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Hi there,

I'm looking for a Beta for four or five stories in the Harry potter universe. All stories are on AFF and contain various objectionable content warnings.

I'm looking for primarily plot/characterisation feedback, but grammar would be a bonus. I am an english native speaker but these are firstfics for me and may be somewhat unpolished in terms of plot and character development (or not. It's difficult to tell. They feel clumsy to me)

Links to fics are as follows

Precious Mudblood

HG/multiple

WIP currently at Ch 67

Hermione awakens in a cell. The final battle is over. The light fell.

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600026396

That Which We Make For Ourselves

HP/TR, GG/TR

WIP currently at Ch 21

Harry accepts his fate and follows Voldemort into the Forbidden Forest to be killed.

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600026432

Captive Audience

HG/LV

WIP currently at Ch 6

Hermione is captured by Death Eaters before the trio can leave on the Horcrux hunt

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600026385

The First Horcrux

HG/TR, possible further pairings later.

WIP currently at Ch 6

To err is human. Tom Riddle paid for his mistake dearly..but perhaps he can leverage a bad situation to his own advantage...

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600026394

There is one further story not yet uploaded. It is a HG/LV with several other pairings.

I'd appreciate it if anyone who might be interested in beta-ing any of these stories (whether the already uploaded material or further chapters) could drop me a note and we can talk!

Cheers,

Magenta

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  • 2 weeks later...

Hiya!

I've been an avid follower of a few of your stories on AFF.net. I'd be more than happy to help you look over a few and polish them for the world to see. I'm no Stephen King but I think I've been force fed grammar enough (I'm a communications major) to give you some help.

If you are interested in talking with me more about betaing your stories, simply follow the link to my profile (koolgirl18). My email is there. I can't wait to hear from you!

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