually be a cute story. . . Daddy and Daughter rule the world together. Bwahaha.)<br /> <br /> Yeah, Althea really got some tough years ahead of her. But I think she is rather tough... and even if Voldemort would never agree, he does seem to like her more than anyone else... I think their relationship is somewhat like it appears Voldemort and Nagini had when she was alive. But yes, Althea does at least she got a mother to smooch her in love and she does seem to be able to feel those emotions, unlike her father! So sorry, don't think Voldemort and Althea will turn into The Psychopathic Duo (but it really is an interesting idea for a story, meheheh). As for the idea of a one-shot of Althea bringing home her first boyfriend you should do it. Although instead of her 'bringing him home' I would have him accidentally find out. Like say he and Hermione come across Althea and her boytoy holding hands in Diagon Alley where he finds out they've been dating and Althea/Hermione kept it from him. Ohohoho. Sorry, I'm getting way ahead of myself and quite presumptuous. My excuse is it is 3am in the morning and I'm just sprouting nonsense. xD Haha, oh, yes, I do think Althea is clever enough to keep all boys she may like far away from her father. But we shall see what sorts of one-shorts the future may have in hand... still working on finishing off this story! And now when I'm finally on summer vacation, I hope I'll be able to do that! Wiiiih! Anon: this is one of my favorite stories to read on here!i always look foward to your updates, thank you so much for writing and keep up the good work :)i only wish there was more excellent tomoine fics! Yaaay! Glad you enjoy the story so much! And yes, I wish there were more Tomione as well, but alas, it seems like we are few who write it... but oh, well. I'll try to keep my stories updated so you'll have at least one chapter a week (or... well... I try to update ones a week, but these past weeks have been hectic)! Thank you all so much for reading and reviewing! Next chapter should be up this weekend!
Guest LadyMiya Posted June 21, 2011 Report Posted June 21, 2011 Review responses on chapter 13: Malfoys Bitch: loved it. Glad you did! Mari: Guh these two. I agree that the faeries arent up to any good and Hermione's logic that because they might oppose Voldemort that makes them "good for the world" is really faulty. I love seeing him get all possessive of his daughter and of course the ridiculous post discipline smexy times. I had to laugh at him giving her 10% and keeping 90% of the power for himself. Well, I don't think Hermione really believes that either, but she is just angry with Voldemort and saying things she shouldn't. But oh, well. You'll see how it develop in the next chapter! I'm glad you liked the possessiveness as well ad the smexy times. I had a fun time writing them. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Atlantean_Diva: Poor, Althea, got an eye full. *smh* I think Tom is right, in regards to Morgana wanting something else from Althea. I like that Hermione isn't a weeping willow in this story. You always manage to make Tom and Hermione different in each of your stories. Yeah, but I think she'll live, tee hee. Well, Tom is a paranoid bastard, but ones and again, he could be right. But you'll have to wait and see! I would have been annoyed too if Hermione was crying all the time. Alas, she still have some more tears to shed, but then again, she is under Voldemort's thumb, so that may not be too strange. And thank you! I try not to get stuck in a pattern. But oh, well. Thank you for reading and reviewing! SarahLuvsZombehs: For some reason I don't think I'm going to like the Morgana in this story, and I can't even explain why yet. She just seems a little odd, peculiar and untrustworthy in my opinion. . . Maybe I just need to wait to see her a bit more before I make a decision.Voldemort. . . Still being an controlling jerkface. I love it Mehehe, well, you'll just have to wait and see what you think about Morgana. She will be in the story now and again. And to no ones surprise, Voldemort will continue to be a controlling jerkface. Mihihi. Thanks for reviewing MrE-Quecky: Yay! Absolutely loooved the update Glad you did!
