pel Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 (edited) Hello! I'm looking for a beta for a short Brotherhood of the Wolf slash fic. Pairing is Mani/Thomas d'Apacher, with solo/voyeur Gregoire. No real warnings beyond anal/oral, voyeur. Rating is adult+. I'm really hoping to find someone who loves the movie as much as I do! I'm not as concerned about spelling and typos, (although any mistakes you find are of course appreciated!). I'm looking more for an over-all critique; tone and pacing, sentence structure, word repetition, and helping me get a handle on the cheese factor. Really, just... does it work? If you're interested you can send me a PM, or just reply! Hope to hear from you, and thanks in advance! Edited February 12, 2010 by pel Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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