New Fic Summary

[CloverReef]

UPDATE :: I chose a summary now, thanks for your help!

Anyway, I started a fic. Really, my only question is about a fitting, appealing summary. I made two attempts at short summaries, but I'm not so sure I like them so I thought I'd bring it up on these forums. I'll give a little background about the story, and then show the summaries.

Pride [Fiction Title]

It's an M/M coming out story. I've always done characters that already knew they were gay and were already surrounded by people that accepted it - with the exception of a couple bashers - so this idea was a change of pace for me.

It's about a man named Kacey who's never really questioned his sexuality. He's got a bodacious girlfriend, a bunch of straight friends, an alpha-male, playboy dad, etc, etc. He starts university, and falls in love with an openly gay professor, and then the struggles with family, acceptance, and whatnot begin.

Summary:

1. Kacey has become jaded with his normal life and his perfect girlfriend. All he really enjoys are books. But when he meets his new, openly gay professor, he realises they may have more in common than he would like to admit...

2. Kacey's become Jaded with his perfect life and girlfriend. When he meets his gorgeous, openly gay prof, he begins to question who he thought he was.

Edited February 2, 2010 by CloverReef

[canterro]

I vote for 1

PS

Oh, I also have a story about, well, not Kacey, but Casey And he also has some serious troubles on his way to the truth

[CloverReef]

I vote for 1

PS

Oh, I also have a story about, well, not Kacey, but Casey And he also has some serious troubles on his way to the truth

Ohh Awesome! Which one is it? I'd like to check it out.

[canterro]

Ohh Awesome! Which one is it? I'd like to check it out.

I feel honored

I'd appreciate your comment, and I promise to give you a solid one in return

The link: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096300