TheLadyMiya Posted July 12, 2011 Author Report Posted July 12, 2011 Review replies for chapter 14! Malfoys Bitch: You Tease! Of course I tease. It's one of my favourite things to do ^^ Mehehehe. SarahLuvsZombehs Oh my God. xDVoldemort WOULD find her vibrator and use it on her. That cheeky, sneaky, sexy Dark Lord. Ok Sarah, time to move on with the review. Stop picturing Voldemort naked. ONWARDS WITH THE REVIEW! He nodded. “So if anyone asks you if you want to play sex, tell them no. It’s icky. And then call for me.” Althea nodded seriously. Well, that was one less issue to worry about. He would already have to kill anyone that dared to look at his daughter; he didn’t need Althea to start searching for someone to “play sex with”. D'awww, he does care. :> Daddy Voldy Well, I just had to let Voldemort find something fun in there, when he went through all the trouble of snooping. And please, you don't have to stop picturing Voldemort naked for my sake. I do it all the time! Look, there he is... Aaah, well. Answer reviews. Hihi, I'm glad you are enjoying Daddy Voldy. He is so much fun to write. Before we know it, he will start putting spells on Althea to make all male bounce away from her if they try to touch her. Thank you for reading and reviewing! IrishPhantom: You are savage!!! I love Hermione/Voldemort and I've been going over old ones since there hasn't been any updates! Your one of my favourite authors on this! If your in contact with Nerys please tell her to update The Prisoner! Ye are absolute legends! Shared Flame is one of my faves! I've a bad feeling about them fairies! Please update again soon! =] Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying my stories to much, and Nerys is one of my favourite FF-writers as well. And don't worry, I'm poking her with a stick to get her to update The Prisoner, but sometimes, real life is such a bitch. But I'm afraid that you'll probably be reading my next chapter before you read Nerys. I'll try to update later tonight or tomorrow if the beta is done by then Thanks for reading and reviewing! silentsoliloquy82: This is a such a wonderful and original story. I love the way you have portrayed Hermione and Dark Lord; I can feel the sexual tension practically rising off of them. I adore Voldemorts who are highly seductive, witty, charming, somewhat sadistic, brilliant, and deliciously dark. You hit the nail on the head with that particular characterisation. ^_~ This is the only one of your stories I have finished, but I am in the middle of the rest of them. I have been a fan of the Voldemort(TMR)/HG ship for two years now and don't show any signs of slowing.PS- I have converted another person to this ship and I am off to convert more. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so much! Haha, I adore Voldemort too, he is so much fun to write and I'm glad you like him as well. And welcome to the Voldemort/Hermione-shipping, we are always glad to have readers here. We aren't that many... so I'm glad you have managed to convert another one to like them as well! The more, the merrier. Thank you for reading and reviewing and I hope you like my other fics as well, and the rest of this story! bamf1110: omg amazing story please finish!!!!! Hi! I'm glad you like the story so much! And don't worry, I always finishes my stories.
TheLadyMiya Posted July 29, 2011 Author Report Posted July 29, 2011 Review responses to chapter 15, thank you all for reading and reviewing! Malfoys Bitch: I don't know why but I find this line "...just so he knew he hadn’t lost himself somewhere deep inside Hermione’s cunt" hilarious! I'm glad you like it, because Voldemort will keep making jokes of Hermione's cunt. It's his favourite place in the whole world! SarahLuvsZombehs: ""Hihi, I'm glad you are enjoying Daddy Voldy. He is so much fun to write. Before we know it, he will start putting spells on Althea to make all male bounce away from her if they try to touch her.""Oh PLEASE do. "Voldemort woke up, panicking when he felt someone lying next to him." He was probably panicking thinking Bellatrix tried to sneak into his bed again. It's ok, Voldy, we won't let the scary woman near you again. Oh Voldy, what are we to do with you? Ah well, I already knew you were a sick sadistic bastard who got off on torturing people. That's why I (I mean we) love you so much. Yes, love. (And there's nothing you can do about it Mr. I-Hate-All-Things-Pertaining-To-Love). *Is now expecting Voldy to come hunt me down any second now. Haha! Of course... I wonder how many time he has awakened with her next to him. But I do think he learned how to ward her away. Hm.. perhaps that's the real reason why she is so mad, he has curicoed her so many times for disturbing him! I do hope that Voldemort didn't catch you for that comment, though... but if you are inable to review for some time, I'll understand. Tee hee. "Hermione felt like growling. Right then, Voldemort glanced up at her. For a moment, she almost thought he was smirking at her" Of course he was, Voldy likes to taunt/torture and even though you hate him he most likely knows you'll still get jealous. Not that I think he would actually do anything. . . He's too addicted to you. *bwahahaha* "“All mine, now and forever,” he whispered." *resist urge to kill Hermione.