wordord, possible minor, possible troll

[Mamacita]

TV / ANGEL / General p.11

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Ch 1 — • dafloofloor

• ts ars are

• demor.” [para] r.” [para] Before she

• he ghe guards

• blurut “ut “you’re

• over pikepike]

• tiontion back

• Hs tos to

• officem tim time

• himseor for

• Proves hn’t n’t

• whi whimper

• theakinaking

• bis biscuits

• “Youd?” [para] d?”

• hedy sdy so

• inevita”tal”talk”

• Scene 2: l’s l’s [those are Ls]

• gemegement

• detece moe mood

• esleesley:

• ond and about

• Lor”Me “Me

Ch 2 — • stag; Tg; To

• S [para] Scene 4:

• if itour our

• aorksorks his

Ch 3 — • fslowslowly in]...ar as

• somessure tre to

• ane one of

• or easteast

• ocnot not too

• riundeunder

• imingming

• arounrvourvously

• angri [para] H [para] Harmony:

• shtersters

• cesscessing

• Illyrllyria:

• Sike,ike,

• of the g” [para] “ [para] Angel:

• Angelh, yh, yeah

• tretureturn

• mit cit clear

• Wesleyhe dhe doesn’t

• WeslePerhPerhaps

• ovee toe top

• dropprecprecum

• to to pull

• preparinr thr the

• compcompliment

• swimmind cnd

• r shr she leaves

Ch 4 — • re-rts rts itself

• somep anp and

• llamplamps

• the the problem

• gettingrterrter

• touchdisbdisbelief

• mg thg the

• to be her [para] D [para] Deth: “Came

• ally lly move

• not not knowing

• neve her her

• ring ing the

• formsich ich

Ch 5 — • hair,n’t n’t it?

• nowsnows

• honestly] “n’t.n’t.”

• ues ues with• thig abg about

• arecerncerned

• enatination

• kill vams. [para] s. [para] They go

• Iginegine

• dicertcertingly

• Ycertcertainly

• ideridering

• Hends nds there

• stopby hby her

• fromearbearby

• glaSpikSpike

• havea baa bar

• fee of of pride

• mifindfind

• dot fot for

• meaeforefore

• to fthe the

• actualeus eus or

• ke tke tries

• tng the edges

• sing ing mix

• Time ps les

• ba bia bit coy

• lot cof cocky

• theas aas a

• really goin dra draw

• hlicklicking

• spreadr ler legs

• touchouch ... thr Thi This

• theirstnestness

• tok hik his

• tdrawdraw

• figura pre present

• erfuerfully

• iose ose

• eatherther

• movemenywheywhere

• Gohe’dhe’d do

• She s hes herself

• eflutflutter

• unshe she

• legslegs and

• to kW&H W&H

• conted ted

• muc a p a phone

Ch 6 — • havee soe something

• Spi”Tha”That’s

• gibbh sph

• bed forit. it.

• hongueongue

• her her head

• motipullpulls

• ignoer fer first

• sonayinaying

• bor body

• roppeappears

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—author profile states “i’ve had to reregister as the web site is denying me access to my original user profile”. i’m wondering if it was because she was a minor and if this was one of the stories she wrote as a minor. might be worth checking.

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The beads of jupiter 25779

—okay. i’ve looked at all of the author’s other stories and they are all very similar to this one, with the exception that the on NOT in the buffy fandom (star wars) got GOOD reviews, and mostly the buffy ones, esp. this one, got flamed up the ying-yang. and rightfully so. makes me wonder if this person’s a troll...deliberately wasting everyone’s time and not having any actual interest in the fandom(s) or the stories. hmmm. really. the writing is worse than goolecap’s, and i’ve wondered about him for a long time.