AccioLucius

Title: Nurse Me Author: AccioLucius Rating: Adult+ Summary: A young woman has been called upon to nurse Orochimaru and Kabuto back to health after a devastating battle. The snake lord takes an interest in his young nurse; she takes an interest in her snake tongued patient. Feedback: Very much needed and wanted. Nothing makes me happier than knowing someone is into my writing enough to critique it. Fandom: Naruto URL: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103331 Feed back is greatly appreciated. ~AccioLucius Excerpt: “You are stubborn,” he snarled at her. “I’ve had more difficult patients,” she replied with a grin. “You’re the first man to give me this much trouble, though.” Ignoring the pain in his arm, the lord pulled her towards him again. Her face fell directly in front of his. “Be glad I’m giving you a different kind of trouble.” His golden eyes drilled into her silver ones. “You don’t want that sort of attention from me.” Saya remained still in his grasp and stared back at him. She couldn’t help but let her eyes dance across the rest of his face, but his eyes were particularly enticing. He flashed a quick but full smile at her then, revealing his pointed canines. It wasn’t friendly, but sadistic. Humor crept into his eyes as he opened his mouth enough for his tongue to clear his teeth, and then smirked when he felt Saya tense as he slowly ran his tongue up her mouth. “Or do you?” he asked quietly.

Chapters 14-16 are up. Reviews are needed.

Chapters 8-13 now up. 13 just added today. Reviews are really appreciated.

Here are a few simple things I think would do wonders for the site: *Section for Author's Notes It's easy to look over these when they are stuck in with the chapters. *Reply to Reviews I'd like to be able to thank people for reviewing or answer questions without having to include replies in author notes to added chapters. *Favorite Stories and Authors So we can keep up and revist what we love. *Alerts So we can be notified of updates and new chapters of stories. Maybe also Author Alerts along with Story Alerts. That way we can be notified if our favorite authors have started a new story. *Advanced Text Entry I always copy and paste my updates into the text entry section when I upload new chapters. I would like to see something more advanced, so we don't have go back over our work and write coding into it.

Chapters 1-7 are posted.

Hi, I recently started a Danny Phontom FF. Vlad and an OC is the pairing. I'm developing it roughly as I go along, so feedback is greatly appreciated. This is my first adult fic. Title: Uncle Vlad Author: AccioLucius Rating: Adult+ Summary: The Fenton's eldest daughter Roslynne (OC) takes up residence with "Uncle" Vlad. What awaits her in time is not what she expected. Feedback: Very much needed and wanted. Nothing makes me happier than knowing someone is into my writing enough to critique it. Fandom: Danny Phantom URL: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600092879 Read and Reviews are greatly appreciated. I hope I can get to know a few other Vlad fans. ~AccioLucius. Except: Red eyes glowed down at her. She wanted to run, but her legs would not move. A pale figure came toward her and whispered into her ear. Its breath was icy against her neck, making her shiver. Roz consciously strained to hear what the figure was saying, but it was like it was not talking at all. The figure continued to linger around her neck. It put its hands on the sides of her shoulders. It was like ice was touching her bare skin. As she tried to pull away, the figure slowly ran its mouth up her neck to still her. She could now feel her body warming up and closed her eyes. After a moment the figure paused with its mouth resting on her neck. When it parted its lips it slowly and gently sunk its fangs into her neck. With a gasp she stood on her tiptoes and arched her back. The figure’s reaction was a quick clamping of its jaws deeper into her neck. Roz awoke with a gasp of both pleasure and pain. She quickly sat up and put a hand to her neck. There was no blood or wound, but she could swear there was a strange sensation. Her eyes darted around the room in panic. The dream was startling, but the disturbing part was that Roz realized that the figure seemed familiar. She knew she had seen it before. But where?