* Oh, shoot, do I have to beware for you killing Hermione as well? Nerys have already tampered with the next once and killed Hermione off, taking her place... but I edit it out! MOHAHAHAHAHAHA! "He scratched his neck. “Are you a lesbian?”"Your Subtlety, Harry, amazes me. xD Wonderful Chapter, I feel like we're starting to understand the characters a bit better, Especially poor Voldy. Ah well, Denial gets the better of most of us. Out of all the stories I'm following yours has quickly become the one I look forward to the most update wise. xoxo Rei I'm glad you are enjoying the story. And yes, Voldemort is very funny, and I hope you'll get to know him even better in the future chapters. Hopefully you'll have a new chapter soon. It's almost finished betaed! Thanks for reviewing! iheartskittles: Thanks for the update! I remember you saying earlier that she has a runin with a Death Eater around chapter 15 or 16, and with old Lucy getting out of jail...could it be him?!? Dun Dun Dun! I hope it is and that Voldemort gets him good! Can't wait! Thanks! Haha, I've been changing the chapters around a bit (added some new once in the mix and all that) so it have been moved forward. But there will be some Death Eater accounting in due time. As to whom, you'll just have to wait and see Thanks for reviewing! mrequecky: Lobed Lobe back at you! electricelephant: This story is so great, I'm really fascinated with the whole fairy plot point! It makes the whole story a bit more fun and devious Also, I am absolutely in love with how you're portraying Voldemort's character! It's so funny to see him actually caring for a little child, and especially his own at that! Keep up the good work, and write write write! I'm glad you are enjoying it! The fairy plot is going slow, but I hope you enjoy it anyway. It's very fun to write Voldemort, so I'm glad you like it as well. And well, it is his own blood, and blood seem to matter for him... with all the pureblood-propaganda he has made up during his days. And I'm writing, don't you worry about it! I'm hoping the next chapter will be up soon! Thanks for reviewing! AliceMyra Spencer: Oh wow. Voldemort seems to be developing feelings if he's claiming to not leave again. Well, some parts of his body is developing feelings at least Wow, Hermonie must have had a really lousy day to just jump into bed with a guy lol Haha, well, haven't we all? And she has also gone four years without any action...
TheLadyMiya Posted August 7, 2011 Author Report Posted August 7, 2011 Review responses for chapter 16: SarahLuvsZombehs: Before I actually review the story let me just mention that I absolutely love seeing your review replies. They make me feel loved. This chapter is a little disturbing, in a good way of course. Although I'm beginning to pity Althea and Hermione even more. Voldemort reminds me of our pet snakes we used to have. (We had like. . . 5 pet snakes at the same time). They're beautiful creatures and they might let you hold them for a while but eventually they're going to bite. It's nature. Voldemort might seem almost. . . Domestic but just like those snakes he's fully prepared to bite if he feels like it. xoxo Rei Naaaw, that's how I feel when I get a review! So of course I reply to them! Voldemort as a pet snake... yeah, he definitely is prepared to bite at a moments notice. And he does. Again, and again and again... so yeah, poor Althea and Hermione. I don't think they will feel any better after this chapter Thanks for reading and reviewing! Atlantean_Diva: Good chappie! I hope Hermione finds a way to put Tom in his place. He's to damn confident by half. I wish Hermione would have thrown him out the window for making Althea cry, who btw is so adorable. I wonder what Dumbledore would have said if Hermione had been able to confide in him. I doubt she would have told him the truth even if she'd been able to. Thanks for the update! Yeah, I think Hermione is hoping the same thing! You'll have to wait and see what happens, though. Ooh, I think Dumbledore might have died again if he heard what Hermione had done together with Voldemort But yeah, I don't think Hermione would have felt comfortable enough to tell Dumbledore everything... Thanks for reviewing! AliceMyra Spencer: This soul-mate thing is interesting. I would like somewhat of an inside into Althea's head though, the poor girl is a vital part to the story yet doesn't seem to be in it so much as her parents. I hope chapter 18 comes soon. Hm... I don't remember if I have any point of view with Althea coming up. But she isn't as important as her parents to the story right now... but in the future, we'll see! And the next chapter is already up! Hope you enjoy it! mekom: Poor Hermione. She just can't catch a break. I hope that she gets to relax a bit while Voldemort is away. I am curious how the Soul Mate bond is going to affect them, while they are apart. Thanks for updating. I love this story. Yeah, bad things just keeps happening to Hermione. But you'll see what happens when she is away from Voldemort now ^^ The next chapter is already up! Glad you like the story so much! electricelephant: Again, amazing work! I can not begin to explain how excited I was to see you updated! I practically jumped out of my chair. Anyway, I can't wait for more! Kudos to Hermione for standing her ground, we all know how scary it would be to stand up to Lord Voldemort O_O Hahaha, I will be eagerly awaiting your next chapter, as always! Glad you like the story! Yeah, I don't think many people would stand their ground against Voldemort... and I think even fewer would get away with it. Oh, well, the next chapter is up already! Hope you like it. Malfoys Bitch: Amazing chapter! Glad you like it!
