wordord

[Mamacita]

/GlitchesANGEL.doc TV / ANGEL / General p.15

Hell is in the details 24443

Ch 1 — • pief trf trash

• &nbso:p>o:p>

• wopasspass

• liuslius

Ch 2 — • to to damage

Ch 3 — • si va vampire

• beaut, pr, pretty

• demon’s s was was

• doing,tty tty boy

• cla clas=MsoNormal>”Here it

• heled led

Ch 4 — • thoughleetleeting

Ch 5 — • puream eam

• Anfeltfelt

• throwoff off

Ch 6 — • dovetawithwith

• if of uof us

• >&nb>

• it off ne one of

• bindinnd hnd harness

Ch 7 — • lasslass=MsoNormal>

• clasclass=MsoNormal>

• bloopikepike

• n cln class=GramE>”Almost

• ovn hin his

Ch 8 — • bacn thn the

• in hims tms those

• Nothto sto see

Ch 9 — • never gon>gonna

• kingking out

• heaved a put sig sigh

• nottwittwitchy

• pof hof her

Ch 11 — • honsionsigned

• wavenovenous

• reerinering in

• runningy, by, but

• just nee cra crawl

• llE>Ramone (those are lower-case L’s)

• shoulders> >

—right after “What’s the what with little Miss Buffy Summers?” suddenly the rest of this chapter indents. i don’t see any code visible and onscreen it looks fine, just not in word. not sure why, maybe not worth worrying about. if you see any coded indent instruction there you might want to take it out, up to you.

Ch 12 — • an <i>inkling</i> [not sure why this code is showing]

• “n’t n’t suppose

Ch 13 — • chainand and

• belt ador wit with

• Nn> Nothing

• o:p>

• sky.an>And

Ch 14 — • slowlyas as not

• give itme gme good

• clasclass=MsoPlainText>”I was

• [last line of chapter] p;

Ch 15 — • heBut,But,

• pI diI didn’t

• p clp class=MsoPlainText>

• hrms rms and

• ourr frr from

• of ove overly

• thet dat day

• Lost m’fangs ft

Ch 16 — • yoo:p>o:p>

• sense tyletyle

• stray eetseets

• weiit’sit’s

Ch 17 — • Go sitwn, wn,

• would tak take the

• theittlettle

• as she rante: “Y: “You

Ch 18 — • dt het he

• the th his his

• and and practices

• pan>

• HHhhHow

• VampVampire

• heondiondie

Ch 19 — • where Fred’s section starts, the rest of the chapter is in bold. only the names of the various POVs should be in bold, the body of text between should not be bold.

• /p>

• rescue.oursours

Ch 20 — • ext>There had to

Ch 21 — • Spike’srgy rgy

• kilmethmething

• convoluas ias it

• vampirefracfractory

• foem aem all

• Spi and and

• Spgetsgets

• tosectsect

• thannd ond on

• holding out her wr [cuts off]

• balcauscausing

• rwarrwards

• wiggins.”> >

• Hol>Holding

• Thefereference

• Danteess ess

Ch 22 — • ryonryone

• demonnstenstead

• cla class=MsoNormal>

• to him is of no [cuts off]

—at this point the word “no” where it cuts off is in italics, should not be. the remaining text in this chapter is in italics. it should not be. also the rest is bold. it should not be. only the paragraphs beginning “That is sufficient” should be in bold.

Ch 23 — • first paragraph is in italics, should be bold but not italicized

• ped. ed. We

• n cn class=SpellE>Pret

— in para beginning “The issue before the court”, the tags are showing for italics around the word “not”. remove them, i guess?

• wweigweigh

• won’low low

Ch 24 — • &>

• “Oiity>

• workr usr us both

War over wolfram & hart 19599

—after zipping through this very short, very worthless story i have to wonder if the author is a minor. might be worth a quick check. author URL is http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/authors.php?no=3771 . possible that they are just mindlessly boring, like the story, and have the attention span of a flea (like the story) and are on some personal mission to get as many sex scenes into as small a space as humanly possible with absolutely no description, just zip zap, in out, on to the next scene. and they are extremely specific about numbers—sizes of everyone’s cock, how many minutes things take, etc.—which is a classic sign of a young writer (they think it adds authenticity). but really, my daugher can write better than this. and she’s not much more than a teenybopper. i would almost say the author is a troll except i don’t think there’s that much thought behind what they’re writing.

Menu 1 — • thof pof powerful

Menu 2 — • be ed aed and

• pdresdress

Menu 3 — • gainitaretares

Menu 4 — • rour our balls

Menu 5 — • hado goo gone

Menu 9 — • Evuck uck her

Menu 10 — • rep Spi Spike

• theckedcked

• was treato a o a

• doordoor

—wow! who knew lindsay had a 12-incher!!! >snicker<