Jaded_Star Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 (edited) Hi potential beta's! I've never actually had a beta before, not sure why, but I would love to have someone to bounce things off. I really need someone who can tell me if things make sense, or if they are too choppy. I'm open to constructive criticism regarding grammar or writing style. http://movies.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600093371 This is the in progress story I am looking for a Beta on, after the point posted I'm not too sure if what I have is cohesive enough. I also have a few others which I could really use a muse on. This story is pretty mild, just standard m/f sex, nothing too wild. If you're interested please e-mail me at Obisjadedjedi@aol.com I also have another story that is a continuation of something I started with a friend a long time ago. This portion of the story is 100% written by me, and I've decided it needs to branch out on its own. I need some help editing it, cutting things, adding a new character to replace my friends, and adding in Anakin, who in this version of the world wasn't there. This one has some more graphic moments, a lot of angst, rape, I hope I'm not missing anything. Even though this is a portion of a story, it is still way too long! It needs to be shortened and broken into two separate stories, so help on where to cut things would be greatly appreciated. Edited February 4, 2010 by Jaded_Star Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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