TheLadyMiya Posted August 12, 2011 Author Report Posted August 12, 2011 Review replies for chapter 17: AliceMyra Spencer: Love it, enjoyed it thoroughly. Good thing to read before going to bed lol. It's awesome how jealous he gets just from knowing he's purposely making Hermione strip in front of another person as well when its his own damn fault for letting them see. Mahah, I hope you had some pleasant dreams if you read it before bed! Haha, and well, Voldemort is jealous, but at the same time he wants to see her humiliated... but he knows he will kill Peter later so who cares. Glad you liked the chapter! SarahLuvsZombehs: Hermione got off easy, although it wasn't COMPLETELY her fault. She was 100% smashed and apparently Peter looked a "tiny bit" like her Voldemort. Plus shes in huge denial about wanting to be with him.After that last paragraph I'm actually glad Voldemort's taking care of the guy. Slipping something into Hermione's drink! For shame!!! Ah, possessive Voldemort, my favorite. Also I love how you showed that they couldn't stop thinking about each other while they were apart it was, dare I say it, adorable in its own twisted way. Now I do solemnly swear that I cannot wait for chapter 19. (Well technically chapter 18. . . ) xoxo Your Self-Proclaimed Biggest Fan Reine Yes, Hermione is very much in denial about wanting Voldemort. We'll see how long she managed to stay that way, mehe. And well, no, not really Hermione's fault since she did get drugged, but still her fault for drinking at all in the first place. But oh, well. At least Voldemort made sure he paid! Yes, got to love possessive Voldemort. They are both possessive about each other, they just don't realise it yet! Hopefully, chapter 18 will be up tomorrow! iheartskittles: Holy shit! That was hot! Thanks for the quick update! You are welcome! Hopefully the next update will be just as quick. Malfoys Bitch: Wow! That was HOT! Maha, yes, I got the feeling people thought that about the chapter Glad you liked it!
TheLadyMiya Posted August 22, 2011 Author Report Posted August 22, 2011 Review replies for chapter 18! iheartskittles: Oh I can't wait until Voldemort gets his hands on Malfoy! Haha, I think Voldemort wants to get his hands on Malfoy as well Malfoys Bitch: Holy shit! I actually believed that Draco became a reformed man... this is just shocking! Dementer's are male? lol. Did not see that coming, I'm kind ashamed to admit that I found the "cock" line funny. Great chapter! Yeah, I think Draco was somehow better, but he has just had to stand up with a lot of crap lately... and no, there are no Dementors in Azkaban anymore, I thought I mentioned that earlier? Damn.. hope it didn't get edited out. There are just human guards who are evil. Atlantean_Diva: Girl you are pumping these chapters out lately. That was an excellent chapter from beginning to end. Tom is going to regret going to the auroras, and Hermione is going to regret not going home. I can't wait to see the look on Lucius' face when he discover the Dark Lord is a live and he's torturing his 'Precious.' lol Hmm...maybe this will bring Tom and Hermione closer together.Thanks for the update. Haha, yes, thankfully, my beta have been working quick! Yes, Tom is already regretting going to the Auror's, but at least he got half his plan right; everyone know about him being Althea's father! But you'll see what happens to Lucius in the next chapter that is up! Alassea Malfoy: CONTINUE!!! This is one of the best HG/LV stories I've read till now Glad you like it so much! Of course I'll continue it, don't worry about that! silentsoliloquy82: Another marvelous update! It sounds like Voldemort and Hermione both have got themselves into quite the trouble, lol. I know Voldie will extricate himself from his predicament shortly and I would not want to be Lucius Malfoy when he finds out. In response to your other commentary, I am afraid I am not a new Voldemort/Hermione fan, but have been one for several years now. However, there were some stories I started reading several years ago and didn't get back to. Indeed they have, and you can see how they get out of it in the new chapter that is up! No one want to be Lucius Malfoy right now... Ah okay, well, I'm glad you are here again, enjoying the shipper!!!
