AccioLucius Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 Title: Nurse Me Author: AccioLucius Rating: Adult+ Summary: A young woman has been called upon to nurse Orochimaru and Kabuto back to health after a devastating battle. The snake lord takes an interest in his young nurse; she takes an interest in her snake tongued patient. Feedback: Very much needed and wanted. Nothing makes me happier than knowing someone is into my writing enough to critique it. Fandom: Naruto URL: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103331 Feed back is greatly appreciated. ~AccioLucius Excerpt: “You are stubborn,” he snarled at her. “I’ve had more difficult patients,” she replied with a grin. “You’re the first man to give me this much trouble, though.” Ignoring the pain in his arm, the lord pulled her towards him again. Her face fell directly in front of his. “Be glad I’m giving you a different kind of trouble.” His golden eyes drilled into her silver ones. “You don’t want that sort of attention from me.” Saya remained still in his grasp and stared back at him. She couldn’t help but let her eyes dance across the rest of his face, but his eyes were particularly enticing. He flashed a quick but full smile at her then, revealing his pointed canines. It wasn’t friendly, but sadistic. Humor crept into his eyes as he opened his mouth enough for his tongue to clear his teeth, and then smirked when he felt Saya tense as he slowly ran his tongue up her mouth. “Or do you?” he asked quietly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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