RogueMudblood Posted February 20, 2011 Report Posted February 20, 2011 (edited) XO The Cards of Fate - squished line: "So I [linebreak]can be the first"; ch 2, 3 stretchy Femme Meng's Misfortune - tag needs to change from Minor to Minor1 Water mistress - Dom needs to be FemDom; Bond, BDSM, S&M seem redundant, as are F/F and Yuri; I would add D/s if you're going to keep all those others, but I think that aspect of the story is summed up with BDSM. Azula Bender - based on the complaints on the review board, I'm going to suggest adding Contro and Other to this one; obviously, the author doesn't feel it's rape. Training - citation city not sure what might be needed on Grooming and Melting Snow; no episodes named there for me to reference. (crosspost from staff forum) Edited March 9, 2011 by RogueMudblood Quote
RogueMudblood Posted February 25, 2011 Author Report Posted February 25, 2011 (edited) Het Zutara Love Scene - character disclaim Evening - character disclaim?; Minor needs to change to Minor2 The Healing Touch - needs tags, by god! FemDom, Humil, Bond Body Heat - please advise on disclaimer: "Bryke" is in fandom reference to "Bryan and Mike" - is this okay? Ill Met By Moonlight - disclaimer: profit Relaxing the Firelord wrodwrap not turned on, apparently. Not sure if this is RTE issue or not. Example: showering me with proverbial Maiko awesomeness, even if it's unintentional, or only to counter something like H.I.B.Y. In fact, this fic partially rose out just after the unveiling of the And continues thru the whole story Edited February 25, 2011 by RogueMudblood Quote
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