Guest LadyMiya Posted September 3, 2011 Report Posted September 3, 2011 Review replies to chapter 19! m0nt: Loved it! Btw, I was formerly known as "Malfosys Bitch." Glad you did, and fun knew nickname! Atlantean_Diva: Hmm, I thought that was a fairy. It seems the fea don't want her to have another child. I wonder if there would be something wrong with this baby, and I'm still itching to know what they are up to with Althea. I appreciated reading about Hermione's thought process in regards to having an abortion. I have my own views, everyone does, but I think there are many women whose view might change if they actually had to make the decision.I hope Tom's personality has a bit more growth soon because unlike your other stories, the character seems to be changing at a much slower rate if not at all. I wonder if the Fairy's trying to convince Hermione to have an abortion will change his original view. Thanks so much for updating so quickly. I've been rereading your other stories, lol. I absolutely heart, The Contract." O yeah, around chapters 30 (ish) you mix up Hermione's age. She's nineteen about to turn twenty in chapter towards the end. I won't reveal anything about my plans for the next baby or Althea, so you'll just have to wait and see! And about abortion, that is probably how I would feel if I was ever put in that position, I think. But it is a really touchy subject with no right or wrong answers. Just different opinion after which moral compass or religious believes you got. Yeah, Tom is much slower to change here. I'm trying something new. He has changed a little; he does take into consideration what Hermione thinks about something, but that's of course still only for selfish reasons. But I think you'll see a bit more change in him in the next chapters. Oh, actually, I think I screwed up Hermione's age in the beginning of the story... I meant to go and check that, but I always forget. Will try to do it when I have updated this chapter. But if I forget, you are welcome to remind me again! Mari: Guh! I havent reviewed as I missed a few chapters, but all caught up now. I'm both happy that Hermione rescued herself and a little disappointed that Vold didnt get a chance to teach Malfoy a lesson. I'm not too surprised that she is pregnant again and I think that the Faeries dont want her to keep it because it will bond her and Voldemort too much and they can thwart whatever little plans they have for Althea if they arent distracted fighting against each other. Something about Voldemort and a newborn is almost cuter and funnier than him and Althea which I love in this story. Thank you for the more frequent updates! Well, it's always nice to hear from you so I'm glad you are reviewing now! And well, I thought it was time for Hermione to show that she can still do some things without Voldemort! There is still one Malfoy left, after all, so maybe Voldemort will get his hands on him, who knows? Yeah, with all the fucking they have done, I guess it's not too strange that she is pregnant again. As to your thoughts, I won't say yay or nay; you'll just have to wait and see what happens in the later chapters! AliceMyra Spencer: I find it highly amusing that Hermione was tricked into talking to someone she didn't even know. Was that person a fairy? Yeah, well, she did think it was a Healer, so it's not so strange that she talked to her. But you'll find out exactly what/who it was in later chapters! Alassea Malfoy: She's pregnant again!Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh! THAT WAS A FAIRY!!! Annoying beasts... seriously! IMPERIUS *make you continue the story* Yes, Hermione is pregnant! And well... hihihi, you'll find out what it's all about in later chapter. But I'm writing... or well, editing the story as we speak. Lots, and lots and lots of editing to do... oh, well. New chapter will be up right after I've finished this! mrequecky: Darn, that sounds really bad for Hermione... I mean, even Lucius didn't deserve such a bad treatment in Askaban and I guess the mind will get a little cracked up... Good thing, maybe Voldi gets into real trouble as well Yeah, no one deserves that kind of treatment, and it's not strange that he became mad but, oh, well. Now he is hopefully resting in peace with his darling wife!
TheLadyMiya Posted September 11, 2011 Author Report Posted September 11, 2011 Review replies to chapter 20. IrishPhantom: I love how caring Voldemort is in this chapter! It probably wont last long! Ive been dying for updates and I got 2! Nerys added another chappie of The Prisoner! Im re-reading Atlantis! I forgot how much I loved it! You are absolutely savage at writing! Dont finish Shared Flame any time soon even though Im dyin to find out whats going to happen! =] Haha, I don't know if he is caring or just possessive, but the nicer side of it will probalby not last long, no... Hahaha, and yeah, I was very happy to see Nerys' update as well! And thank you, I won't finish Shared Flame anytime soon. We are maaaaybe half-way through. Maybe... oh, well, glad you like it and I hope you'll enjoy the next! Atlantean_Diva: Tom is such a manipulative bastard, lol. I heart him. It will be interesting to watch him tie Hermione closer to him. I wonder what will happen if they fall in love, he F's up again, and she leaves him. I wonder if the last line of this chapter would still ring true. This story feels like it's going to be longer than your previous stories. I hope there's more angst to come between Mione and Tom. I also hope there's more Althea in the next chapter; I really love the character.Thanks for updating! Yeah, Tom is the definition of manipulative, I think. And you'll see some closer-tying in this coming chapter, so I hope you enjoy it! And yes, this story will be my longest. I'm not really done yet, but I've been writing over 400 pages. And there will be a little Althea in the next chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy that as well! Thanks for reviewing!! iheartskittles: LOL! She just has to spread her legs and think of England. That was awesome! Thanks for the update! Of course she does. I just couldn't resist making her think that And you are welcome! New update will come soon! AliceMyra Spencer: Hmm...I can understand how he'd rather kill her than see her with someone else, or simply out of his life. It seems like she's gotten under his skin to the point where he might go mad if he isn't able to have that power that they make together, along with having sex whenver he wants it lol Yeah, Voldemort is not leaving her any time soon... and I think you can call Hermione an addiction to him. And he is not the kind of addict to just ask for help and fight it. At least not if you look at his history. He seem to rejoice in his addictions. Meheheh. Alassea Malfoy: Wonderful chapter. Quite hilarious too xDTHey are bickering like an old married couple xD LOL Glad you enjoyed it! And yeah, they really are starting to act like an old married couple. I dread to see what they will be like if they become an old married couple! mrequecky: Oh, I love how Tom is so protective of Hermione I mean, I don't like uber jealousy, definitely not dangerous possessiveness, but this type of care is nice Haha, I think he is as possessive as you can get, actually. But that's just his cup of tea!
TheLadyMiya Posted September 18, 2011 Author Report Posted September 18, 2011 Review responses for chapter 21: m0nt: This line is so hilarious!Voldemort highly doubted the other man would be able to pour lava through the nostrils of another person, but he did make a mental note for himself. If he,for some reason, had to hurt Hermione, he would kill her parents as well. Not that he really believed two Muggles could harm him, but he’d rather be safe than sorry. Voldemort is so logical. lol. Glad you liked it! Voldemort is always logical IrishPhantom: My lucky day today! Ivory tower was updated aswell! =D Never seen the proposal comin! Of course Voldy has to see it as a way of showing the world he owns Hermione and to gain power! Poor Draco... *sniggers* I cant wait for the next update! Amazing story!!! =] Neither did Hermione see that proposal coming! And well... Voldemort does like to show people who he owns. He is like a dog with a lamp post! (Hides sentence from a certain Dark Lord). Oh Merlin! Prisoner was updated too! Ahhh! Its definetly my lucky day! =D I forgot to say, I cant wait for mini Voldy 2 to come! Or will it be a mini Herms? =3 Yees, Nerys is a good girl! Glad you like it, but it will be quite some time before we get to see if the children will turn out as Hermione or Voldemort! mekom: If that won't make Hermione want to abort the child, I don't know what else will. Voldemort really should have learned by now. (tsk tsk) I am curious how the fairies are going to act if they decide to keep the child. I look forward to the next update. Haha, actually, Hermione is glad that he wants to keep the child, because she is starting to realise that she wants as well. But of course she will be worried about what sort of plan Voldemort has with it... And you'll see how the fairies responses! AliceMyra Spencer: *shakes head while laughing* Now that he's got it in his mind to keep the kid I'm starting to wonder if he'll want to get her pregnant with a few more kids lol...I wonder if this one's a boy or girl hmmmmm.. Haha, well, I think he will be cured from his wish to have more children when he has been sleepless a few nights with this one! And I know what it's going to be, but I'm not telling Alassea Malfoy: AHAHAHA! Oh, he's such a tease! "Oh, and we are keeping the child" - wonderful line to throw after her. xD LOL Yes, Voldemort does like his teasing as much as he likes his killing and fucking XD And you'll see how Hermione responses to the quote in the next chapter!
TheLadyMiya Posted September 24, 2011 Author Report Posted September 24, 2011 Review replies for chapter 22 Laura: Wooo!!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!! This story is sooooo good!!! It's so cool that Hermione got pregnant again, and I think you write Voldemort's character so well!! He's still evil but its believable how he cares for Hermione. Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it so much. It's fun to have Hermione pregnant again. I've never written a story where she got pregnant twice. And I'm glad you like Voldemort, he is a tricky one, that's for sure Atlantean_Diva: Thanks for the Tom and Althea scene. Althea nodded and stood, stretching out her arms so he could wrap the towel around her. Voldemort smiled. She was so trusting. If he played his cards right, she would grow up to be the perfect little minion to him. *smh @ Tom. He is soooo wrong, lol. Hmm, I would love to know why Ginny's nervous around Tom. I wonder if it has anything to do with his soul sense a part of it did possess her at one point. It's almost as if she can sense who he is without literally knowing the truth. You are most welcome. They are very fun to write! And yes, I think Tom will be in for quite a surprise when Althea grows up... neither of her parents are a follower, after all. And about Ginny's nervousness... well, that are just something that will come up later! m0nt: Love! Yay! IrishPhantom: Haha! Voldy wants a big wedding?! Whats he up to? XD Just to let you know that theres two arounds in one sentence, in the part where Hermione gives out to Voldy for his bad language in front of Althea! Loved this chappie! Screw that, I friggen love this story! =D Yes, Voldemort is weird that way But you'll find out later what he is up to! Oh, must have missed that. Glad you are enjoying the story, though!!! AliceMyra Spencer: Nice. I enjoyed the chapter. Can't wait for the next one Glad you like it and the next one will be up now! Alassea Malfoy: *Snorts very unladylike* I found this chapter quite hilarious. I simply love the Parseltongue "chat" Althea and Tom have."“Can’t I be a male?” “With the right spells you could. But I suggest you try being female for a little while, okay?” “Is it more fun being female?” “I don’t know. I’ve never tried. “Why not?” Voldemort thought about it. “I haven’t had time to try.”" That was making me laugh so hard, I couldn't breath. Now I think I have missed something, but does Ginny have a suspicion as to who he is (a little nagging in the back of her head) or does she know who he is? She seems kinda tense around him. Well the whole pretending-to-love-thing is kinda sad. though neither seem to mind (of course Voldy wouldn't mind) xD Keep up the good work - Alassea I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! The Tom and Althea chats are among the funniest to write XD You can just take it anywhere you want. Children always asks so funny questions. Well, you didn't miss anything, but more about what Ginny may or may not suspect will become clearer in later chapters! Yeah, there are some parts of Hermione's and Voldemort's relationship that are just very sad. At least from Hermione's point of view. We'll see how she manage to deal with it later on! Thanks for reading and reviewing!! mrequecky: Oh my, loved! the characters are so intrigueing ;D I'm glad you are enjoying it! I find the characters very fun to write as well!
TheLadyMiya Posted October 5, 2011 Author Report Posted October 5, 2011 Review replies for chapter 23. m0nt: ooooh, she's having a boy! I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, no, they don't know what gender the child is, they just called it "he" because it was better than "it". Hope you'll like the next chapter! Atlantean_Diva: You had Ron down pat. lol@ Hemrione using Tom's money to buy his gift. The Althea/Hermione scene was really cute. It's always nice to read Hermione acting motherly. I think Althea is my favorite character in this story, not saying that I don't love the others, but you created something wonderful in her. She's a great example of how a child character should be written. Her character leaps off the page.Thanks for the update. Hehe, well, Hermione figures the real gift will be the "home-made" part she will put into his gift Yes, I thought it was about time Hermione acted a little motherly. She have started to do that a lot, but it just doesn't really show in the fic because I'm more interested in writing the smut.. Aw! Thank you, I'm glad you like Althea. I have had rather mixed feelings about her, but she can be rather fun sometimes. Wiiih! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Alassea Malfoy: Ron is jealous... no surprise there. And hahahah! I love when they argue xD<br /> Great chapter as always No, I think Ron will always have a soft spot for Hermione. But they are funny when they argue! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! sarahdaye9: Awww! Cute Voldie and Hermione happy time. Also liked the part with Hermione and her daughter. Ron's a jerk (the way I like him) but still probably a caring friend. Yes, they were very cute in the last chapter! And I just had to have a scene with Hermione and Althea just being cute and childish. Oh, Ron... dear old Ron. Don't know what to do with him... except I do. Because I've written it. MEHEHEHEHEHEH! mrequecky: Oh, I love how Tom deals with Althea most of the time, the setting of rules etc. and I totally loved the last scene between Mione and him Haha, yes, I think Tom is a rather strict father... but if Althea takes after him at all, that is not going to matter much! Glad you liked the final smut scene! I found it amusing too.
TheLadyMiya Posted October 15, 2011 Author Report Posted October 15, 2011 Review replies for chapter 24. Alassea Malfoy: Draco? Is that just an excuse? I am sure it was the fairies...Voldemort and Harry in the same room talking politely? DON'T MAKE ME LAUGH, I'M PISSING!!! xD Yes, Draco is just an excuse. Voldemort killed him very dead in chapter... er... 20? Something like that. Hihi, and I just couldn't resist giving Voldemort and Harry a one-on-one chat together. It's too much fun. So of course this won't be the last one m0nt: It seems obvious that the nurse, the dark haired girl in Ron's shop had been the "mind controller," and I have feeling that the person is none other than the pixie Morgan Le Fay. But then again I could be off target. I'm engjoying the plot development of this story, it is very well thought out. Well, the nurse is the mind controller, but the dark haired girl in the shop was just a customer! The mind controller got to him later. As to who it was... well, I will not say now. But it won't be too many more chapters until you find out! Glad you are enjoying the plot and all. Mari: Wow so much happens in your story! I find new and exciting ways to love Voldemort, his thoughts on how to manipulate everyone is classic. I wonder if he will realize when it comes to protecting Hermione and Althea (and even BabyV.2) that he loves them and that will give him the power to uncover and stop the attacks against him and Hermione having another child. I wonder what the shadow spirit has been telling Althea now. Always so wonderful to see an update, thank you for sharing with us! Thank you! I'm glad you like it. And yes, I try to have some different elements in the story. Well, I do think Voldemort realises that he cares for Hermione and the children quite a bit, but I think it's more for personal reasons than for some kind of weird nonsense like love (as he sees it). And well, you'll see more about Althea in the chapter after the next! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Atlantean_Diva: Another excellent chapter. I sure didn't see the fairy tampering with Ron in order to get to Hermione. I reeeaaalllly want to know why they want to kill this new baby. There has to be something special about him.You're Tom always makes me laugh when does something nice and then kills the moment with his 'rationalization.' LOL Why was my little Althea acting bratty? I have a feeling her 'friend' may have had something to do with it. I've been intrigued by his tale since chapter one and the feeling increases the more Hermione and Tom interact with others, especially Ginny, seeing as how she's afraid of Marcus. Thanks for updating! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! No, no one was meant to see anything... especially not Hermione and Voldemort, heheh. But they would really want to know who is after their baby. Yes, Tom-logic is a fine art. It's very amusing to write! I'm glad you like it. And well, Althea may just be in that age when kids are behaving like that... or it may be something else. Who knows. Glad you are enjoying the story! Thanks for reviewing.
TheLadyMiya Posted October 24, 2011 Author Report Posted October 24, 2011 Review replies for chapter 25: Alassea Malfoy: That was a very informative chapter. < I loved it very much, and the fact that Althea is beginning to be protective of Voldy is quite cute :-) Though, I think there is a little mistake. In one of the earlier chapters, when Tom and Hermione talked about Dumbledore's words on Soul Mates, Hermione said that she thought Grindelwald's wife was half-blood. "“I just remembered; Grindelwald’s wife was a Muggle-born like you.” [...] “But I read that Mrs Grindelwald was a half-blood.”" Here it says: "[...]It also explains why some notorious Muggle-haters have been with Muggle-borns. Like Grindelwald.” “What? I thought his wife was a pure-blood?" “Oh, it was easy enough to fake the right papers. But she was a Muggle-born and almost twenty years younger than him,” Voldemort stated." Had I not reread the story just yesterday, I wouldn't have been able to remember. Ah, yes, that's what happens when you edit. At first, I didn't have the Grindelwald-thing until chapter 25, but then, I added in into the chapter way back and forgot to remove it for chapter 25. But I've edit it now, thanks for pointing it out! Glad you like the story so much that you are rereading it! Here is something new for you to enjoy Atlantean_Diva: Interesting theory. I'm not sure how I feel about it, but I thought it was creative and I appreciate that you didn't try to let it explain the way all muggle borns are created. I wonder if soul mates and shared flames are different because earlier Ginny's description of her feeling about Harry were more than that of a crush. The way they were brought together was definitely more than a mutual attraction. hm...Tom cracks me up. I know I've said it several times but REALLY love the way you write him. Thanks for updating! Well, I think JK once said that Muggle-borns probably had some magical relative somewhere down the line, and this way, that is possible. I mean, of all the people being born in that area the same time Hermione was... why would his magic jump to her? I don't know yet if I'll add some explanation of this in a later chapter, or if I'll leave that part open, but you'll find out more about having a Shared Flame later one. And well, I think that Soul Mates is something else than Shared Flame, but this won't be very important for the story, so I'll see if I go into it. Haha, thank you! More Tom-goodness in the coming chapter, hope you like it!
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